OK very basic feedback from me.
Derf - i dont think you could have done any better against a character like Manzo. They were two very very good RPs and this SHOULD be the key to you stepping up. You actually push him to the limit here.
Awesome sig mate, Magikarp suck but Gyrados is my favourite original, non starter 'mon.
Iscariot - I liked it a lot; looking back is always good and I am not surprised i wasnt the only people to use it. with derf as an opponent it was pretty much the ideal time to do it. But this will actually be a tough call.
Murfish - awesome use of real life - i guess that was a mccain or obama piece? I loved how you changed it and made it relevant to the fued.
Milenko - i like how you attack GM and Norcal....good job at what i assume is short notice, good job mate.
Norcal - i know this is your second RP but as a tag champ i expected more I am afraid. It was at least three times too short. The thing is what was there - mainly all dialogue -was pretty darn good with a lot of potential. All I can suggest is that you read up on some of the rps, there are plenty archived for you to take a pick from.
Apotheosis - asking a match with murfish at the ppv shows a little lack of knowledge of previous events, especially as nothing happened between you two at the previous show to provoke it. But again your dialogue was superb (despite this) and continues to be a real highlight. Maybe lacking a little setting but it doesnt matter too much.
Ryder - pretty short but everything that was there was very good and shows a lot of potential for what you can do in the future. I especially like the last line of dialogue from you!
Kyle - quite short and overconfidence; two flaws that most n00bs will make. The key is how you come back from it.
Vengeance - two very good RPs here. It had both description and dialogue, i think you nailed it mate.
Stokes - The dedication is an awesome face tactic. And you nailed the length too. You show an amazing amount of potential with this one. Great job.
I hope we see a PPV gimmick match with you two.
Everest - great job mate...typically serious funny Everest RP. How you have only held one title I dont know.
Poor juggalo - all talk.
Will and Ricky....something is not quite right here. After the stinks that have been caused in the past where Rios didnt RP and kept the belt, I really hope and believe that there are legit reasons for neither turning up....I hope it is not a work but i dont believe it is. They have both stated that they are busy in real life. I do however hope that this plays no part in delaying the show and the next card.
I have a comment that i think would be better placed here than the discussion thread. I do feel that some members of the fed are not contributing as much they could. We all benefit from feedback and discussions but I feel that a select few are driving the discussion, but some people can do with making themselves known a little more.
Derf - i dont think you could have done any better against a character like Manzo. They were two very very good RPs and this SHOULD be the key to you stepping up. You actually push him to the limit here.
Awesome sig mate, Magikarp suck but Gyrados is my favourite original, non starter 'mon.
Iscariot - I liked it a lot; looking back is always good and I am not surprised i wasnt the only people to use it. with derf as an opponent it was pretty much the ideal time to do it. But this will actually be a tough call.
Murfish - awesome use of real life - i guess that was a mccain or obama piece? I loved how you changed it and made it relevant to the fued.
Milenko - i like how you attack GM and Norcal....good job at what i assume is short notice, good job mate.
Norcal - i know this is your second RP but as a tag champ i expected more I am afraid. It was at least three times too short. The thing is what was there - mainly all dialogue -was pretty darn good with a lot of potential. All I can suggest is that you read up on some of the rps, there are plenty archived for you to take a pick from.
Apotheosis - asking a match with murfish at the ppv shows a little lack of knowledge of previous events, especially as nothing happened between you two at the previous show to provoke it. But again your dialogue was superb (despite this) and continues to be a real highlight. Maybe lacking a little setting but it doesnt matter too much.
Ryder - pretty short but everything that was there was very good and shows a lot of potential for what you can do in the future. I especially like the last line of dialogue from you!
Kyle - quite short and overconfidence; two flaws that most n00bs will make. The key is how you come back from it.
Vengeance - two very good RPs here. It had both description and dialogue, i think you nailed it mate.
Stokes - The dedication is an awesome face tactic. And you nailed the length too. You show an amazing amount of potential with this one. Great job.
I hope we see a PPV gimmick match with you two.
Everest - great job mate...typically serious funny Everest RP. How you have only held one title I dont know.
Poor juggalo - all talk.
Will and Ricky....something is not quite right here. After the stinks that have been caused in the past where Rios didnt RP and kept the belt, I really hope and believe that there are legit reasons for neither turning up....I hope it is not a work but i dont believe it is. They have both stated that they are busy in real life. I do however hope that this plays no part in delaying the show and the next card.
I have a comment that i think would be better placed here than the discussion thread. I do feel that some members of the fed are not contributing as much they could. We all benefit from feedback and discussions but I feel that a select few are driving the discussion, but some people can do with making themselves known a little more.