RP Feedback Thread

Discussion in 'WZCW Roleplay Board' started by sincade20, Oct 1, 2007.

  1. sincade20

    sincade20 Dufflebag Mod!!

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    Leave all feedback for Rps in here!
     
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  2. TheOneBigWill

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    I'll be the first to start. (unless someone posts between me writing this)

    As always, Titus & Hasheem seem to be off to a nice start. I like the interaction of 'Dan Rather.' (nice touch, Hasheem) Along with the continuation (sp?) of the interview. I can't wait to see how it ends, hopefully it will.

    I wanna give huge credit to Steamboat Ricky, as his imagination for his character is beyond anything I've ever seen. Its one thing to take a character from actual life in wrestling & alter it into your own character, but its another to create a character (assumed off the character by Jonny Depp) & inter-twine it with wrestling. Not to say Gus didn't have a nice RP as well, but I have to give the nod to imagination to Steamboat Ricky, very nicely done.
     
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  3. Gus

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    yea, i like Steamboat's Character as well, its actually pretty funny, btw, Great RP Steamboat, i look forward to a really great Meltdown this week, cause next time we're in Reno, my hometown!!!
     
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  4. Steamboat Ricky

    Steamboat Ricky WZCW's Living Legend

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    Wow, thanks guys. You don't realize how awesome it was of you two to say that. I really appreciate it.

    Actually, my character is not based off of Jack Sparrow at all. I would say that my biggest influence in terms of character would be Mankind back during the Rock and Sock Connection days. But if you're going by my last RP, I had just watched a lot of original crow Sting from like 97 and thought it would provide some good buildup.
     
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  5. Lee

    Lee WZCW's Titus
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    Ok my feedback time (if I say smething bad don't pounce on me);

    SteamBoat Ricky; Wow you've put some thought into this character, the rp is great. keep up the good work.

    Gus; I'm loving the slight banter between Gus and Heidi, my only problem with your rp's is that you need to format...use different colours for different speakers.

    Will; Both of your rp's are kick ass, am so glasd you're making your debut!

    Senoir coconut; Mate all the best, I actually am excited to see where this interview is going to go. Talk about a hard match!
     
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  6. Lee

    Lee WZCW's Titus
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    Sincade; Wow another great rp, I'm excited to see how Sincade comes in on his own after the departure of AJ...High society is no more...But Sincade's a rolling!
     
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  7. Gus

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    hey flame, thanks for the constructive critisism, ill be sure to format them next time, and sincade, sweet RP
     
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  8. sincade20

    sincade20 Dufflebag Mod!!

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    all you guys are doing a good job at your RPs keep up the good work
     
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  9. Melon Farmer

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    Thank you so much for all the great compliments on my RP...don't worry...i have planend what i want to happen.

    I really want to win this tourny very badly. So I am gonna be pulling all the stints.

    And I haven't gotten to read everyone's RP...but i will...and i like the RP's so far...and there hasnt been one that isn't boring or long or anythign like that. Every single one that i have read so far was spectacular and this makes me very motivated to step my game up...so with all of u working hard...this is just motivating me to come up with new ideas to defeat u all!!

    lol...sorry if i sound like an ass!!
     
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  10. Gus

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    dont worry about it, i think we all want to win this tourney as well, and i will pull out all the stints as well, good luck to everyone in the tourney!!! :) this episode of Meltdown is going to be awesome, i guarandamntee that!!!
     
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  11. Lee

    Lee WZCW's Titus
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    WOWSERS Senoir, that rp is incredible, you clearly have spent a lot of time on it.
     
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  12. Melon Farmer

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    OH you have no idea...

    I want to win this tournament with a passion. I have never wanted something more on the internent than i do now.

    that and getting out of prison lol which i have lol

    I also wanna compliement a few people:

    Titus: I really want to know who L.A. is...this match will be 1 tough thing to judge lol.

    Gus: Very well done...I will not be surprised if it is me vs. u in this competition

    Big Will: HOLY ****!!!! Your RP's are getting better and better...I must tell you...that with each RP u write and post...it just keeps getting better and better and better. I will be very surprised if u can make ur next RP better, bc ur RP was excellent!!

    :)

    Sincade, Aerandir, Michigan, Gus, Ricky, and everyone else...you are the reason that WZCW is amazing...and all of you are makign it very hard for anyone else to succeed, because all of u guys are amazing!!!

    It is amazing how just about everyone in the WZCW is spectacular...and dont say that u wanna quit the WZCW, bc everyone here on WZCW has a place,

    (In Character)
    which is under Mohammad Hasheem lol!!!!!

