Muffin Top Merkley
Be a man!
Finally got around to reading and reviewing your Book This!
I'll be reviewing the second show, but I also read the first show in order to have complete knowledge in everything that is going on. My review will be in random order, and in bullet points so if there is anything you are unsure of, let me know.
- The debut show of Elite was a very good introduction to the workings in your federation. Episode 2 built on the foundation you stared in episode 1, but dug deeper and added more, which is very important.
- I'm not a fan of the constant blue font. Switch it up for matches, promos & wrestler's actions, or use black.
- Your opening video for episode two was written in the same sense as if it was something we would actually see. CM Punk starting it talking about leaving his impact, all the way to John Cena on the hood was an impactful way to end and hints to if Punk is to blame.
- I really enjoyed the signs in the audience at the beginning of the show. It's fun and something that I hope will be at the start of each show.
- Very nice roster.
- How long are your shows? I'm assuming two hours for Elite? Three hours for a PPV? It's hard to tell by just reading your shows.
- Chris Jericho as the owner of CWF is an odd choice, but very interesting and exciting too. Will he be forced to step in the ring from time to time to maintain order? I look forward to finding out.
- When I read the promo's and matches, it's clear that you have an indepth knowledge about the wrestler's personalities and it is like you can get inside the head of the wrestlers. You make it easy to imagine that they would be saying what they are saying during a promo, how they are acting backstage and in a match.
- I have a hard time picturing your commentators. HBK doesn't seem like HBK, JBL doesn't seem like JBL etc.
- John Cena sprinted to the ring a week after being run down by a car. I know he's Superman, but a walk would have had the same effect.
- Kofi Kingston vs Cody Rhodes was an exciting match that was fun to read.
- Cody Rhodes comments regarding Kingston and Sin Cara: WHOOAAA!!! Hope something comes out of this!
- Love the idea of a dashing face vs the faceless man. Lots of ammo for Rhodes to use during both promos and matches.
- It felt like a commercial break should have been added after Ziggler slapped Christian. The pacing didn't feel right going from backstage interview directly to match.
- All of your matches are different from each other which is a positive as they don't get boring.
- Sometimes you use words and phrases that don't flow with what is happening such as "He drags Christian up, dazed and confused like Led Zeppelin."
- I'm not sure how Christian got "screwed" out of his match. I understand the foot was on the ropes and he was upset, but that's not illegal.
- I'm not 100% sold on the idea of Petey Williams and Austin Aries tag-team. I like both wrestlers, but I'm not sure I can see the combination yet. Only time will tell.
- I LOVED Areies promo.
- LITA!!!!!!
Enjoyable show. I'll be following along for shows in the future as you have my interested in many angles.
I'll be reviewing the second show, but I also read the first show in order to have complete knowledge in everything that is going on. My review will be in random order, and in bullet points so if there is anything you are unsure of, let me know.
- The debut show of Elite was a very good introduction to the workings in your federation. Episode 2 built on the foundation you stared in episode 1, but dug deeper and added more, which is very important.
- I'm not a fan of the constant blue font. Switch it up for matches, promos & wrestler's actions, or use black.
- Your opening video for episode two was written in the same sense as if it was something we would actually see. CM Punk starting it talking about leaving his impact, all the way to John Cena on the hood was an impactful way to end and hints to if Punk is to blame.
- I really enjoyed the signs in the audience at the beginning of the show. It's fun and something that I hope will be at the start of each show.
- Very nice roster.
- How long are your shows? I'm assuming two hours for Elite? Three hours for a PPV? It's hard to tell by just reading your shows.
- Chris Jericho as the owner of CWF is an odd choice, but very interesting and exciting too. Will he be forced to step in the ring from time to time to maintain order? I look forward to finding out.
- When I read the promo's and matches, it's clear that you have an indepth knowledge about the wrestler's personalities and it is like you can get inside the head of the wrestlers. You make it easy to imagine that they would be saying what they are saying during a promo, how they are acting backstage and in a match.
- I have a hard time picturing your commentators. HBK doesn't seem like HBK, JBL doesn't seem like JBL etc.
- John Cena sprinted to the ring a week after being run down by a car. I know he's Superman, but a walk would have had the same effect.
- Kofi Kingston vs Cody Rhodes was an exciting match that was fun to read.
- Cody Rhodes comments regarding Kingston and Sin Cara: WHOOAAA!!! Hope something comes out of this!
- Love the idea of a dashing face vs the faceless man. Lots of ammo for Rhodes to use during both promos and matches.
- It felt like a commercial break should have been added after Ziggler slapped Christian. The pacing didn't feel right going from backstage interview directly to match.
- All of your matches are different from each other which is a positive as they don't get boring.
- Sometimes you use words and phrases that don't flow with what is happening such as "He drags Christian up, dazed and confused like Led Zeppelin."
- I'm not sure how Christian got "screwed" out of his match. I understand the foot was on the ropes and he was upset, but that's not illegal.
- I'm not 100% sold on the idea of Petey Williams and Austin Aries tag-team. I like both wrestlers, but I'm not sure I can see the combination yet. Only time will tell.
- I LOVED Areies promo.
- LITA!!!!!!
Enjoyable show. I'll be following along for shows in the future as you have my interested in many angles.