WZCW Application Thread *CLOSED*

[DekuNinja]

I Really Nerveous makeing this now and thats kinda funny because thats the exact opposite of my guy so heres go

Real Name:Jon Spencer
Wrestlers NameJ Sulivan
Wrestlers Nickname:Science Fiction






Height:5;10
Weight:201
Hometown:Skiatook OK
Billed From:Tusla OK
Appearance:cacuasun light skined
-----------Hair color/length:burrnet short
-----------Eye color:blue
-----------Facial Hair:none
-----------Ring Attire:long black tights with a Red Alchemy Circle (color changes in different matches) on both sides an alchemy circle is this http://photobucket.com/mediadetail/...mi.jpg&searchTerm=alchemy circle&pageOffset=1
-----------Backstage Attire:same but with a black lab coat with an Alchemy Circle on the back
-----------Physical Features:has eye classes but takes them off before a match and a lab coat also not in ring
-----------Tattoos:none
Gimmick:A wrestler and part time scienctist who practices the forbidden science of alchemy who is tired of people disrepecting science as a whole

Strength/Weakness:Stengths High Flying Hardcore and And Very Very Brutal
weaknesses not that good in stength yet to find allies and hes way over himself
Alignment:Heel although some face moments

Trained By:unknown
Sample Pic of Wrestler

Brief History:a bulled kid growing up was picked and beat up for his love of science he was kinda those anime video game nerd like kids growing up just like any bullied kid he never had the guts to tell his parents (btw hs a only child) but one day being beat up by bullies again his mom actually showed up during the fight however the bullies noticed and decied to add insult to injury by beating up his mom real badly she was in the hospital for a week she lived but it still didnt go well for poor pj he was shocked so bad that for 2 weeks he didnt talk didnt eat (much) he didnt even cry he was that shocked when 2 weeks passed the same bullies who were suspended finally decied to finish the job so during a recess period the showed up looking for him the second one of then layed a hand on him almost imeditly he did a drop toe hold on that person with lighting speed and koed the guy if there was one thing he loved just as much as his other nerdy stuff it was wrestling he really studied it alot the others looking at hm in shock
looking at the others with a dead face he simply walked away. almost by a miricle the school didnt notice a few days later he went to his favorite libray and found his favorite book some book about alchemy why cause this was the
day he tried the procedure so that night he tried the full procedure and it worked it wasnt a myth to him anymore eventuly when he gratued college he started training for wrestling using the memory of his moms beatdown gives him a very high flying but very brutal style

Title History:most wins by KO by a indie wrestler
Entrance Music:Breaking Benjamin Follow

Entrance description:the lighting is red then changes to purple every 1.5 seconds he comes out after the first lyrics the entrance ramp is normal ring entrance is over the ropes jumping rings his in ring is he gos to to the turnbuckle and does his taunt which is christopher daniels triple x taunt execpt with for fingers and his thumbs are touching
Finishers Double Helix(cross armed brainbuster) Chemical Explosion (Modified Sprial Tap does 180 not 360)
15 Most used moves:
elbow smash
reverse ddt (regular version not christians version)
leg larait (he hits them with his kneecap ant his leg)
Crossface Chickenwing
half boston crab
moonsalt
sideways corkscrew plancha to the outside
enzurgi
spining heel kick
knee drop
buffalo sleeper
running claf kick
calk kick from the top rope
spining back fist
facebuster (kinda like the sean walman x factor but in reverse like the edge o matic)

Sample RP:We see PJ in a lab room in a lab coat drawing a alchemy circle on the ground sitting down

