GCBs FEEDBACK
WWE JUDGEMENT DAY
Right Mr. Icon, time to feedback to you on the Judgement Day I scored worst on the predictions so it is fair to say I probably disagreed with your chosen results; however, Ive read the matches so I get an idea of how and why you decided to go with the results you did. Ill get the praise out of the way now. As I said to Workhorse, you dont want to constantly hear me telling you how great it was. It was a good, solid PPV and I enjoyed it a lot, you can still improve it and hopefully my input here can help you to make the next PPV even better!
Formatting, Presentation and Basics:
I have to say that I like the way you present your show, it is simple and clear and not too cluttered it makes it nice and easy to read and understand. Im not a fan of your choice of colour with the yellow-orange text but thats just a little thing. You use bold and alignment well and your matches are written in a way that makes it detailed enough without being overbearing. Not much more to say on that, youre doing a good job with it. On with the action ...
A nice video package to start the night and then we move onto the first match which will be for the
US Championship Jinder Mahal defending against Dolph Ziggler, Sin Cara and Daniel Bryan. Tall order for the new champion here but I suspect that you are building him up more than he has been in real life and he has just won the title recently. You made the right decision as well, Jinder wins and retains the title. By going the anti-American route with him, being US Champion should be entertaining and Mahal should become a good heel rather than the lame one he is in real life. Good start to the show.
Didnt particularly feel the Jericho promo, maybe you need to watch some Jericho clips on YouTube. I felt he said too much Jericho is slow and methodical and as a result he doesnt say much but what he does say means something. I think Jericho wouldnt have been interested in Bret Hart being on Triple Hs side, hed have been much more arrogant about the situation. Edge chatting up Maryse and an awkward moment when Lita arrives hes had Lita and now hes after Maryse, this guy is on a real roll, lucky sod. Anyway, its all a cue for Christian to come in and declare that his dream will come true tonight. Hmmm. Not liking the plucky dreamer getting his big wish at Judgement Day story. Ive got a feeling that this promo here says that Christian could well win the title tonight and were heading for Edge vs. Christian yet again on BT. Take some advice if you decide to try Edge vs. Christian down the line, it better be good because it has been done so often it makes my eyes hurt.
Randy Orton vs. Cody Rhodes is next and just like the last match I think that the underdog needs the win so thats my prediction. Rhodes is coming off a big win at WrestleMania over Mysterio and he needs to continue the momentum as you take him to the top. OK, the match is a good one, good work with Rhodes mask there at the end, Orton manages to swerve everyone and uses the mask to distract Rhodes for the RKO to win. The lack of a clean finish says this will continue and I urge you to make Cody look stellar in this feud. He doesnt have to win the last one but have him win sometime over Orton and make him a top guy on SMACKDOWN. Next up is Trish Stratus and Candice Michelle here Trish is face yes? Some heelish comments there. Is Candice heel? Bit confusing the Divas Championship match should be cool though. Id have gone with Trish and Kharma and left Candice out but Ill see how it goes. Now, Kane attacks Gabriel and wants to know WHERE IS HE? intriguing! Who is Kane talking about and why would Gabriel know? Slater sounds like a little girl at the end Please, please leave him alone, Kane, or else Ill skweam and skweam and skweam until I make myself sick!
Tag Team Titles on the line now, Broskis and Usos which seems a little ... dull. I like the Broskis and the 6-0 streak thing but the Usos were never a credible threat to them. As expected, the Broskis win and it seemed a little lacklustre. You need to really shake up that Tag Team division to ensure youre not relying on the likes of the Usos IMO. Stephanie and Barrett confrontation, Barrett wants tomorrow night off because he is scared of Big Show. Bless him. Not liking the Michael Cooper thing there, fining them both? $50000 fine for Barrett for asking Steph to bend the rules? Harsh. This was a PPV and you had an encounter on here that didnt need to be on the PPV (unless something happens later on) as it is just to hype up RAW not what a PPV should be about. That could have happened early on RAW tomorrow night rather than taking up room on the PPV.
