WZCW Discussion Thread

[Jeff Deliverer of Mail]

Watched Jumanji last night, wasn't bad. Second half fizzled out a bit but a fairly fun movie overall. Now I'm working on my smoldering intensity strength.

 

[Lee]

http://forums.wrestlezone.com/showthread.php?p=5801397#post5801397

By the numbers is live!

For those waiting on the shows. We will be starting a live discussion with drip feeds of the show from 6pm eastern time tomorrow. Get hyped!

 

[Lee]

We're 7 hours away from the Lethal Lottery. Get hype!

 

[BK Styles]

We're 7 hours away from the Lethal Lottery. Get hype!

My body is ready.

 

[Lee]

The full show is now up!

 

[Richard Blonoff]

The show

 

[Richard Blonoff]

Oh, if you guys, as in anyone, could please do me a personal favor. The WHC was the first match I have written in like a year, I don't need like detailed feedback but if you could let me know how you liked it, it would mean a lot.

I will give some more detailed thoughts over the weekend, but another solid LL in the books. Big ups to creative.

 

[Jeff Deliverer of Mail]

Oh, if you guys, as in anyone, could please do me a personal favor. The WHC was the first match I have written in like a year, I don't need like detailed feedback but if you could let me know how you liked it, it would mean a lot.

I will give some more detailed thoughts over the weekend, but another solid LL in the books. Big ups to creative.

It was a great match, super detailed and creative. I loved the submission block to prevent Batti from tapping. I also liked having entrances and pre match ceremonies in Italic, it looks better. Pinfalls , special moves could have been bolded though and signatures at least in Italics. One paragraph has 4 pin falls all non bolded and it just doesn't grab the eye. But those are super minor, cosmetic details that barely take away from the action. I also really like the commentary and (In between move sets) detail added throughout the match. It's always a better read if you have flowing detail instead of - Move, move, move, pin fall attempt. Move, move, assume punches in here somewhere, move, move, assume rest hold here somewhere, move, move....ect ect ect is boring as hell to read but you didn't do that. Couldn't have asked for a better triple threat match Yaz.

#Jabariforworldchampion

 

[Lee]

Personally I'm against the bold for the pins as it makes it easy to spot the ending by mistake.

 

[Dmbfantomas]

To quote Bono,

Faraway, So Close!

 

[Jeff Deliverer of Mail]

Has anyone played Battlefront 2? That shit is good yo. I'm a fairly big Star Wars nerd and this game hits all my sweet spots. It's one of the prettiest games on the market IMO. I could give two fucks if there's microtransactions in it or not, I don't buy them anyway.

 

[Richard Blonoff]

It was a great match, super detailed and creative. I loved the submission block to prevent Batti from tapping. I also liked having entrances and pre match ceremonies in Italic, it looks better. Pinfalls , special moves could have been bolded though and signatures at least in Italics. One paragraph has 4 pin falls all non bolded and it just doesn't grab the eye. But those are super minor, cosmetic details that barely take away from the action. I also really like the commentary and (In between move sets) detail added throughout the match. It's always a better read if you have flowing detail instead of - Move, move, move, pin fall attempt. Move, move, assume punches in here somewhere, move, move, assume rest hold here somewhere, move, move....ect ect ect is boring as hell to read but you didn't do that. Couldn't have asked for a better triple threat match Yaz.

#Jabariforworldchampion

Personally I'm against the bold for the pins as it makes it easy to spot the ending by mistake.

Thanks Jeffrey. Are you related to the Toys R Us giraffe by chance? Tough break for that guy.

I decided not to bold the pinfalls after a chat I had with Lee recently. I had always put them in bold before, but I found that if you don't bold and make certain things stand out, then it makes it harder to ruin something and invites people to read the entire match instead of just the big spots. Keep the actual ring announcer bolded so if people are skimming and want to read the whole thing later they can, but a bunch of excess formatting can really throw people off imo.

 

[Jeff Deliverer of Mail]

Thanks Jeffrey. Are you related to the Toys R Us giraffe by chance? Tough break for that guy.

I decided not to bold the pinfalls after a chat I had with Lee recently. I had always put them in bold before, but I found that if you don't bold and make certain things stand out, then it makes it harder to ruin something and invites people to read the entire match instead of just the big spots. Keep the actual ring announcer bolded so if people are skimming and want to read the whole thing later they can, but a bunch of excess formatting can really throw people off imo.

No but I heard he showed up half drunk on Jimmy Kimmel Live and blasted Amazon. Have to watch that later.

 

[Richard Blonoff]

Penis.

 

[Viola Moonlight]

I'm down.

 

[Jeff Deliverer of Mail]

Just to let everyone know, I'm in the middle of an epic snowstorm right now. So while you people relax in the Sun, sipping Martinis and watching bikini clad women giggle and play volleyball, I'm surviving a blizzard, taking my dog out, then watching T.V because we got hauled off the roads it was too dangerous to deliver mail.

 

[Hyorinmaru]

What about the mailman's creed?

 

[Richard Blonoff]

Yeah! Next you are gonna tell me Santa Claus isn't real!

 

[Jeff Deliverer of Mail]

Sometimes it's just a little too extreme, like when you can't see ten feet in front of your truck and your rear view mirrors fill up so fast that your constantly stopping to clear them....




....plus I wanted an easy day, I could've stayed out longer if I wanted. Don't tell my boss.

 

[Jeff Deliverer of Mail]

Who's ready for...The Highway to Kingdom Come!! ?

What will the matches look like?

I can't even imagine what will happen during these next rounds on the path to the supershow of shows!

Will Jeff get his RockPOD completed?

Will Dave, Lee, Yaz have their own podcast to try and compete with the RockPOD?

What will happen?

 

[Dave]

The final card is shaping up great actually. I think we have the card for the shows all planned out now. New cards for the upcoming set of shows will come tomorrow, along with a special announcement.

 

[Jeff Deliverer of Mail]

There has been weird shit happening in this house since we moved in years ago. We're pretty convinced it's fucking haunted. My roommate upstairs just watched something move on her cameras she has set up all over the house. I'm downstairs playing NHL 18 on the PS4. Nice to see the shadow standing next to the television.

 

[Jeff Deliverer of Mail]

Shit, is this fake folks? If you zoom in on that shadow you can actually see a hood and wrinkles in a coat

 

[Richard Blonoff]

Lay off the maple syrup Jeff.

 

[Viola Moonlight]

I am excite for the boards to open up. I already know what I'm doing for my RP. Been waiting for the hometown to come up