PJ: ah alchemy the science of rearanging matter into another form you know alchemy was thought to be a myth but i proved them wrong i proved everybody wrong now i know what your thinking im just a nerd that will never grow up

he finished drawing the circle and starts putting metal shaving on the circle

PJ: well guess what your just one of those idiots that dont care about the foundation of the world those idiots that dont know how a car works one of the idiots that think santa claus is real one of the idiots that think that playing the jaws theme makes you get attacked by sharks one of those idiots that think that theres a anthropamorphic sponge living in a pineapple under the sea

he finishes placeing the shavings

PJ: well guess what its time to go back to school Im Science Fiction PJ Sulivan
and im comming to. you know what ill let alchemy explain that

he slams both hands on the alchemy circle the circle glow very bright for 7 seconds and in the circle is a metal bar that says im coming to WZCW

PJ: read the damn discription idiots

 

[The Enforcer]

a0= accepted, (however who would you like to be your character rep? We will post the picture for you)

Reaper= Accepted

Deku= Let me speak with Sincade, but I didnt notice any issues. However you "may" need to change the camel clutch, I am not sure if Hasheem is using it and if he will mind if you use it as well

 

[DekuNinja]

a0= accepted, (however who would you like to be your character rep? We will post the picture for you)

Reaper= Accepted

Deku= Let me speak with Sincade, but I didnt notice any issues. However you "may" need to change the camel clutch, I am not sure if Hasheem is using it and if he will mind if you use it as well

ok ill charnge that

 

[a0161613]

a0= accepted, (however who would you like to be your character rep? We will post the picture for you)

Enforcer, if you can find a pic of Rey Mysterio, with a matching mask and top on, this is how i pictured him.

I dont know if this helps but he was on the cover of a UK wrestling mag called Power Slam. This is the image that ideally would be used. If you can only find a headshot of him in a blue or black mask, i would not mind at all.

 

[TNAfan121]

Real Name:Scott Schmidt
Wrestlers Name: John Frost
Wrestlers Nickname:The Iceman
Height:6'7
hWeight:303
Hometown:Green Bay Wisconsin
Billed From:Toronto Canada
Appearance:
-----------Hair color/length:Short Blonde hair
-----------Eye color:Blue
-----------Facial Hair:None
-----------Ring Attire:MMA shorts and gloves
-----------Backstage Attire:T-shirt And jeans
-----------Physical Features:
-----------Tattoosragon on his left arm
Gimmick:MMA fighter
Strength/Weakness:Strength: Ground and pound Weakness brawling
Alignment:Heel
Trained By:Ken Shamrock
Sample Pic of Wrestler:http://www.fcfighter.com/PICTURES/OTHERPIX/ufc52-sobral.jpg[IMG]
Brief History:Was an MMA fighter for many years before an injury forced him to retire.
Title History:none
Entrance Music:Electric Rodeo- Shooter Jennings
Entrance description:Basic walk down to the ring
Finishers:Go to sleep
15 Most used moves:
Anklelock
Bodyslam
Powerslam
Triangle Choke
Suplex
German Suplex
Kick to the head
Backbreaker
Powerbomb
Clothesline
Big Boot
Chokeslam
Back body drop
DDT
Dragon sleeper


Sample RP:
Todd Grisham:We have a new superstar here on Smackdown! john fre....
John Frost:*grabs mic* yeah i'm new but i can beat anybody on this roster and i can do it in under 5 minutes.
JG:Lets talk about your first opponent HBK.
JF:That washed up loser. he cant even kick out of a paper back he...
HBK:*Superkicks John Frost*
*camera cuts to the ring*

 

[The Enforcer]

Edit your moves, some of them are finishers

 

[Uncle Phatso]

