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[Vega]

Hi, I need to write an English abstract for my final project, but I'm sure something is wrong or at least odd. Can somebody of you read over it and correct mistakes, please?

Thank you!

As final project for the bachelor degree course computer science at the FH Trier a system that enables robots equipped with 3D cameras to identify objects placed in front of it was developed.
An object of a certain type is positioned in front of the robot and a range image of the scene is taken. The created image is corrected and restricted to parts regarding the object. Afterwards, features are extracted from the range information and evaluated to identify the type of the object.
Two types of cameras are applied for working with the robots: TOF and stereo camera. In this paper these types are compared and differences concerning functionality, access, creation of range images and quality of received images are eloborated. Additionally, the developed software RoboRecognition is documentated.

 

[klunderbunker]

Are you looking for grammar issues and stuff like that?

 

[Uncle Sam]

Just a couple of things:

1. That first sentence doesn't make any sense to me. It should read (I think):
   "As the final project for the bachelor degree course of computer science at the FH Trier, a system that enables robots equipped with 3D cameras to identify objects placed in front of it was developed." Does that make sense to you?
2. "Documentated" isn't a word. Actually, apparently, it's old English. "Documented" is what you're looking for.

 

[Vega]

Are you looking for grammar issues and stuff like that?

Mainly.

Just a couple of things:

1. That first sentence doesn't make any sense to me. It should read (I think):
   "As the final project for the bachelor degree course of computer science at the FH Trier, a system that enables robots equipped with 3D cameras to identify objects placed in front of it was developed." Does that make sense to you?
2. "Documentated" isn't a word. Actually, apparently, it's old English. "Documented" is what you're looking for.

That's what I was looking for, thank you very much!

I think I'll leave it at that, unless there are glaring mistakes left. I've spent the past half year to get this thing done, and I'm not really in the mood to look at it much longer.