ARMANDO PARADYSE -
PRO - There is a noticeable growth in the character, since forming this team, and you worked with that well here. You also addressed the match with Matt, and his history, and how this is a huge match for you, which I think always helps.
CON - This was a good RP, but it seemed like a rough draft. It was a little short, and there were parts where you got lazy. Things like "some random game on his phone" and "I beat my new game". You could use these spots as plot devices to flesh out the minor details. And your description was fine, but it felt like description more than storytelling.
MATT TASTIC -
PRO - This might be the best Tastic RP I've read. The description is great, and you started with a very different tone than we've grown used to. The end was pure Tastic, and it was a lot better than it would have been without the opening. Also, you teased the Mikey v Tastic match really well, while Mikey avoided it.
CON - The font and text color were a little hard on the eyes, but that's minor.
GARTH BLACK -
PRO - I'm really digging these shoots by Garth, and you nailed this one as well. This is the first I can personally remember seeing the Power Rankings mentioned, and you used it to perfection. This budding rivalry with Abel will be fun to see once it really takes off (PPV, gimmick match, etc).
CON - There's not much I can point to here. I'd say lack of description, except I love the promo aspect of it.
ABEL HUNNICUTT -
PRO - This was an interesting non-promo promo. Holmes, like his rep, is a great talker, and it translated well in this format. You managed to cover everything you needed to cover, and progressed the rivalry with Garth Black.
CON - This is not really a CON for this round, but a CON overall, and that is that this is not nearly as good as a typical Abel RP. I am a fan of the monster, and his working relationship with Holmes, and the supershow would have been a great place to see it take another step.
EVE TAYLOR -
PRO - Another solid RP, especially with your description. There's a lot going on in Eve's world right now, and you covered all the bases. It's also nice to see less and less Leon this round, and interesting to peel the curtain back and see some behind-the-scenes friendships. Also, I don't have any knowledge of Aubrey, other than her being a character in the fed, so I'm intrigued to see what you have in store for KC. Eve is one of my favorites in the fed, and I hope you keep it up, because a feud with Eve is one of my long term goals with Doe.
CON - This seems to be a running thing this round, but I can't really think of any.
FLEX MUSSEL -
PRO - It was awesome to see the mean streak in Flex show through, while still moving him towards being a face. I also love your use of Everest, as he's a very old school character where it can hurt you if you misuse him. The split of Cerberus is probably the biggest storyline going on right now, and you did a good job of furthering it without ignoring the current match.
CON - The transitions were a little weak. They kind of reminded me of Spongebob. It's minor, but it felt worth pointing out.