sup yahall this is my second application hopefully its better

Real Name: Alex Bowen
Wrestlers Name: Alex Bowen
Wrestlers Nickname: anything really juggalo related
Height: 6’3
Weight: 252
Hometown: Montpelier, Ohio
Billed From: Detroit Michigan
Appearance:
-----------Hair color: red black and brown
-----------Eye color: brown
-----------Facial Hair: none
-----------Ring Attire: face paint icp jersey and a pair of wrestling pants that are orange and black with a hatchet man in orange in black yin and yang style and black boots
-----------Backstage Attire: jeans or shorts with a psychopathic records related shirt or a jersey
-----------Physical Features: scars from barbed wire baseball bats and different scars
-----------Tattoos: a hatchet man blue orange and yellow on right shoulder a bracelet that says juggalo on the top and bottom of his wrists with a small hatchet man on the sides barbed wire wrapping around his right leg and a tattoo on the left shoulder blade of a eagle with a beating heart in its mouth with mom and dad in it and his 2 daughters names below the heart Jamie and Annie
Gimmick: juggalo fun loving hardcore in the ring likes to rap and isn’t afraid to do it against fans or wrestlers like john cena
Strength: 1 hardcore matches are his specialty 2 good with both Arial and ground attacks
Weakness: if you want a injury go for his shoulder he has a metal plate in it and he’s had 3 surgeries in the last 4 years on it 2 get impatient if the ref’s don’t count fast enough and sometimes snaps and get’s dq’ed
Alignment: face
Trained By: shaggy 2 dope violent j and sabu
Sample Pic of Wrestler:

Brief History: been in the business for almost 10 years now a numerous time winner of different titles in jcw was recently fired dew to the 3rd shoulder surgery in 4 years
Title History: jcw hardcore champ 4 times jcw heavyweight champ 1 time
Entrance Music: how many times? Insane clown posse for a hardcore match and wagon wagon by insane clown posse for singles
Entrance description: comes out in sort of a dance kind of singing along with the song and has 2 or 3 bottles of faygo in his arms and when he walks around the ring he shakes it up and sprays it all over the crowd then runs around and hi fives people
Finishers: eat my ass! Off the top rope into a table or just the mat
15 Most used moves:
1 taste my paint (head but)
2 bionic elbow
3 chops
4 double jump moon saw
5 dropkick
6 one man con chair to
7 the barbed wire baseball bat shot
8 double ax handle
9 atomic drops
10 bell clap
11 abdominal stretch
12 rake to the eye
13 mounted punches
14 punches
15 short arm close line

Sample RP:
Promo appears on the tron
*a group of people looking at the camera*
Wczc my name is Alex Bowen. I am the one and only juggalo extremist who will be in your brand trust me you’ll want me. Here take a small peek at what I can do.
*shows a shot of Alex doing his finisher eat my ass!*
And what do you think about this?
*shows 2 or 3 shots slowed down of Alex putting different people through a table*
I am the craziest mother fucker alive. Ill do anything to win a title. I’ve put my body through hell to get a title, and ill do it again if I have to. Now to the lighter stuff behind me you see this group of people?
*camera pans and shows about 5 people standing behind Alex*
This is my family I’ve got juggalos all over the world and there all my family. I love them all and they’ve made me who I am today.
*shows a small promo of Alex hi fiving fans and spraying faygo on the crowd*
I’m the nicest guy you could ever want to meet but if you piss me off ill rip your face off, I am not the man to mess with.
*walks away and the screen fade to black with a hatchet man coming up when it goes fully black*

 

[Hyorinmaru]

Real Name: Cory Allen
Wrestlers Name:Milenko
Wrestlers Nickname: The NecroMaster
Height:5foot9
Weight:200
Hometown: Sebastian, FL
Billed From:Shangri-La
Appearance:Milenko wears black and white ICP clown makeup to the ring.
-----------Hair color/length:Shoulder length black hair
-----------Eye color: Black
-----------Facial Hair:None
-----------Ring Attire:Black Tights
-----------Backstage Attire:Calf length black shorts and a black trench coat
-----------Physical Features: muscular
-----------Tattoos: none
Gimmick: Milenko has the power to appear in the ring during his entrance when the lights go out. He seem impervious to the pain his opponents try to inflict on him. He clouds hi opponents mind with evil desires of greed and hate in a last-ditch effort to turn them from the path of righteousness. If they give in, they will be cast down into Hell's Pit.
Strength/Weakness: Strengths/ Mind games, Brawling and lifting weights Weaknesses/ Technical wrestling, Left Knee injury and His temper
Alignment:Heel
Trained By: The ICP
Sample Pic of Wrestler:

Brief History: Not much is known about Milenko. He looks like he is about 20 years old. He was a member of FSP before they all but shut down.
Title History:none
Entrance Music:Great Milenko-ICP
Entrance description:The lights go out and he appears in the ring behind his opponents
Finishers: Main: Set Up: drop kick to the knees Main:The Murder-Go-Round (Buzz Saw Kick)
Secondary: The Tempest (pedigree from the top rope)
15 Most used moves: 1)Superplex,
2)Piledriver
3)Samoan Drop,
4)Punches to the face
5)Huge Boot
6)Powerbomb
7)Sidewalk Slam
8) Bicycle Kick
9)Head butt
10)European Uppercut
11)Top Rope Flying Clothesline
12) Spear
13) Spinebuster
14) neckbreaker
15) Kitchen Sink (Knee to gut)
Sample RP:
The camera turns on and we see a man sitting on a bench in front of a run down carnival. Standing in front of the camera is Therron "The Roach" Roachman. We can hear ICP’s song “The Great Milenko” playing over the speaker system. He seems to be so into the music he doesn’t see the camera. As he tilts his head back to finish off the Faygo he was drinking he sees the camera. When he gets up and walks towards the camera we see his face covered in black and white clown make up. He has a sinister looking smile painted in black on his face. Other than the flame designs he has for eyebrows his face is entirely white.

The Roach: First off welcome to FSP. Now if you don’t mind me asking where are we?

Milenko: This is the Dark Carnival. I know you probably never heard of it. We don’t get many of the living around here. This is the place where dead souls come when they are not good enough to go to Shangri-La or evil enough to go to Hell’s Pit. They wait here until The Wraith has enough time to study each soul in depth and send them to there final resting place.

The Roach: Why did you join FSP?

Milenko: Greed.

The Roach: Greed?

Milenko: Yes greed. You see I was brought into existence by all the greed in the world and the world’s greed keeps making me stronger. I searched for years trying to find a place with so much greed that I would become even more powerful. I seem to have to have found that place in FSP.

The Roach: What do you mean?

Milenko: Greed for the titles in FSP. Everyone who doesn’t have a title wants one. This is fueled by the greed of wanting what someone else has. With all this greed I will be able to do my job of luring people from the path of righteousness to the path of evil much more easily.

The Roach: Speaking of titles would you like to hold one yourself someday?

Milenko: Oh yes, when a person’s greed is directed towards me it’s that much more potent, that much more powerful.

The Roach: I have no more questions. Is there anything you would like to add?

Milenko: No, I was about to go get another drink anyway. I’ll see everyone in the ring.

The music is still playing as the screen fades to black.


This is an RP from another E-fed I was a part of.

 

[Enter, Sandman]

Real Name:Juan Jómon
Wrestlers Name: Pablo Colón
Alignment: Heel
Wrestlers Nickname: The King of Mexico
Height: 5' 11''
Weight: 230 lbs
Hometown: Houston Texas
Billed From: Mexico City, Mexico
Appearance:
-----------Hair color/length: Black Hair/ Afro Like
-----------Eye color: Brown
-----------Facial Hair: Long beard like when Snitsky debut
-----------Ring Attire: Wheres a black wind breaker that looks like a suit down to the ring and then rips it off to reveal red and black tights with a Crown with the word 'Pablo' on the back and the Mexican flag on either side.
-----------Backstage Attire: Black windbreaker that looks like a suit
-----------Physical Features: nothing not worthy
-----------Tattoos: his back it tattooed up with the Mexican flag.
Gimmick: 'King of Mexico' (Dresses like hes a king/ a poor king)
Strength:

1. Powerful uper body stregnth
2. Is able to do acrobatics
3. Is managed by his (non-kay fabe) wife, Carli

Alignment:
Weakness:

1. Often plays dirty and gets caught
2. Takes things personal and if beaten keeps going after that person
3. After match oftens atacks the person thus getting himself disqualified

Trained By: Booker T and PWA
Sample Pic of Wrestler:

Brief History:
Title History: 2 Time PWA champion
Entrance Music: Smooth Criminal by Alien Ant Farm
Entrance description: We hear his music blaring through the arena no one comes out until the Intro is over. Comes out riding a lawn mower. Gets in ring rips wind breaker off as fire shoots out of the ring posts
Finishers:
Main;Mexican Destroyer (Alabama Slam)
Secondary; Spinning Tequila Slam (F-5)
15 Most used moves:

1. Senton Bomb
2. Low Blow
3. rolling thunder
4. Taquito Drop (Samoan Drop)
5. Clothe Line To Hell
6. Drop Kick
7. Power of the Punch (Brass Knuckle to the Face)
8. Pablo Splash (Stinger Splash)
9. Pablo Crab (Boston Crab)
10. Pablo Bomb (Power Bomb)

Promo:
Grisham: Hello I'm here with Mexican Wrestler,Pablo Colón. Pablo You requested this interview, am I corect.
Colón: Yes you are corect, but I don't need to request an interview, I sell so you know that the kids love me. (Boos heard)
Grisham: May I ask why you requested this interview Pablo?
Colón:That is King Colón to you because as you know I am the King of Mexico, I am the Mexican Wrestler who will win the WZCW championship, and you know why...
Grisham: Why Pablo?
Colón: It's King Colón, god damn it!!! (He clothe lines Tod puts him up in power bomb position and drops him.)
Colón: (Looks down at him) Because I'm just that DAMN good.

 

[sincade20]

okay i like i wait and see what Enforcer have to say

 

[The Enforcer]

What is your alignment?

And you need to change some of your moves, most of them are finishers. Change that stuff and your good to go

 

[Hyorinmaru]

Just wondering if anyone had the time to check out my application yet.


Edit: Sorry Didn't see the ask a question tread until after this was up

 

[a0161613]

Enforcer/Sincade/Will,

Just seen the reply to my post in the roster page.

The Michinoku Driver can be swapped for a tilt a whirl slam.

Hope thats ok.

 

[The Enforcer]

Ok that works. Thank You

 

[sincade20]

Just wondering if anyone had the time to check out my application yet.


Edit: Sorry Didn't see the ask a question tread until after this was up

Okay i just need to know if he a heel or a face

 

[DekuNinja]

sindicade recomeded me to repost my applaction so here go

Real Name:Jon Spencer (im useing my real life name for that just a fun fact)
Wrestlers NameJ Sulivan
Wrestlers Nickname:none






Height:5;10
Weight:201
Hometown:Skiatook OK
Billed From:Tusla OK
Appearance:cacuasun light skined
-----------Hair color/length:burrnet short
-----------Eye color:blue
-----------Facial Hair:none
-----------Ring Attire:long black tights with a Red Alchemy Circle (color changes in different matches) on both sides an alchemy circle is this http://photobucket.com/mediadetail/?...e&pageOffset=1
-----------Backstage Attire:same but with a black lab coat with an Alchemy Circle on the back
-----------Physical Features:has eye classes but takes them off before a match and a lab coat also not in ring
-----------Tattoos:none
Gimmick:A wrestler and part time scienctist who practices the forbidden science of alchemy who is tired of people disrepecting science as a whole

Strength/Weakness:Stengths High Flying Hardcore and And Very Very Brutal
weaknesses not that good in stength yet to find allies and hes way over himself
Alignment:Heel although some face moments

