WZCW Discussion Thread

[Skairipa Matrix]

Yes, but that was another case of two bad RPs and I voted for the one that wasn't as bad. In fact, I can give you my exact quote on that match...



Basically it was the exact same problem as your Supershow RP: too much stuff in too little a space.

And I know the rhetoric here is a little tense, but I'm just trying to be straight with you. I don't want to hurt your feelings or turn you off from the fed, but I also want you to know that your RPs are just not cutting it right now.

I just can't win.

I've been told to make my RP's longer and put more content in so I do for the last two rounds and get told its too much content for one RP.

Last round I was covering what IHW was going to have in his RP when he no showed.

Another thing is I realize I should have PM'ed creative but I just pissed off and wasn't using common sense.

 

[Infinity]

He used hashtags and is currently my lapdog.

DENIED!

#dammit

 

[Viola Moonlight]

Title shot inbound.

 

[The Crock]

Like you say, things happen. He's okay, at least. I was genuinely worried about him but I just checked and he just started posting on Twitter again after a long absence. I think he might just have gotten really busy really quickly. I hold no ill-will towards the guy, considering he's a stand-up dude. Agreed that it's a shame for all involved but ah well. Things are things, you know?

Maybe I should drop him a message and sweet-talk him.

Very glad to hear it. I figured he was really busy, since he mentioned having a lot of work during the cycle where we faced you guys. Real life takes priority, obviously.

Oh, but I still plan on winning those tag titles at Kingdom Come. #kayfabe #brotherdudejack

 

[FlexAmerican Dynamite]

Title shot inbound.

I want SHIT's Elite X title now Falkon, it's the least you can do.

 

[TheRealDC]

I just can't win.

I've been told to make my RP's longer and put more content in so I do for the last two rounds and get told its too much content for one RP.

Last round I was covering what IHW was going to have in his RP when he no showed.

Another thing is I realize I should have PM'ed creative but I just pissed off and wasn't using common sense.

I'll make you an offer, and you can chose to accept it or not. I'm pretty well versed in stretching out storylines. I can help you set up some plot goals for your RPs and give you some advice on how to move forward without cramming too much into one. If you want it, send me a PM with what you want to accomplish from now til the next ppv after KC. And I'll show you what i have planned and how I map things.

 

[Skairipa Matrix]

I'll make you an offer, and you can chose to accept it or not. I'm pretty well versed in stretching out storylines. I can help you set up some plot goals for your RPs and give you some advice on how to move forward without cramming too much into one. If you want it, send me a PM with what you want to accomplish from now til the next ppv after KC. And I'll show you what i have planned and how I map things.

Will probably take you up on this offer later on.

 

[gd]

You act like a elitest fuck a lot actually. So why is my calling you a smug prick a problem? Four dudes jumped down his throat over him being upset. That shit gets on my nerves. I know your all creative. But if one memeber is handling it, he responded back to J. And j was trying to handle it and was doing ok. You don't need to jump on the " hey I'm creative, ill stroke my e- ego and pile more bullshit on top of a powder keg".



It is to me... why was I always told to take it to pm, but when three dudes are going ham on someone for being upset it's cool. This is the shit that makes people leave. Don't sugar coat shit, but don't as a creative member tell someone that " shit happens bro".

Take that shit to pm, its what I do now.

All in all he should have won that match, I'm sorry. I'm happy with my situation, sucks that I'm not on the real card. First time for everythting though.

*you're

 

[JGlass]

I just can't win.

I've been told to make my RP's longer and put more content in so I do for the last two rounds and get told its too much content for one RP.

Last round I was covering what IHW was going to have in his RP when he no showed.

Another thing is I realize I should have PM'ed creative but I just pissed off and wasn't using common sense.

Your RPs right now are a good length, but they are cluttered. Right now there are two things I think you need to write good RPs: focus and theme.

When I say focus, I don't mean like, attention span, though paying attention to your RPs is good too. I mean you need to pick a certain story and stick to it. Few things are worse than an RP that can't decide what it's about. Is it an interview? Is it a reflection? Is it plot development for a story? Is it a story in and of itself? That's the type of question you need to answer when you start your RP: what type of RP is this going to be? Once you answer that, stick to your answer. Don't try to make it both, because few people can pull that off, and most of those people are at the top of the card right now.

