After that log-in issues being resolved, here is the second batch. If it ain't here, check the first batch. Otherwise, it was a good RP that I had no problem with.
NOTE: These RP's are being judged without reference to the Log-In Issues, so bear that in mind when you read the following.
EurAsian Match (Champion & "Comedic Piece")
Showtime, this was an RP that has enough pull to keep you as the Champion. But I do indeed stress the word "enough" as this was not really the best I have seen. Firstly, I can see multiple spelling mistakes throughout the entire RP (mainly spelling the names of Wrestlers wrong). I do like how you have enforced the fact that you are the ONLY EurAsian Champion, which was a good idea. But the talking of the opponents... it seems like a bit of a Word Wall. I understand you were on the Show ranting and that you have multiple opponents to address... but you commented on how bad it is to "attack" you in our RP's, why do it in your own? It would have been to briefly mention the challengers and talk more about how you are the dominate champion.
Trevor, Comedic RP? This was far from it. All I can see coming from this RP is a feud with Cougar
(for the championship, assuming he does win it). It'd be interested in seeing this match happen at Kingdom Come. I also see how you have gone to your character roots again and reaffirmed Steel's identity.
Number 20 Spot Match:
Blade, this was a good RP that did its purpose. "Slow and steady" rule is in effect here. I liked the touch with the multiple quotes from different era's. You had me until the fire at the end of the RP. As for
Karnage, good RP as well. The middle bit where you described the destination was useless and you could have included the key details in the second area in the first/third part.
Elite X Match:
Zander, this RP seemed very rushed to try and get completed. The start was good and the introduction of the James character was a little odd for a PPV RP. Some spelling mistakes as well as weird paragraphing. The whole thing was all over the place. The rant about the match was, well... a rant. You did point out about Frankie, but hardly addressed USA and both USA/Smith at the same time. Wasn't effective for me.
Frankie Smith, not bad at all. A good performance that addressed both opponents... moreso Young than USA, but still good. I like the back story to influence it as well. Wasn't memorable, but good enough for the win.
USA, check your use of colours. Like Smith's, it was a good performance but nothing memorable.
Third batch will consist of all Lethal Lottery RP's except for the first three submitted (from Blade onwards).