Trained By:unknown
Sample Pic of Wrestler
Brief History:a bulled kid growing up was picked and beat up for his love of science he was kinda those anime video game nerd like kids growing up just like any bullied kid he never had the guts to tell his parents (btw hs a only child) but one day being beat up by bullies again his mom actually showed up during the fight however the bullies noticed and decied to add insult to injury by beating up his mom real badly she was in the hospital for a week she lived but it still didnt go well for poor pj he was shocked so bad that for 2 weeks he didnt talk didnt eat (much) he didnt even cry he was that shocked when 2 weeks passed the same bullies who were suspended finally decied to finish the job so during a recess period the showed up looking for him the second one of then layed a hand on him almost imeditly he did a drop toe hold on that person with lighting speed and koed the guy if there was one thing he loved just as much as his other nerdy stuff it was wrestling he really studied it alot the others looking at hm in shock
looking at the others with a dead face he simply walked away. almost by a miricle the school didnt notice a few days later he went to his favorite libray and found his favorite book some book about alchemy why cause this was the
day he tried the procedure so that night he tried the full procedure and it worked it wasnt a myth to him anymore eventuly when he gratued college he started training for wrestling using the memory of his moms beatdown gives him a very high flying but very brutal style

Title History:most wins by KO by a indie wrestler
Entrance Music:Breaking Benjamin Follow

Entrance description:the lighting is red then changes to purple every 1.5 seconds he comes out after the first lyrics the entrance ramp is normal ring entrance is over the ropes jumping rings his in ring is he gos to to the turnbuckle and does his taunt which is christopher daniels triple x taunt execpt with for fingers and his thumbs are touching
Finishers Double Helix(cross armed brainbuster) Chemical Explosion (Modified Sprial Tap does 180 not 360)
15 Most used moves:
elbow smash
reverse ddt (regular version not christians version)
leg larait (he hits them with his kneecap ant his leg)
Crossface Chickenwing
half boston crab
moonsalt
sideways corkscrew plancha to the outside
enzurgi
spining heel kick
knee drop
buffalo sleeper
running claf kick
calk kick from the top rope
spining back fist
facebuster (kinda like the sean walman x factor but in reverse like the edge o matic)

Sample RP:We see PJ in a lab room in a lab coat drawing a alchemy circle on the ground sitting down

PJ: ah alchemy the science of rearanging matter into another form you know alchemy was thought to be a myth but i proved them wrong i proved everybody wrong now i know what your thinking im just a nerd that will never grow up

he finished drawing the circle and starts putting metal shaving on the circle

PJ: well guess what your just one of those idiots that dont care about the foundation of the world those idiots that dont know how a car works one of the idiots that think santa claus is real one of the idiots that think that playing the jaws theme makes you get attacked by sharks one of those idiots that think that theres a anthropamorphic sponge living in a pineapple under the sea

he finishes placeing the shavings

PJ: well guess what its time to go back to school Im Science Fiction PJ Sulivan
and im comming to. you know what ill let alchemy explain that

he slams both hands on the alchemy circle the circle glow very bright for 7 seconds and in the circle is a metal bar that says im coming to WZCW

PJ: read the damn discription idiots

 

[DekuNinja]

btw i can do better on the rp's i was just holding back cause its a sample

 

[LCW-Wrestling]