Second, you need to come up with a theme, and don't deviate from that theme too much. Some of my favorite RP'ers right now work with themes, namely Dr. Zeus, Drake Callahan, and Izzy Stone. Note, you don't have to be a heel to work a theme, as I think Saxton and Saboteur have been known to do it well, and El Califa Dragon did it too, but you are a heel, so you should have plenty of company. For instance, Sam Smith wrote a fantastic RP last week about fear. I wrote a shitty one about chaos, but it had a theme, so people thought it was okay. One of my favorite Califa RPs was about duality (the one with the swinging lightbulb). Of course, the theme of your RP doesn't have to be as abstract as anger or revenge or teamwork: it could be as carnal as beating the shit out of people. Alex Bowen had an RP with that theme two rounds ago (I think), and it was a very solid RP.

Look at your RPs for the past two weeks. Could you say they were focused? Could you say they were thematic? I realize that you can't just flip a switch and suddenly write focused, thematic RPs, but I can at least encourage you to try, and hopefully with some practice you'll get there soon.

And taking stuff to PM is overrated. It's so much more fun when everyone can see you. It's why I jerk off with the stall door open.

 

[Viola Moonlight]

Your RPs right now are a good length, but they are cluttered. Right now there are two things I think you need to write good RPs: focus and theme.

When I say focus, I don't mean like, attention span, though paying attention to your RPs is good too. I mean you need to pick a certain story and stick to it. Few things are worse than an RP that can't decide what it's about. Is it an interview? Is it a reflection? Is it plot development for a story? Is it a story in and of itself? That's the type of question you need to answer when you start your RP: what type of RP is this going to be? Once you answer that, stick to your answer. Don't try to make it both, because few people can pull that off, and most of those people are at the top of the card right now.

Second, you need to come up with a theme, and don't deviate from that theme too much. Some of my favorite RP'ers right now work with themes, namely Dr. Zeus, Drake Callahan, and Izzy Stone. Note, you don't have to be a heel to work a theme, as I think Saxton and Saboteur have been known to do it well, and El Califa Dragon did it too, but you are a heel, so you should have plenty of company. For instance, Sam Smith wrote a fantastic RP last week about fear. I wrote a shitty one about chaos, but it had a theme, so people thought it was okay. One of my favorite Califa RPs was about duality (the one with the swinging lightbulb). Of course, the theme of your RP doesn't have to be as abstract as anger or revenge or teamwork: it could be as carnal as beating the shit out of people. Alex Bowen had an RP with that theme two rounds ago (I think), and it was a very solid RP.

Look at your RPs for the past two weeks. Could you say they were focused? Could you say they were thematic? I realize that you can't just flip a switch and suddenly write focused, thematic RPs, but I can at least encourage you to try, and hopefully with some practice you'll get there soon.

And taking stuff to PM is overrated. It's so much more fun when everyone can see you. It's why I jerk off with the stall door open.

Speaking of chaos, I can't believe Saxton tackled Big Dave and lived to tell the tale. Big Dave, I mean, not Saxton.

 

[JGlass]

Speaking of chaos, I can't believe Saxton tackled Big Dave and lived to tell the tale. Big Dave, I mean, not Saxton.

I'm currently floating a theory that it's not the same Big Dave, kind of like how Season 4-6 Aunt Vivian from Fresh Prince isn't the same as Season 1-3 Aunt Vivian.

 

[Ty Burna]

Speaking of chaos, I can't believe Saxton tackled Big Dave and lived to tell the tale. Big Dave, I mean, not Saxton.

 

[Infinity]

The new Big Dave isn't as black?

 

[The Crock]

He's not quite as good of a dancer, though.

 

[JGlass]

The new Big Dave isn't as black?

Significantly less black, and much less talented. Don't worry, though, we plan on using him much less anyway, and Uncle Vance much more.

 

[Viola Moonlight]

Confirmed Kingdom Come card in the WZCW.com section with possible order.

 

[FlexAmerican Dynamite]

Creative Nazi's locking the main page thread.

 

[The Crock]

FalKon locked our .com thread. ABUSE OF POWER!

 

[Skairipa Matrix]

So what exactly is a 3 stages of manliness match?

 

[Bernkastel]

Lets all come on to Falkon like no one's ever come on him before.

 

[Theo Mays]

So what exactly is a 3 stages of manliness match?

Don't know, but it should be awesome.

 

[FlexAmerican Dynamite]

Unlock the thread Falkon you worthless Australian.

 

[Viola Moonlight]

So what exactly is a 3 stages of manliness match?

Remove "match" and replace with "competition". The rest you'll have to wait for when you get to Kingdom Come.

 

[TheRealDC]

Lets all come on to Falkon like no one's ever come on him before.

Giggidy

 

[Da Prophet]

Unlock the thread Falkon you worthless Australian.