Because I can no longer eagerly await the 16th to post feedback

, I shall be doing the post ****ing thing that so many do and post my first batch of feedback... I'm trying to go for Gelgarin style, so can I get some feedback on my heelish feedback?
Max Karzai: Since I cannot comment on my own RP in this thread, I will not be referencing it when I say that I believe thus far you have the edge in winning the chance to face David Cougar for the title. Short, solid RP that delivered its points. I can see how you did the Face as the Heel directed at the Heel RP, but it may have needed a little bit better execution considering Lee had no idea what you were doing.
And please... use colour for your character, not bold highlighting. Italics/underlines/bold are all for describing the situation/other RP stuff like names. Colours are for dialogue.
Jordan Lights: Great start to an RP, much better than you last ones. However, the rant disappointed me. I don't mind people using the simple formula of a straight attack of your opponent... but it was done in a heelish fashion. I believe that you are supposed to be a judge, but a face one. So, something like interrupting Becky Serra was a little out of place. Your character better suits being a heel and you seem to write like one, so I'd ask for the change if I were you.
Scott Hammond: Look out Karzai, you have some competition. I liked this cocky heel promo from you. It was really well done considering most of the guys who are competing for the shot are faces and Cougar is a heel. You seemed to assert yourself as the more dominate heel. However, the fact you told Leon about the open challenge with you being the potential canididate to wrestle that match seems a little out of place as well. Leon is a reporter who knows these facts, no need to act like he doesn't know. If Karzai doesn't get the shot, you will.
Lars Reidar & James Baker: Great RP's. Enough for Reidar to become WZCW Champion and enough for Baker to last until the end. Not sure about the win.
Mr. Baller: I can see why you are the comedic jobber of the entire e-fed. But, I have enjoyed your RP's as of late and dealing with the situation well. So, let's get started:
- Is it Becky or Stacey?

- Coming out party? Are you gay?
- The rap was a nice touch, but it seems very very forced. Not as effective as Garth Black's or William Teach's from the past few weeks.
- Why are you going to work as soon as you get a drink? Bad placement in my view.
Yeah... you ain't winning the LL. But, the RP was enough to get you to last throughout to the near end. Let's just wait and see what the other guys do.