Real Name: Matt Saye
Wrestlers Name: Flex Manson
Wrestlers Nickname: Moneymaker!
Height: 6 ft 9inch
Weight: 267lbs
Hometown: UK
Billed From: New York City, New York
Appearance: Flex is a man with very nicely spiked hair and ripped body.
-----------Hair color/length: Shaved hair
-----------Eye color: Brown
-----------Facial Hair: None
-----------Ring Attire: Elbow pad on each arm, same with knee pad, short tights with FM written on
-----------Backstage Attire: Very smart suit with Dollar bills in pockets
-----------Physical Features:
-----------Tattoos: Hude dragon on back and skull on left arm just below shoulder
Gimmick: He is a stuck up miilionaire who thinks he's better than everyone else, he has never fully explained how he got to be a millionaire but when he was 18 his father died and he was rich!
Strength/Weakness: Strength- Getting out of situations like lying and cheating in matches Weaknesses- Taking everyone for granted which gets him in a state!
Alignment: Super heel
Trained By: Ric Flair
Sample Pic of Wrestler:
Brief History: Dad dies at 18, from their he spiraled into depression until he finally managed to get himself on the straight and narrow to become a millionaire
Title History: WWE champion, TNA champion and King of the Ring
Entrance Music: Eminem sing for the moment
Entrance description: Darkness falls in the arena then we hear the start of his music, as he comes out money falls from the ceiling (Fake obviously because he's too stingy to hand out real cash) then we see him come in on a small golden ring with money inside it, he gets in the ring and tauntes the crowd.
Finishers: Manson Bomb (Playmaker) and RKO
15 Most used moves: Powerbomb, superkick, punch to the face, twist of fate (His own version), cobra cluch, neckbraker, rake to the eye, scoop slam, side walk slam, figure 4 leglock, dropkick, flying clothesline, big boot, suplex and tombstone
Sample RP:
A hush desends in the audience as the words "HE'S HERE" come over the titantron, Flex comes to the ring and throws quaters at the audience, he gets in the ring and says "Well, well well, is that any way to treat a former world champion, WCZW offices should have been throwing out the red carpet to sign me, but instead I get offered a measly $1000 per night, I AM A MAIN EVENTER, I'm not some average Joe who sits in the back ready to be squashed by the next 400lbs steroid taker, I am the guy that everyone in this arena paid to see, I am the guy who puts the asses in the seats in the arena's. ladies and gentlemen you are looking at the greatest man to ever live, you are looking a guy who will be a hall of famer one day, you are looking at the past future and present of this damn place and the wrestling industry itself. I am better than the Harley Race's, the Ric Flair's, the Sting's, the Hogan's of the wrestling world and the main difference is that unlike them I am a rightful world champion, unlike them I know that I can beat anyone in the world, I don't have to be told that by Vince McMahon like Hogan did. So ladies and Gentlemen here is my personal guarentee to you, I will make it to the top of this place I will be WORLD HEAVYWEIGHT CHAMPION!" He leaves and the crowd are so angry that they are throwing everything at him!

 

[LCW-Wrestling]

http://www.itickets.com/parts/aimages/2291.jpg

couldn't find out how to post images!

 

[The Enforcer]

ok well this app will not work, alot of your moves are finishers. you need to put in regular wrestling moves and not finishers. also dont have everything run together.

 

[Steamboat Ricky]

Title History: WWE champion, TNA champion and King of the Ring

Seriously?

I really would rethink that. That makes your character totally uncredible.

 

[Ryden D]

Wrestlers Name: Ryden D

Wrestlers In-Ring Name: Ryden D "WWF's Mr Shoot" "The Most Talked about man in WEF"

Age: 22

Hometown: Sydney Australia

Height: 6'4''

Weight: 240LB

Character Rep: Tommy Dreamer

Alignment (face, neutral or heel): Heel
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Entrance Music: WTV (Ministry from album Houses of the Mole')

Entrance Description: The Entire Arena goes black as ‘WTV' by Ministry begin. Boos comes from the crowd when the arena is completely in darkness. Two red spotlights lazily move around the arena, shining over the crowd.

The arena flashes when a strobe light come into effect as the song goes on, the red spotlights move faster with the guitar buildup. The heat from the crowd get louder. In the final drum buildup before the main guitar hits the stobes get faster untill an explosion comes from the stage.

