Avitus25’s The Best Smackdown Review
I’ll be honest… I haven’t read any of the other posts in your thread as I’ve only just really returned to the section… but I’ll do my best reviewing Smackdown!
--- I like the commentary style straight off… Cole is as big a personality here as he is in real life so I’m looking forward to seeing how you write his commentary throughout the rest of the show. Morrison as World Champ is interesting… a lot of the other threads are pushing Morrison but to my recollection none of those I’ve read have his as World Champ so I’m definitely interested to see how you use him. I liked his promo… sounds like Morrison’s character would actually say all of those things… Storm v Morrison should be a pretty damn epic match… hope it lives up to the expectation… I liked how you wrote for Storm as well… strikes me as very similar to Punk this past few weeks in the WWE…just hope it doesn’t get too similar!
--- Jericho and Vickie!? Could be an interesting combination if this goes anywhere… two of the best heat-gatherers in wrestling… could be very interesting… Interested for Jericho and HHH… I’ll be honest I actually laughed at HHH’s comment! Sounds like something Triple H would actually say as well… this should be interesting with these two!
--- Ryder and Cole? Could be an interesting feud to happen… don’t know if I’m interested in Cole getting involved in a feud again though…
--- You seem to have talent when it comes to writing matches… I liked this a lot… a little bit of extra description might not hurt when it gets to bigger matches but this was pretty much spot on… good work! I liked all the dynamics going on in this match and I’m intrigued to see where all the participants go from here on… Hennig looks to be a major player in your BT doesn’t he!?
--- I really liked the Barrett promo and his interaction with Maria in the back… I’d be very surprised if Barrett didn’t come out of this match with the win… It’d do a lot more for his character and credibility than any of the other competitors… and (I don’t know whether this is just my personal feelings towards Barrett) he’s definitely a rising star and this would just push him that little bit further…
--- I like the challenge from Henry… something a little bit different… Also liking the dynamic of this feud between V/Henry and Kane/Undertaker… I liked the intensity that Kane showed here tonight… Cole with duct tape over his mouth? I think I’ve had dreams where that’s happened… interested to see where that goes… Ryder?
--- Jericho-HHH confrontation… not quite sure what to make of the pig comments! Refreshing to see a move away from PG but I’m not sure… just feels a bit… inappropriate? Probably just me… HHH’s comment about Joey Mercury winning the title is the EXACT type of comment he would make (and get flamed for by the internet but still!).
--- I like the confrontation but I don’t understand why Jericho invited him to the highlight reel next week rather than just carrying it on tonight? Also you didn’t explain how Cole got back in a fit state to commentate after being duct-taped? This feud is rather interesting though… just a few little niggles…
--- Morrison v Storm – REALLY hoping Morrison keeps the title… Rather short match and I don’t understand why it wasn’t the Main Event… how often do you see a World Title being defended on a TV show that isn’t the Main Event slot? Really discredits the title… Quite a short match as well… expected more between these two because of it being a title match and stuff… maybe just something to think about for next time…
--- Right Main Event time… That’s more like it… really good match… don’t know if we needed another appearance from Kane though… This is a much better length… I just wish the World Title match had been this length…
--- Overall… a very good show… some of the bits were a bit questionable (the pig, world title match on as pre-main event, Cole’s miraculous recovery etc.) but overall it was an enjoyable read. 4 Matches is probably the minimum amount you could get away with… I’d make sure not to ever include any less in a show… Keep it up though I’ll definitely continue reading!
--- Plus, feel free to drop me a review if you get any spare time!
I’ll be honest… I haven’t read any of the other posts in your thread as I’ve only just really returned to the section… but I’ll do my best reviewing Smackdown!
--- I like the commentary style straight off… Cole is as big a personality here as he is in real life so I’m looking forward to seeing how you write his commentary throughout the rest of the show. Morrison as World Champ is interesting… a lot of the other threads are pushing Morrison but to my recollection none of those I’ve read have his as World Champ so I’m definitely interested to see how you use him. I liked his promo… sounds like Morrison’s character would actually say all of those things… Storm v Morrison should be a pretty damn epic match… hope it lives up to the expectation… I liked how you wrote for Storm as well… strikes me as very similar to Punk this past few weeks in the WWE…just hope it doesn’t get too similar!
--- Jericho and Vickie!? Could be an interesting combination if this goes anywhere… two of the best heat-gatherers in wrestling… could be very interesting… Interested for Jericho and HHH… I’ll be honest I actually laughed at HHH’s comment! Sounds like something Triple H would actually say as well… this should be interesting with these two!
--- Ryder and Cole? Could be an interesting feud to happen… don’t know if I’m interested in Cole getting involved in a feud again though…
--- You seem to have talent when it comes to writing matches… I liked this a lot… a little bit of extra description might not hurt when it gets to bigger matches but this was pretty much spot on… good work! I liked all the dynamics going on in this match and I’m intrigued to see where all the participants go from here on… Hennig looks to be a major player in your BT doesn’t he!?
--- I really liked the Barrett promo and his interaction with Maria in the back… I’d be very surprised if Barrett didn’t come out of this match with the win… It’d do a lot more for his character and credibility than any of the other competitors… and (I don’t know whether this is just my personal feelings towards Barrett) he’s definitely a rising star and this would just push him that little bit further…
--- I like the challenge from Henry… something a little bit different… Also liking the dynamic of this feud between V/Henry and Kane/Undertaker… I liked the intensity that Kane showed here tonight… Cole with duct tape over his mouth? I think I’ve had dreams where that’s happened… interested to see where that goes… Ryder?
--- Jericho-HHH confrontation… not quite sure what to make of the pig comments! Refreshing to see a move away from PG but I’m not sure… just feels a bit… inappropriate? Probably just me… HHH’s comment about Joey Mercury winning the title is the EXACT type of comment he would make (and get flamed for by the internet but still!).
--- I like the confrontation but I don’t understand why Jericho invited him to the highlight reel next week rather than just carrying it on tonight? Also you didn’t explain how Cole got back in a fit state to commentate after being duct-taped? This feud is rather interesting though… just a few little niggles…
--- Morrison v Storm – REALLY hoping Morrison keeps the title… Rather short match and I don’t understand why it wasn’t the Main Event… how often do you see a World Title being defended on a TV show that isn’t the Main Event slot? Really discredits the title… Quite a short match as well… expected more between these two because of it being a title match and stuff… maybe just something to think about for next time…
--- Right Main Event time… That’s more like it… really good match… don’t know if we needed another appearance from Kane though… This is a much better length… I just wish the World Title match had been this length…
--- Overall… a very good show… some of the bits were a bit questionable (the pig, world title match on as pre-main event, Cole’s miraculous recovery etc.) but overall it was an enjoyable read. 4 Matches is probably the minimum amount you could get away with… I’d make sure not to ever include any less in a show… Keep it up though I’ll definitely continue reading!
--- Plus, feel free to drop me a review if you get any spare time!