Prince Vee
Better than I think I am
Happened to me many a times. It would sound freaking awesome in your head but not as good as you thought when you write.
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Hyorinmaru
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happens to me almost every time.
It sucks
It sucks
Same Pinch, sir.
Prince Vee
Better than I think I am
As I promised, here are the show reviews for Ascension. Much things needed to be taken care of and I want the creative members consider it and respond to it.
One more thing for which I didn't want to take the show review area. Xaitlyn's moveset should be revised. I know she's like a superhuman character but Pumphandle Gut Buster, Tirl-a-Whirl backbreaker and Fireman Carry variations doesn't make much sense. Both the Fireman Carry manoeuvres in her normally used moves are finishers for Ricochet aka Prince Puma. It's going to be tough for the writers to book her in a lengthy singles match with this moveset.
One more thing for which I didn't want to take the show review area. Xaitlyn's moveset should be revised. I know she's like a superhuman character but Pumphandle Gut Buster, Tirl-a-Whirl backbreaker and Fireman Carry variations doesn't make much sense. Both the Fireman Carry manoeuvres in her normally used moves are finishers for Ricochet aka Prince Puma. It's going to be tough for the writers to book her in a lengthy singles match with this moveset.
She isn't a superhuman but a lot more that. I didn't know that Prince Puma used one of these finishers. He does use Fireman Carry into an overhead kick but not the other variation. The other variation aka Fireman's Carry into a knee on the back of head is a regular move of AJ Styles. So the moveset is right enough.
I think the issue isn't with the move, more that it's a move that a woman who struggle to do on a man.
That Fireman Carry neckbreaker is a fine example. Styles can do it to Cena but could Charlotte do it to Styles?
Probably not. I'm not sure it's the biggest issue as Yaz said some time back that the move set was OK.
Whoa, this is not All Stars.
I've missed your last couple of RP's but that's the kind of thing you mention early on.
Find'er Woo'er Ryder
:( lost ma Mayhem Title
Is she an alien robot?
Jeff Deliverer of Mail
Money for nothin, chicks for free
She can transform into a snake. 
Spidey Revivey
Porn is okay here long as it ain't dudes.
Y'all motherfuckers need Krypto.
Reminder that Krypto won the mentorship program.
Also, guys, this is fake fake wrestling. I get the whole "don't load your moveset up with finishers" mentality for sure, but if he wants Xaitlyn to do a burning hammer on Wasabi Toyota, let her do a burning hammer on Wasabi Toyota.
Also, guys, this is fake fake wrestling. I get the whole "don't load your moveset up with finishers" mentality for sure, but if he wants Xaitlyn to do a burning hammer on Wasabi Toyota, let her do a burning hammer on Wasabi Toyota.
That completely destroys her whole motive to join WZCW.
Nopes.
She is an Icchadhari Naagin.She can transform into a snake.
Ichchadhari Nag (male) or Nagin (female) is a mythical shape-shifting Cobra in Indian folklore. This creature was originally a venomous cobra which could take the form of any living thing after reaching certain age. Any snake which completes 100 years, get the spiritual powers for changing its forms and preserving its poison by not biting any living being. It prefers to be in the form of a human being most of the time.
I would prefer kayfabe over fake though.
Her gimmick is actually a REAL happening. It has happened in reality.
And I didn't want any finisher to be a regular move. I didn't know that Prince Puma used that move as finisher.
And I need to know who Toyota is in wrestling. The only Toyota I know about is cars.
Find'er Woo'er Ryder
:( lost ma Mayhem Title
Wasabi Toyota was a sumo wrestler in wzcw a few years back.
Hyorinmaru
Sit Upon The Frozen Heavens
what is her motive? we don't really know that. it's something you could mold a whole cycle's worth or RPs around if not more.
Jeff Deliverer of Mail
Money for nothin, chicks for free
So a snake has turned into a woman in reality? I'm hanging out in the wrong places. 
You're intended to not know it so soon. I have already planned its timing,sir.
Hyorinmaru
Sit Upon The Frozen Heavens
fair enough but don't draw it out to long or people will lose interest if they haven't already.
People's interest is secondary. First I should have interest in writing as Xaitlyn.
Next Xaitlyn is a short term project. Because of her gimmick. Kingdom Come X is the maximum MAXIMUM i can write her.
It shouldn't be. You're writing for your own enjoyment, yes, as no one would want to be stuck writing a character for themselves that they hate.... But you need to keep your audience in mind. You're also writing for everyone else in the fed. We all have to change up our writing to keep the interest of other readers, it's part of the process.
I do like the idea of a folklore-based character. Like, a lot. That's really cool.
Hyorinmaru
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me too but if he's only going until Kingdom Come then I can't see myself getting to invested in it.
But that's secondary for me, sir. I have to KEEP my writing style and thinking as I love it to be. Of course, I would want my english and grammar etc improved. I might sound mean in this but I would prefer me loving to RolePlay and losing every match due to everyone disliking it OVER me winning every match due to everyone liking my moulded and unoriginal work.
