RP Feedback Thread

[Melon Farmer]

Will, your RP was simply amazing. Honestly, you took it to a whole different level now. As the Elite X Champion it is Gus's duty to make sure his title reign will last longer than just 6 days (since Meltdown aired on a "monday" and the ppv is on a "sunday")

Gus will have to pull out all the stuff. I'm being 100 percent serious Gus. You can't just write an interview RP or anything that's ordinary, as I feel you should write a very unique one. As Will did too.

Although I have 1 tiny itsy bitsy problem with Will's RP. I feel like it was exactly what Edge and Lita did when they invaded John Cena's house, so I wouldn't call it exactly original, but who's RP is original?

10/10 for you Will. Simple fantastic!! Rep when I can!!

 

[TheOneBigWill]

Although I have 1 tiny itsy bitsy problem with Will's RP. I feel like it was exactly what Edge and Lita did when they invaded John Cena's house, so I wouldn't call it exactly original, but who's RP is original?

10/10 for you Will. Simple fantastic!! Rep when I can!!

Thats exactly where I got the idea from. I never said it was unique, or 100% my own.. however, the Gus/Big Will/Heidi storyline is slightly different from the Edge/Cena angle..

And as you said, everyone adds similar stuff in all their RPs, so by that.. the only real connection to my RP & any storyline from real life.. was "breaking into someone's home."

Anyways, thank you.. I honestly believe thats been one of my best RPs.

 

[Melon Farmer]

It definently has. Kudos Will. I know you are older than me and everything, but I'm very proud of you for that RP.

 

[Reaper]

Wow Coco, we agree on something.

(Reaper waits for The Four Horseman of the Apocolypse to arrive any minute now.)

So anyway I thought it was great. Loves the Willenium to Gus' dad. good stuff all around.

 

[Reaper]

Ok, RP is up. Read it and Gimme some feedback foos!!

 

[TheOneBigWill]

Ok, RP is up. Read it and Gimme some feedback foos!!

Burnt podiums, framing announcers, & mocking a former Tag Team (oh, you didn't know?) your RP had a nice mixture of attitude. I loved it.

I question if anyone (Coco, I'm looking your way) will think you took my idea, dispite asking if you could start off where I left off.

As long as Disasterpiece picks up another solid RP, I think Kenny & Joe will definately have their hands full with their RPs to take this match. Either way, I can't wait to see the final 3 remaining, as this feud has been just as electric as the Big Will/Gus feud.

 

[Melon Farmer]

I think the RP was good. I kinda skimmed through Reaper's speech as I found it a little boring but I read the end. I laughed my butt off at Leon being framed. I liked it.

10/10 --> Will
9/10 --> Reaper

 

[Reaper]

mocking a former Tag Team (oh, you didn't know?)

I have been thinking of way to get that in some rp or promo since I can remember. It was just right place, right tiem, and the whole time I was writing it I was thinking about when DX invaded WCW with the tank. However, I thought I tank in the middle of Reno, Nevada, would have been a bit much don't ya think?

Next Fued for the DevilSpawns: Leon Kensworth?

 

[Gus]

uh, yea, you would prolly be shot by some meth addicts, lol

 

[Gus]

anyway, Reaper, you act like the match is already won, Kenny and Joe can be really creative, as evidenced by their RP so far, anyway, Jesse, your RP was pretty good considering you dont really have anything to write your RP based on, your first few matches are always the hardest, especially if you're a face, if you're a heel, all you have to do is insult your opponent, but anyway, I think your RP was good, considering your circumstances...
7/10


Reaper, on before, no disrespect or anything, you and DP are incredible RPers to say the least, you know?

 

[Uncle Phatso]

wow dude i laughfed my ass off at the hole stealing the reno first baptist podoum bit funnny shit dude thats what keeps a reader reading the funny shit about half way through u start to get bored and your like eh 1 more line and then u read that and its like the second hook and u get spun back into it

 

[TheOneBigWill]

Jesse, your RP was good, but it was short & too the point. That could come back to hurt you, since you can only do one RP. Everyone is right about it being hard to RP against the "unknown" when you don't know what to work with.. & I think dispite it being short, you still packed a decent sized punch.

I'll await to see The Grand Mystique's RP for final review.

Joe, I must admit, thats likely the best RP I've seen you do. I personally love how this is continuing completely from what "I" did. I think it was great for you to add Leon in, as if he's like a child getting back at bullies. The tire spike thing was great too.

DP & Kenny are left.. maybe they'll spice things up with something different.

