I'm going over my feedback right now. Shit, I could use some feedback. So many grammatical errors and wrong words. I blame my computer though, I think this will be the last Mac that I own.
WZCW Discussion Thread
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I'm going over my feedback right now. Shit, I could use some feedback. So many grammatical errors and wrong words. I blame my computer though, I think this will be the last Mac that I own.
An $11 hooker.
Jeff Deliverer of Mail
Money for nothin, chicks for free
I could feedback your feedback if you want Showtime.
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Yeah, great feedback, Show. A lot of people will find that very informative. And a lot of it mirrors my own thoughts. For those who want to know my thoughts on (almost) all of the matches, I'll be posting my feedback for (almost) all of the people who took part in this round after the shows are posted.
Find'er Woo'er Ryder
:( lost ma Mayhem Title
Jeff Deliverer of Mail
Money for nothin, chicks for free
There's a new App out now called- Grammarly - going to use it for all future RPs. What do you use to check your RP for errors? I used Free Spell Check online but that only goes so far. This Grammarly is supposed to not only spell check, but also fix sentence structure and correct wording as well.
I use nothing other than myself.
Hyorinmaru
Sit Upon The Frozen Heavens
http://freespellcheckers.com/
I just found this and it works pretty good so I'm gonna start using it with my All-Stars RP
I just found this and it works pretty good so I'm gonna start using it with my All-Stars RP
Awesome. Looking forward to that.
Call me old fashioned, but I prefer to try to catch my own errors than to rely on any type of software or website to do it for me. It may flag things as errors when I know for a fact they are correct. Same reason many people hate Autocorrect.
Hyorinmaru
Sit Upon The Frozen Heavens
This scares me a little bit
It shouldn't. Even if it comes back negative, a feedback from a veteran Creative member is always a good thing considering they are the ones determining the official results.
Hyorinmaru
Sit Upon The Frozen Heavens
My brain knows this but my first instinct is to curl up and a desire to quit hits me. I actually have to read it twice to actually get what they're saying and process it.
Counter-argument.
When Showtimes says this:
Not only can you recreate this type of moment. You should do it in every single one of your RPs from here till the end of time. Own it. Make "Tony's parents die-but-not-really a mafia-ish death" the selling point of everything you write. If you really want, this can be something I've long dreamed of: WZCW's version of Tim White's Lunchtime Suicides.
Do it, Milenko. Don't think. Unless thinking helped you write this round's RP. Then definitely think.
When Showtimes says this:
he's showing how little he understands creative writing.
Not only can you recreate this type of moment. You should do it in every single one of your RPs from here till the end of time. Own it. Make "Tony's parents die-but-not-really a mafia-ish death" the selling point of everything you write. If you really want, this can be something I've long dreamed of: WZCW's version of Tim White's Lunchtime Suicides.
Do it, Milenko. Don't think. Unless thinking helped you write this round's RP. Then definitely think.
Hyorinmaru
Sit Upon The Frozen Heavens
In order for me to do this I have to know what you're talking about...which I don't.
Richard Blonoff
Make America Rassle Again
Happy birthday to both Milenko and FWR. I expect whoever is writing that match to include a giant birthday cake with strippers inside to pop out and sex up both Manson and Mancini.
Da Prophet
Mid-Card Championship Winner
This is perhaps the best idea of all time. It's right up there with Milenko/FWR's match being a lumberjack match consisting of their past characters.
Hyorinmaru
Sit Upon The Frozen Heavens
One of my past characters was part of the Swag Pack.
Hyorinmaru
Sit Upon The Frozen Heavens
I value all input.Well I'm glad everyone here thinks so fondly of my input.Couple more feedback posted, finish the rest another midnight.
Your input has given me the basis for my next RP for the Roulette rounds
Richard Blonoff
Make America Rassle Again
I can't sleep, so have an Unscripted sneak peak, with the official theme song picked by yours truly.
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[YOUTUBE]0XboRkCEqKo[/YOUTUBE]
Find'er Woo'er Ryder
:( lost ma Mayhem Title
Thanks man. I do love strippers.
Jeff Deliverer of Mail
Money for nothin, chicks for free
This has a good outline for a gimmick-type RP. Every RP Tony's Parents die in horrific fashion, Tony is trying to come to grips on his own reality and starts to slowly lose his mind. The reader only getting little hints here and there on what really happened. This would be a major turn around for the character and it could have interesting upsides. The downside would be; taking Tony seriously anymore and it just starts to blur the line between comedy and seriousness. Plus, there's already two or three WZCW characters that have issues going on in their heads. One more might make it too much.
If anything Frank N Stein, your RP has generated chatter in the boards. That's better than having a boring, unmemorable RP.
Hyorinmaru
Sit Upon The Frozen Heavens
I'm getting the World title as a birthday present right?
