Balls. Damn creative duty....hehe duty
Oh yeah, I liked your RP, but I think the reason Kermit and I ended up winning (though I could be completely wrong about this) is we picked a team/person to focus our main theme on and made it a good portion of the RP. While the other teams were mentioned, since A. Amber and Young Justice already have history and B. she along with Califa were the champions, it made sense to structure our RP's focus/theme around them rather than a larger goal.
I understood the larger goal aspect of your RP, but the way I saw it (and wrote it) is you can't achieve those larger goals if you put the cart in front of the horse, which is kinda what I felt you did by leaving talk of your opponents and the match for last and in only two paragraphs. By no means do I think you should have spent the entire RP bullet pointing everyone individually, but I definitely feel there needed to be far more emphasis on a fairly well hyped match.
Glad you liked the feedback. If I can make the request, can you start your feedback for me on this roulette round RP? This is my first RP for a roulette round and I feel like I kinda tanked it.
Ya'll channeling your inner 'boss of Westeros'
Real life comes first though. Will you still be RP'ing this cycle?