 

[Gus]

I personally thought they should of let the cop take Leon, but hey, its not my RP, i'm gonna try and go a different route with mine, but that could be hard to do now

 

[TheOneBigWill]

I personally thought they should of let the cop take Leon, but hey, its not my RP, i'm gonna try and go a different route with mine, but that could be hard to do now

The only thing that'd be remotely hard to get around, is if you're centering your RP off "knowing" what Will had done.

Joe mentioned you in his RP, as knowing what had happened, but if you had a different approach, use your best judgment in thinking what'd sound, or be better. You don't have to connect them, if you don't feel comfortable doing so.

 

[Reaper]

with the rps being connected like they are it gives the show a much greater sense of realism IMO.

 

[Deexter Jorgan]

good rp joe, it seems like youve really elevated yourself i cant wait to see what DP and kenny come out with

 

[Gus]

i guess you guys are right, i'll probably put part 2 of WVC vs Dynasty, and Kenny will put part 3, I think that we've dug ourselves into an RP hole that we cant escape from

 

[a0161613]

Jesse, your RP was good, but it was short & too the point. That could come back to hurt you, since you can only do one RP. Everyone is right about it being hard to RP against the "unknown" when you don't know what to work with.. & I think dispite it being short, you still packed a decent sized punch.

I'll await to see The Grand Mystique's RP for final review.

Joe, I must admit, thats likely the best RP I've seen you do. I personally love how this is continuing completely from what "I" did. I think it was great for you to add Leon in, as if he's like a child getting back at bullies. The tire spike thing was great too.

DP & Kenny are left.. maybe they'll spice things up with something different.

Hey guys...I'm back...just caught up on everything.

Will, brilliant RP, it would be harsh to relieve Gus of the title so soon but that RP may have done it.

I know the US get tough winters but to hear what happened at Irish Kids school recently really is awful. while not a huge fan of the gimmick, the RPs were solid and he was going to have a big part in that Mayhem title match.

Well done to creative for removing him from the match, it was the correct decision and that will give him impetus and a base to use on his return.

I liked Jesse's RP, a little brief but it was to the point. I admit, I as GM have little advantage due the mystery involved. I have got something good lined up, which will be posted late next week. I look forward to your comments!

I assume the DJ did my vid on the Iraq show, that was superb, major reppage.

I forgot about the Rey "He's coming" vids that were on smackdown. That was exactly what i was hoping to see.

One last thing, the Iraq promo's were brill, with special mention to all of Dynasty who really stepped up. But where was mine...LOL...i dont mind.

 

[Deexter Jorgan]

Hey guys...I'm back...just caught up on everything.

Will, brilliant RP, it would be harsh to relieve Gus of the title so soon but that RP may have done it.

I know the US get tough winters but to hear what happened at Irish Kids school recently really is awful. while not a huge fan of the gimmick, the RPs were solid and he was going to have a big part in that Mayhem title match.

Well done to creative for removing him from the match, it was the correct decision and that will give him impetus and a base to use on his return.

I liked Jesse's RP, a little brief but it was to the point. I admit, I as GM have little advantage due the mystery involved. I have got something good lined up, which will be posted late next week. I look forward to your comments!

I assume the DJ did my vid on the Iraq show, that was superb, major reppage.

I forgot about the Rey "He's coming" vids that were on smackdown. That was exactly what i was hoping to see.

One last thing, the Iraq promo's were brill, with special mention to all of Dynasty who really stepped up. But where was mine...LOL...i dont mind.

thanks btw, i think they left mistyques out coz at this time hes still an unknown and they didnt want to have him reveal himself with or without his character

 

[Iscariot]

No love for my RP? Ah well.

Will, yours was brilliance, absolutely amazing, so good in fact that it's started a string of roleplays linked to it. I was very, very impressed and I'd like to point out, I pushed him first in creative, so when he wins the title back this PPV, it's my fault

Jesse, I agree with Will in that it was good, but very short considering you have but one RP. Still good and impactful though.

Reaper & Joe, both great that played off each otehr and the situation, the team dynamics are really coming together and I'm actually intested in which team will win here.

Keep it up all !

Iscy

 

[Deexter Jorgan]

No love for my RP? Ah well.

Will, yours was brilliance, absolutely amazing, so good in fact that it's started a string of roleplays linked to it. I was very, very impressed and I'd like to point out, I pushed him first in creative, so when he wins the title back this PPV, it's my fault

Jesse, I agree with Will in that it was good, but very short considering you have but one RP. Still good and impactful though.

Reaper & Joe, both great that played off each otehr and the situation, the team dynamics are really coming together and I'm actually intested in which team will win here.

Keep it up all !