The Tron goes static. Pyros shoot out from the entrance way. Ryden D’s entrance video appears on the tron. The shot flashes into static then back to normal in with a Black and Red Saturation over the screen (similar to n.W.o). Ryden walks out as an explosion of red pyros surrounding the tron. The crowd is in full booing mode as the main arena lights return with the red spotlights still moving. Ryden walks to the ring and steps between the ropes, climbs the turnbuckle and poses with the Intercontinental championship and holds his hands up clique style.
===================================================
Moveset:
1. German Suplex (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Suplex#German_suplex)
2. Enzuigiri Kick (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Professional_wrestling_attacks#Enzuigiri)
3. Snap Suplex (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Suplex#Snap_suplex)
4. Roundhouse Kick (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Professional_wrestling_attacks#Spin_kick)
5. Spinebuster (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Professional_wrestling_throws#Spinebuster)
6. Double DDT (one after another) (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DDT_%28professional_wrestling))
7. Frankensteiner (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Professional_wrestling_throws#Frankensteiner)
8. Crucifix Powerbomb (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Powerbomb#Crucifix_powerbomb)
9. CrossBody off the top rope (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Professional_wrestling_aerial_attacks#Crossbody)
10. Lionsault (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moonsault)

Finisher(s):
Ryden Bomb (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Powerbomb#Rydeen_bomb)
A batista bomb with the opponent lifted higher into the air for maximum impact

Suicide Drill (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Powerslam#Suplex_powerslam)
Jackhammer into Modified spear.

Brain Bouncer
Ryden slams the opponents head into the turnbuckle corner , drags them up to the second rope and DDT's the opponent

Double ended
Yakuza Kick (kick to back of the head then back across their face knocking them out cold very quickly)

Instant Lawsuit! - PPV ONLY
Tombstone from the top of the turnbuckle (*PPV ONLY* due to severity, previously banned from WZCW)

red pill/blue pill - NOT USED IN WWF
Ryden uppercuts his opponent stunning them, he holds out his hands revealing a red pill in one and a blue in another, randomly, one is a knockout drug, one is a placebo

Rarely Used Specialty Moves With Car:
I've just been ran over
Opponent is irish whipped, then thrown out of the ring onto a bonnet of a car (only when a car is driven to the ring)
Through the glass ceiling
Opponent is irish whipped, then thrown out of the ring thru a window of a car (*rarely used* only when a car is driven to the ring)
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Wrestlers Biography:

Originally from Sydney Australia, Ryden was discovered after he gained a reputation for a 6 foot plus athlete that could bench press over 500 pounds and still perform a variety of athletic cruiserweight style moves one being the hurracarana, however he was highly criticized for his lack of submission moves or skill, but commended for his mic skills and backstage stunts and practical jokes, Sent to training in the USA to refine his skills, he graduated from WZCW "power plant" and signed on as a tag team wrestler and became one of the most Controversial WZCW Wrestler and CC member, Former 3 time World Tag Team Champ, And the original Jackass(and founder of wackass!)!

Gained large popularity in WZCW and becoming widely renown for his crazy stunts, involvement in some of the unique matches in WZCW/WZWA history and practical jokes and other backstage antics.

He controversially was fired from WZCW along with his brother just before the collapse of WZCW and made his way to WZWA in 2004 then left to Compete in Japan with his brother Kaneo and gained alot of experience in hardcore wrestling.

Returned to the USA after fighting his way around Europe, After WSU folded, Ryden became a hot free agent, but due to a no compete clause, has been inactive until negotiations with EWF began, the rest has wrote itself in recent history and now Ryden has come to the WWF

Ryden is a joker and laid back guy, he enjoys doing extreme stunts and making a fool of himself from time to time all for fun. Man who loves his cars, beer and random insanity. Original founder of the uber popular Wackass tag team of WZWA/WSU fame and 4 Time tag team Champion and ring veteran.

Will often pay out and use Famous wrestlers in his sketches and his promos are usually totally unpredictable. Has developed a love for shooting on other wrestlers inside his own fed and in other WEF association feds.

Always pushing the censors to the limit (banned from WZCW TV for controversial promo's) and causing backstage chaos and being a big hater of backstage politician wrestlers.
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TRON: http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i279/Kan...wwftronJPEG.jpg

 

[LCW-Wrestling]

cba lol just gonna work on me own E-Fed thanks for givin' it a read

 

[sincade20]

Okay...this is for app. Only please leave the chatter in the discussion thread.

 

[Hyorinmaru]

He's a heel but he can be a tweener if there are to many heels