Going for it

[Fuel The Fire]

So I dont know how many people are aware but im going to try and be the most improved poster for 2010 and i hope my new topic in the tna section is showing that.
But just wanted to let people know..im going for it..im crossing the line

 

[Thriller Ant]

I like the effort, I really do. In my opinion though, you will have to work on the capitalization and punctuation. Honestly, which looks better?

Im sorry but he may have name value but I am a firm believer that he has bad new all over his face. I mean give him credit he is the bad guy razer ramon but still I think atleast someone out there has the agree with me. Bringing scott hall is a big mistake. He has a history of not showing up to shows and not being able to keep him self clean. A friend and I were watching tna monday and we both got a scary feeling that he may have been buzzed with the nwo remake segment that was made in the middle of the ring.

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I'm sorry, he may have name value, but I am a firm believer that he has bad news all over his face. I mean, give him credit, he is the bad guy Razor Ramon, but still I think at least someone out there has to agree with me. Bringing Scott Hall is a big mistake. He has a history of not showing up to shows and not being able to keep himself clean. A friend and I were watching TNA Monday and we both got a scary feeling that he may have been buzzed with the NWO remake segment that was made in the middle of the ring.

The post is good, but people will take you a lot more seriously if you take the extra few seconds to make those fixes. I wish you luck, and hope you can follow through on this!

 

[Fuel The Fire]

Thank you very much and I welcome everyone's criticism