Skairipa Matrix
3 Time Elite Openweight Champion
It was nice being Elite champion while it lasted. Pretty sure Killjoy kicked my ass with that fantastic rp.
WZCW Discussion Thread
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Richard Blonoff
Make America Rassle Again
I wouldn't be so sure. You both had some very good RPs story wise. You did a fantastic job of using the ban Mayhem story as well as addressing the potential stipulations and Callie's sister coming back in the way she did was well done. KJ wrote a very fun piece, but when I read it two things stood out to me as potential marks against. The 30 for 30 style documentary is a great idea, but doing it just a week after the Flair doc hurts it a bit in the originality department, and he had a lot of spelling and grammar errors that hurt the flow when I read it. I have a feeling it will be close, and even if you lose you wrote what may have been your best RP ever. Just make sure to build on this RP going forward and you will still be gucci.
Skairipa Matrix
3 Time Elite Openweight Champion
Thank you, I always appreciate your words of encouragement. I do feel like my RP was good but I feel like everybody has a bit of bias towards their own work so I'm glad to hear it from someone else. This wasn't really a return for Gabi, I've used her as a regular NPC since Jam left. This was probably the first time I showed her recovered from injury though.
Richard Blonoff
Make America Rassle Again
I really do enjoy your work with Clark. I remember when the idea was pitched I was convinced that it would fizzle out, especially as we were ready to pull the plug on the tag division just as you two submitted the apps. I like when guys prove me wrong though, and your work with her just keeps getting more and more consistent, and rarely do I read your RPs and dislike them. She has original qualities to her, she stands out as a fairly unique fed character, but I also get a bit of an evil Alexa vibe from her that helps make her feel familiar and easy to relate to. So long as you don't give her a pet pig and name it Larry Steve, I think your balance will continue to be great. One thing you do well is making her feel like an actual female. I think Spidey said something about it back in the day when he first started writing Batti, but being a male and writing a female character isn't easy because you tend to rely on female stereotypes and cliches. You do a good job of avoiding most of those pitfalls. When I was writing Eve during the romance with Mikey, it was probably the most difficult character I've ever written for, because I have no grasp on being female. I won't go into how bad I know in retrospect I screwed Eve up, but I felt completely lost when trying to write her most of the time. Aside from the early RPs, I rarely feel like I'm reading a guy writing as a chick, I just feel like I'm reading something from a girl's perspective. I was and still am a big fan of feeling immersed in RPs, and Callie does that for me.
I've been meaning to try to give my thoughts on RPs lately, but I always disliked the way feedback is usually given, it often boils down to "this was good, this was bad, but it was a good RP and you might win." I want to try to be more original in my feedback.
Viola Moonlight
I'm Literally Just Here for WZCW
Da Prophet
Mid-Card Championship Winner
I think the Eve/Mikey angle worked out perfectly. We got the most successful World Champ since Showtime held the belt out of it.
Just happened to not be either Eve or Mikey.
Just happened to not be either Eve or Mikey.
Hyorinmaru
Sit Upon The Frozen Heavens
This makes me a happy person
Richard Blonoff
Make America Rassle Again
Richard Blonoff
Make America Rassle Again
I did a thing. I've been meaning to do something like this for a little while, but here are my honest and unfiltered thoughts on the RPs this round.
http://forums.wrestlezone.com/showthread.php?p=5764487#post5764487
http://forums.wrestlezone.com/showthread.php?p=5764487#post5764487
Hyorinmaru
Sit Upon The Frozen Heavens
Awesomesauce
Jeff Deliverer of Mail
Money for nothin, chicks for free
That was awesome Yaz, great work man.
Dmbfantomas
Bald Billy was Better
Thank you for the feedback. I'll work harder and do better next time.
Thank you God Emperor Yaz.
Jeff Deliverer of Mail
Money for nothin, chicks for free
Ya Yaz, can't let Mark Keaton run around saying he put Stormrage on the shelf forever. 
Agreed. That was really cool of you to do, Yaz! 
Bernkastel
Reaper of Miracles
Christ, Dana Brooke just cut a better promo than Jason Jordan :/
It's not hard to cut a better promo than Jason Jordan. Plus Dana Brooke is underrated. Was that supposed to go in the LD thread?
Bernkastel
Reaper of Miracles
It's not hard to cut a better promo than Jason Jordan. Plus Dana Brooke is underrated. Was that supposed to go in the LD thread?
Yeah, but I'm posting from my phone. It's a pain to edit stuff.
Don't forget to get those predictions in for this round's predictions contest. We need at least one more.
Yeah it sure can be.
Yeah it sure can be.
Jeff Deliverer of Mail
Money for nothin, chicks for free
Predict your ass off.
Hyorinmaru
Sit Upon The Frozen Heavens
I'll get some in later
