Hyorinmaru
Sit Upon The Frozen Heavens
I can't rep you at the moment so I just wanted to say thank you for the feedback.
It is appreciated.
It is appreciated.
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You're welcome says Sandow.I can't rep you at the moment so I just wanted to say thank you for the feedback.
It is appreciated.
Fixed.It'll happen sometimes.
Luckily friends don't have to agree with each other 100% of the time.
Glad you liked it.Xaitlyn Serpiente (ShinChan)
I can't speak for everyone but I really enjoyed it. I enjoyed it because it was different. I've never seen an RP with a conversation between a characters Brain & Heart. You did it quiet well I thought. You hit the points that should have been in this RP.
The only thing that bothers me is the lack of back story. I like to know why a character does something. What their motivation is and W still don't have that and that bugs me.
Not bad but I think even a little back story would have brought this way up.
Heart: That's even better for me. This loss isn't logically a loss, infact it's a precious opportunity.Ascension 111 said:Becky Serra: I hate to say it, Xaitlyn, but you will be the number one entrant in this year's Lethal Lottery Match. You will have to do what no one else has done before and outlast 29 other men and women to claim victory.
Brain: That's a great example of Poetic Justice in it's purest form.Ascension 111 said:Serra: However, what I can do is make it up to you. You have been wronged here tonight, that much is true. Vee, I don't believe it was your fault but you are hardly faultless in all of this. For that reason, I have decided that instead of being the number one entrant in the Lethal Lottery, you will enter the match at number 2!
Brain: That's what the whole damn thing is about. It's the only thing that Xaitlyn requires.Ascension 111 said:Serra: Good luck!
Updated.RolePlay Rankings said:1. Lethal Lottery
2. Ascension 111
3. Unscripted
4. Ascension 110
5. Meltdown 131
6. Ascension Anarchy {Episode 109}
7. Ascension 107
8. Sample RolePlay
Thanks for your feedback.Xaitlyn Serpiente
(ShinChan)
Thank you for finally giving us a reason Xaitlyn joined WZCW. It's out there and needs to be in the back of your mind with every RP from now on.
There's still a big problem though. The no Dialogue thing was not the best choice. It worked for Numbers because he had some dialogue in the beginning and he's one of the best in the fed. For you it just fell flat. I would have liked to her from Xaitlyn herself about the Lottery and the match with 2 people she's previously lost to.
Not bad and it shows you're finally listening to the feedback we've been giving you but it had a good bit wrong with it. Your going in the right direction though