    (Out of Character)
    Once Again, Kudos to everyone


    (In Character)
    ONce Again, Kudos to everyone for being Hasheem's doormat and stepping stone ;)
     
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  13. Lee

    Lee WZCW's Titus
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    I thought it was a rule that the minimum rps can be is 15 lines. I've noticed a couple under this, though they're still great rp's, what's the rule on this?

    Sincade and Everest...I'm loving your promos man, they're ace.

    SC...man yours is incredible, though I feel your last one was clearly rushed to seem like you have done more than you have. This was under the 15 lines and if just a filler to link to the new rp you have, you should have just inserted that at the beginning.
     
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  14. Melon Farmer

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    it wasn't rushed.

    The reason why i did that was only bc i wanted everyone to know that interview has just started to heat up.

    Dan Rather is asking Hasheem Q's that will get Hasheem mad and if Hasheem is mad then so r his guards.

    also...Titus...I need to talk to u on MSN...sign on
     
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  15. Steamboat Ricky

    Steamboat Ricky WZCW's Living Legend

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    Minimum lines to an RP? Seriously? How can you put limits on creativity? Just don't be dumb and promo something like this:

    "I am Steamboat Ricky, I am going to beat Gus."


    That's a pretty sweet promo, but obviously, extremely idiotic.
     
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  16. Melon Farmer

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    also...the RP that u were talking about, Titus, was like 18 lines.

    but in any event...look at my latest RP...holy **** is it good!!

    watch as Dan Rather's fate lies in the hands of Hasheem.

    MWUHAHAHAHAHA
     
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  17. Steamboat Ricky

    Steamboat Ricky WZCW's Living Legend

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    Senoir and Flame...holy crap dudes. You guys are RPing like there is no tomorrow. We need a WZCW 24/7 channel just to air all of this RPing. Good work gentlemen.


    P.S. Senoir, your RPs are good, but not as good as the RP I wrote in my last entry in this thread. Enjoy.
     
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  18. Melon Farmer

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    hahahaha...yea right...im gonna go read it now....'


    ok i just finished reading it...

    holy crap dude...


    i must tell u...i didnt understand 1 word lol!!!
     
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  19. Mexican Geek

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    I wonder why... ;) should I translate it into Arabic? ;)

    AMAZING PROMO Steamboat Ricky, props for that, you could be the other finalist on the tournament, after El Guerrero obviously :D

    I wish we could have more "wrestlers" in the fed right now.
     
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  20. Melon Farmer

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    umm...first of all...i dont speak Arabic....nor am i muslim or an arab or anything like that

    u should be banned.

    and ur not funny.
     
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  21. Lee

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    He was being sarcastic hence the winks. Good rps senoir. And ricky...wow, look forward to facing you in the final :p
     
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  22. Mexican Geek

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    Too bad. Ask Mohamed Hasheem, maybe he does..

    Nah.

    Do you know what SARCASM means?

    I wonder WHY The Champ is not in the card this time. Maybe he could interfere in a match? I think that is a good idea. Enforcer?
     
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  23. Steamboat Ricky

    Steamboat Ricky WZCW's Living Legend

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    Are you guys referring to my Carmina Burana promo? Or the best promo the world has ever seen:

    "I am Steamboat Ricky. I am going to beat Gus."


    Haha. Which one?
     
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  24. Lee

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    to both really. Both are good, well done.

    Also Gus great work ont he formatting there, I always find it easier to read if you do line breaks between everyone who speaks or actions as well as the colours, hope that helps you.

    And will, I wish you were against someone who was still about, your promos are fantastic.

    Michigan, you haven't failed to pull out a corker yet again.

    Everyone else I've already mentioned, but a great job guys, well done.
     
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  25. TheOneBigWill

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    Thanks Flame, I know Spiral isn't here so its kinda one sided.. but assuming (I have to say assuming cause its not exactly 100% guaranteed) I advance.. whomever I face I'll give even more to.

    Flame, I honestly fear you or Coconut facing me in this thing, cause I don't know if I can handle the fireworks the two of you are putting on.

    That of course isn't to say I don't fear facing the likes of anyone else, because Gus & Steamboat are going back & forth almost the same.. & by El Guerrero's last RP, he's definately trouble..

    Sincade & Everest are going back & forth as well.. I can't wait to see how the entire show looks. Hopefully my match is put together well, I can't imagine how hard it must be to write for someone that you really have no clue what their style is.
     
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