Miz and Sheamus are two great guys, two great heels and two great microphone talkers. However, a promo with them slating each other is a bit wrong. Miz and Sheamus have no business insulting each other, theyre both heels. Get the faces involved. Also, the comment from Miz about Sheamus mentor (not named but we know its Triple H) a bit too marky for me. Not needed. Right, time for
Triple H vs. Jericho, No Holds Barred and this should be a humdinger. What a great match that was and what a surprise at the end there, Bret Hart turns on Triple H. You had me fooled. It explains a lot about Jerichos promo earlier on. Good work, good swerve there. Best match so far by a country mile, my friend. Punk gives the WWE Champion John Morrison some grief and promises to come for him afterwards CM Punk vs. John Morrison could be fun and youre sowing some seeds. Im not sure if theyre red herrings or not but always good to make the reader consider your next move. The good luck and bye comment at the end though for Morrison was a bit of a lame finish. The interview with Punk that followed was well written, I can hear Punk saying those words in my head. Well done, he isnt easy to write for.
The Saturday Night Verdict my verdict is that it was a good idea but I didnt really think it helped move any stories on so I wouldnt have wasted my time. Maybe you could get feuding guys on it next time rather than legends? I cant see Austin being nice about the guys like he was and discussing their chances in so much detail, it doesnt fit his persona. Jury out on that one.
Divas Championship time and it will be
Trish Stratus, the champion, Candice and the certainly not pregnant Kharma tonight. Good, solid Divas match but the ending was wrong for me (a) Why didnt the referee disqualify Trish for using the belt? And (b) Why was the face Trish using the belt like that in the first place? Very confusing match ending. Cody not happy with the outcome of the Orton match, rematch on SMACKDOWN. Michael Cooper again, now he isnt happy with Teddy Long. Is he trying to sack both his General Managers? Hes coming across as a real p**** at the moment (no offence meant) ...
Miz and Morrison for the WWE Championship I reckon Miz should win this match every time because he is far superior to JoMo in every aspect BUT I think Morrison winning the title only recently means that he will win it and get a big win to validate him as champion. And he does. Nice, solid win and a well written match yet again. Your match writing is excellent, its so clear and the detail is spot on. Santino and Kozlovs party can I ask what the point of it was? Again, you seemed to be hyping up the following RAW rather than making the PPV better. My biggest criticism of this too much focus on TV shows, PPVs shouldnt be about advertising TV! Nice exchange between the Broskis and Cena there though, sets the scene for the Punk-Cena match well. That belonged on the PPV!
World Championship time, Edge is champion, Sheamus and Undertaker are in the match but the winner will be Christian (I think) youre going to do Edge and Christian by the looks of it. And Im right. OK, heres where you could have gotten rid of the unnecessary promos and used the time better. You only gave the Edge and Christian side of things in the build up through the night. Sheamus argued with Miz, Taker not seen. It made it obvious that either (a) Christian won or (b) Edge would win and do the dirty on Christian. Sheamus and Taker were never ever going to win this, it was clear. Excellent match, again, as expected it is Christian who wins and achieves his dream. Like I said earlier, be careful with Edge vs. Christian in the rematch it will get boring if it just like every other version.
More heel vs. heel arguments with Del Rio and Drew. All to set up Drew McIntyre forsaking a million Euros (why would he do that?) and going for the IC Title on RAW instead. More hype for RAW on the PPV not needed! Del Rio was badly written here, you didnt get him right at all, mate. He needs more broken Spanglish, youve got him speaking as if he is an English linguist at times! Small thing as well but $50000 fine for Barrett, $25000 fine for Steph, 1 million Euros for Drew? The numbers are exaggerated too much. Id avoid stating the monetary amounts if I was you! Good interview with Jinder Mahal (although it should have waited for TV next week does nothing to forward tonights storylines) and he is insulting the USA now, good move.
Main event time, Cena vs. Punk who is the best in the world? Well, not Cena, as he told us earlier but he is intent on proving Punk isnt as well. Hmmm. You highlighted this match as being about the title Best in the World but Cena earlier says that he isnt the best in the world anyway. Follow it up, make Cena believe he is or just make the match about Cena proving that Punk isnt. Great match, another stunner and it is John Cena who wins it I didnt think he would to be honest. Like the touch with Cena and the t-shirt afterwards but I agree with Theo that it was a bit heelish he could have just held it up and laughed at it or handed it back to Punk to make his point.
Great PPV, better than last time. Still room for improvement particularly around the promos selecting the right types of promos and using them correctly and at the right time is a big one and some of them (Del Rio in particular) were off and Id suggest watching some YT clips. However, the matches were excellent, there are lots of routes you can go from here with the storylines and I look forward to reading your next batch of TV and PPV.
Well done mate,
GCB