Iscy

Your rp izzy was exactly what it was supposed to be main event material, i loved the fact that you balanced manzo as not sure, that he allied himself with myles because he had to it was well written and well played off well done, and to the rest of you guys i love all of them especially yours will keep em coming

 

[Melon Farmer]

Hey guys...I'm back...just caught up on everything.

Will, brilliant RP, it would be harsh to relieve Gus of the title so soon but that RP may have done it.

I know the US get tough winters but to hear what happened at Irish Kids school recently really is awful. while not a huge fan of the gimmick, the RPs were solid and he was going to have a big part in that Mayhem title match.

Well done to creative for removing him from the match, it was the correct decision and that will give him impetus and a base to use on his return.

I liked Jesse's RP, a little brief but it was to the point. I admit, I as GM have little advantage due the mystery involved. I have got something good lined up, which will be posted late next week. I look forward to your comments!

I assume the DJ did my vid on the Iraq show, that was superb, major reppage.

I forgot about the Rey "He's coming" vids that were on smackdown. That was exactly what i was hoping to see.

One last thing, the Iraq promo's were brill, with special mention to all of Dynasty who really stepped up. But where was mine...LOL...i dont mind.

I didn't want to mention anything but what the hell, I'll do it now, they also forgot to add mine, which is cool.

 

[Bentallica]

My RP is up. I personally think it's the best RP I've ever written, but what do you guys think?

 

[Melon Farmer]

To be honest with you, your RP's haven't been good. I am not gonna lie to you but this RP was definitely the best you have made. It was interesting and kept me interested throughout.

This was a very good interview segment, and I seriously liked it. It is about time you showed us what made you...you!! The one thing that I liked about you was that legends get made bit, but you didn't add it this week. Ah well, but your RP was still pretty good.

David...your RP was sick!! It was really good!! It was intense and it was EXTREME!! If you want to win this match. If you want to be known as the most extreme superstar in WZCW then you have to be known as the Mayhem Hardcore Champion!! And with this RP, you have what it takes!!

As much as Ben's RP rocked, your RP was better in my opinion. But that doesn't mean that Ben should give up RP-ing. Ben went from a ucch meh to a respectable RP-er. I always liked you, and to be honest I may have over looked you a few times, which makes me an ass but I can admit it, but you know what I am happy that made me an ass because I truly am. How could I over look someone with great potential as you have??

You have tremendous amount of potential and I am proud of that. Keep it up bro!! I know you have what it takes to one day become a star champion!! Keep working on it!! Keep working!! And always have your head up! (Or is it chin up? lol)

But I think that if the question arises as to whose RP was more extreme, then the award would have to go to David, but that doesn't mean that your RP can't win.

David, I am proud of your RP and I loved it!! Let's hope Ricky either no-shows (which I doubt) or has a bad day when it comes to RP-ing (which I hope not) because if neither happen then you have to hope and pray that you win this match, which I hope you do, bc this RP was very creative, let's see if this "Hardcore Icon" (just joking) has what it takes to retain his Mayhem Title!!

 

[Bentallica]

To be honest with you, your RP's haven't been good. I am not gonna lie to you but this RP was definitely the best you have made. It was interesting and kept me interested throughout.

This was a very good interview segment, and I seriously liked it. It is about time you showed us what made you...you!! The one thing that I liked about you was that legends get made bit, but you didn't add it this week. Ah well, but your RP was still pretty good.

As much as Ben's RP rocked, your RP was better in my opinion. But that doesn't mean that Ben should give up RP-ing. Ben went from a ucch meh to a respectable RP-er. I always liked you, and to be honest I may have over looked you a few times, which makes me an ass but I can admit it, but you know what I am happy that made me an ass because I truly am. How could I over look someone with great potential as you have??

You have tremendous amount of potential and I am proud of that. Keep it up bro!! I know you have what it takes to one day become a star champion!! Keep working on it!! Keep working!! And always have your head up! (Or is it chin up? lol)

But I think that if the question arises as to whose RP was more extreme, then the award would have to go to David, but that doesn't mean that your RP can't win.

Thanks, man. I do think my RPs have been improving since I came back from that nine show "sabbatical" I took. The Legends line had to go eventually, and seeing how this is a big title match, I thought to quit it with this RP. I did read DJ's, and it was very good. If Ricky puts up a great RP (which I know he can), we may just have ourselves a match here.

One thing I didn't like about DJ's RP is how it failed to mention my character. If he had done that, he might've had this match won for sure. Mind you, it's still a great read, but bashing me was what would've put this one over the top.

Personally, I think this match would be a good cut off point for me and Ricky's feud if he loses the belt, but a Maxx-Legend rivalry with these great RPs would make for some quality matches.