Richard Blonoff
Make America Rassle Again
I just heard a knock on my window at 1am. I'm on the second floor. #2spooky4me
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I just heard a knock on my window at 1am. I'm on the second floor. #2spooky4me
Or it could be just Superman.
I'm just wondering if Veejay vs Noah Ryder is the smallest match to read, ever (not counting no-shows).
So, I caught my son's cold, been puking all day, I won't get anything in on time, but I can post in random thread if need be, don't mind the L, just don't want a no show
Dude gross. Get better. I'll leave the thread open so both you and FunKay have a chance to get something in so you don't no show.
No point, the deadline was two days ago.
I'd go with the guy in charge of everything.Uh, which one of these am I supposed to follow?
Anarchy.
I recently became a supervisor at the restaurant I work at and got moved to second shift, which can be pretty draining to be sure.
still feel like hot gahbage
Me and commas don't get along. I'll work on this.ShinChan™;5608461 said:Biggest flaw: GRAMMAR. I guess that there are only 4-5 commas in the whole RolePlay. I think that atleast a dozen more were required. It created a bunch of confusion. Which easily worsened the reading experience.
Numbers hit what I was trying to do on the head. Settling all those differences would have sped things up and left me with nothing for the future.ShinChan™;5608461 said:Plus, making Angelo too aggressive was a wrong decision. Instead, you could have settled all the differences between them since Tony had earned a title match.
He's an emotionally/verbally abusive father tearing down his son so of course they're untrue & baseless. Doesn't mean they don't mess with Tony's Psyche and sense of self worth thoughShinChan™;5608461 said:I wanted to sympathize with Tony as your motive was. But Angelo's most claims were baseless.
His opponents were the last thing on his mind so just mentioning them in passing seemed the right thing to do for the story I was telling. I may lose but I doubt it'll be because I didn't spend a page talking about Xaitlyn & Vee.ShinChan™;5608461 said:You could have instead concentrated more on your opponents.
So maybe I didn't get what you were trying to do with his father. Sorry.Me and commas don't get along. I'll work on this.
Numbers hit what I was trying to do on the head. Settling all those differences would have sped things up and left me with nothing for the future.
He's an emotionally/verbally abusive father tearing down his son so of course they're untrue & baseless. Doesn't mean they don't mess with Tony's Psyche and sense of self worth though
His opponents were the last thing on his mind so just mentioning them in passing seemed the right thing to do for the story I was telling. I may lose but I doubt it'll be because I didn't spend a page talking about Xaitlyn & Vee.
No need to apologize. You can only go by what you read.ShinChan;5608703 said:So maybe I didn't get what you were trying to do with his father. Sorry.
With his father tearing him down the only thing on his mind would be his father. That's why I didn't have him do it, it just wouldn't have fit with what I was trying to do if he stopped to talk about Xaitlyn & VeeShinChan;5608703 said:I didn't want Tony to spend a page talking about Xaitlyn and Vee. That's a big exaggeration. Instead of Angelo attacking Tony's opponents, I would have preferred Tony doing so.
I always do.ShinChan;5608703 said:That's just my opinion. You should do whatever you feel like profits Tomy.
ShinChan;5608703 said:That's just my opinion. You should do whatever you feel like profits Tomy.
Tony's Dog.Who's that?