WZCW Discussion Thread

[Lee]

Lee – I like this alright. The first person, almost noir style is intriguing, although sometimes I find Titus’s narration a little long winded.

This was due to me originally planning it 100% Titus telling it.

Perhaps interposing traditional third person narration with first person lines of thought might have served better. At first I was a little underwhelmed by the scene, thinking that maybe you should have had a bigger thing for the world title win, but I thought about it, and I like this. Just going into an old bar to celebrate quietly. It’s different, it fits the character, and I like it.

That was the aim, I did the big party with the other two title wins so this made it seem a bit more something.

Occasional writing error here and there, not massive, as always, rigorous proofreading helps, if it’s something you even care about.
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It is and I usually have a 24 hour rule but I was pretty rushed for time on this one.

It should also be noted that every character in this RP links to another.

Cheers for the feedback, just felt the need to defend the last one.

 

[Remix]

Interesting development...

 

[FunKay the Inevitable]

I can tell you right now you can expect some crazy stuff ahead of this round. And that's without even factoring in the draw.

 

[Remix]

I can tell you right now you can expect some crazy stuff ahead of this round. And that's without even factoring in the draw.

I think I know what one of the surprises will be...

 

[a0161613]

It's mental.

 

[Lee]

I hope Doug Crashin buys half the shares.

 

[Gelgarin]

£20 on Bateman not claiming universal control of the company.

Still, I'm glad that the important half of the gruesome twosome is still about. Saves me U-turning out of a plot cul-de-sac.

 

[FunKay the Inevitable]

I think I know what one of the surprises will be...

Feel free to PM me about it...

 

[Uncle Phatso]

What a terrible time for me to leave.

 

[Барбоса]

Chuck was tired of dealing with Barbosa

 

[Daniel]

What a terrible time for me to leave.

Same. I kind of miss it.

 

[The Doctor]

Hmmm...other feds I'm in have also been selling half the company to mystery buyers. Must be the economy. In one of them, Claudio Castagnoli was the mystery buyer. In the other, my rich heel character purchased the company, became GM, and started granting his faction title shots.

This means only one thing...

THE ERA OF DOUG CRASHIN HAS ARRIVED.

 

[Viola Moonlight]

Crashin Movement 4 Lyfe... now, where's my guaranteed ME match for KC IV?

 

[FunKay the Inevitable]

Crashin Movement 4 Lyfe

 

[Барбоса]

A year of being WZCW Champion must have been very lucrative

 

[Remix]

A year of being WZCW Champion must have been very lucrative

You think Ty's buying the shares? Interesting theory.

 

[Leeds Guy]

Interesting, cant wait for the shows

 

[FunKay the Inevitable]

Just as I extended an arm to Remix to send me a PM on what you guys think, feel free to shoot me one if you have any guesses.

 

[Барбоса]

The only question I was going to ask was whether all of Creative know

 

[Ty Burna]

A year of being WZCW Champion must have been very lucrative

If it was I'd have a diamond chalice to drink from instead of the red solo cup my crown royal currently sits in.

 

[Bernkastel]

Dun dun, dun... dun... dun... duuuuuuuuun!

 

[Baller]

Damn these shows are going to be crazy this week.

The Roulette, New Owner, and the 1/14/12 promo reveal!

 

[Барбоса]

The Roulette, New Owner, and the 1/14/12 promo reveal!

Perhaps New Owner = 1/14/12 promo

 

[JGlass]

Shit... maybe it wasn't Myles that had Saboteur dragged into the woods. Maybe it was someone else entirely!

I'm looking at you... ARMANDO PARADYSE!

 

[Kermit]