Book This! - General Discussion

HGR said:
Also, I haven't had any feedback on my first two shows. Considering that many of you encouraged me to start doing this, I'd love to get some feedback on how I'm doing. I know with just one storyline it's probably not all that special, but some of the things I want to know are:

1) Am I doing a good job capturing the character of Antonio Cesaro. I think I am, because I can hear his voice in my head while I'm writing his lines. But I also understand that may not come off perfectly in translation.

2) How have my two matches been? I was worried about that, because it's not something I've really done before. However, I've been doing the live coverage for Wrestlezone a lot lately, and it's an extremely similar process. Except, instead of watching on TV, I just picture the match happening in my head and write it from that.

3) What did you think of the return that was included in the 1/7 Raw? Do you think he was the right guy to bring back, or would you have rather it been somebody else? Would you like to see more between Cesaro and the returning guy? And yes, I'm being intentionally vague for those who don't want it spoiled.
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Sorry man I meant to drop you some feedback two nights ago and forgot. I'll give some today or tomorrow at the latest.
 
The only issue with judging it would be that who would've done that?

Voting was the only fair way to do it.
 
GCB said:
The only issue with judging it would be that who would've done that?

Voting was the only fair way to do it.
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Agreed. Nearly time for the results! God, I hope I'm still in. I don't expect to win. Maybe make it to number 5 prehaps?
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I was wondering.. if any of you guys get a spare 15 minutes could you pop by my thread and tell me what you think of my it?

WWE Rivalrys: CM Punk vs. Jeff Hardy

Thanks you guys.
 
GCB said:
The only issue with judging it would be that who would've done that?

Voting was the only fair way to do it.
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I'm sure someone would have been up for it. The voting system can work, just didn't think it was the best option, what's done is done though.
 
Bocaj said:
Agreed. Nearly time for the results! God, I hope I'm still in. I don't expect to win. Maybe make it to number 5 prehaps?
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I was wondering.. if any of you guys get a spare 15 minutes could you pop by my thread and tell me what you think of my it?

WWE Rivalrys: CM Punk vs. Jeff Hardy

Thanks you guys.
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Quick feedback. You didn't need to spread it over four posts. I don't particularly like the formatting. I'd like to see a bit more detail seeing as it is just one rivalry. However, I think it is a good idea for a thread. I like some of the ideas you're using in it - #wrestling101 for a lot of them. For now, I think it's a little bland. If you can find a little more spark, it could be a good one.

:)
 
Wasn't gonna do this but if I could get some feedback on my Sacrifice PPV that would be great. It took me like a month to write so getting feedback on it would be nice so I know I didn't put it all that hard work for nothing.
 
Hollywood Nightmare said:
So you think people with better ideas deserve to be eliminated? Yeah cause that makes sense....:rolleyes:

Seriously I won't name names but there was a couple people I thought sucked this round and if I get eliminated simply for going over the word limit that will be beyond stupid.
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I didn't vote you last or anything but I can see where he is coming from. They were guidelines. If the guidelines were to write a card with 4 matches and you wrote 8, of course yours might seem better than others but it's because you didn't obey the rules.
 
#1Peep said:
I didn't vote you last or anything but I can see where he is coming from. They were guidelines. If the guidelines were to write a card with 4 matches and you wrote 8, of course yours might seem better than others but it's because you didn't obey the rules.
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Oh yeah I can understand that but honestly even with more words I don't think mine was the best or even second best. Although now I can make sure I don't go over word limits in the future which is good.
 
Bocaj said:
Cool. If you get time, I could sure use some feedback on my thread? :D
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I've read your thread and it's not bad but here's a tip for you.

Don't go so fast! You haven't even had the thread for a week and you have 5 shows done already. Slow down, take your time and give people time to feedback to you. It's hard to give feedback when you put up a new show everyday because people are busy.

That being said you do have a good idea just slow down and take your time with it.
 
Bocaj said:
Well all it really is, is 1 or 2 segments each night to be honest. It shouldn't really take long but thanks for the feedback.
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Hollywood is right. People need time to read it and consider it so they can feedback. You can't improve without feedback. Slow down, mate.
 
Glad I made it through and even though I personally voted Theo second he deserved the top spot this round.

Bocaj, you should have made your card a little more realistic.

P.S. GCB, Two things you didn't like about my entry were Shield losing and Cena winning the rumble so I thought I'd remind you Shield won and Taker won the Rumble not Cena. No big deal just thought I'd point that out. Looking forward to round 2!
 
Bocaj said:
1. I say I'm not entering the contest.
2. People say "Come on, You Should Enter!"
3. I get eliminated

This whole thing is a forum wide conspiracy.
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:wtf:

OK then. Not because people thought your entry was the second worst of the ten then?

When you've finished bitching and moaning, I've done a quick Google search for you. Try one of these sites, mate. Maybe they'll treat you better?

http://wrestlingclique.com/booker/

http://www.wrestlingforum.com/booker/

http://wrestlingsmarks.com/forums/f55/

http://www.ewrestlingnews.com/community/forumdisplay.php?21-eWN-Interactive-Be-the-Booker!

And you wonder why people don't like you?
 
Hollywood Nightmare said:
Glad I made it through and even though I personally voted Theo second he deserved the top spot this round.

Bocaj, you should have made your card a little more realistic.

P.S. GCB, Two things you didn't like about my entry were Shield losing and Cena winning the rumble so I thought I'd remind you Shield won and Taker won the Rumble not Cena. No big deal just thought I'd point that out. Looking forward to round 2!
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Did they? OK!
 
I give up, YES this was all a conspiracy to eliminate you Bocaj. As a forum and New World Order there will be no public recount as this was all apart of our scheme. GCB used his manipulative tournament as a way to build up your hopes to ultimately dash them.

All hail the conspiracy! :worship: :worship: :worship:
 
The Cult said:
I give up, YES this was all a conspiracy to eliminate you Bocaj. As a forum and New World Order there will be no public recount as this was all apart of our scheme. GCB used his manipulative tournament as a way to build up your hopes to ultimately dash them.

All hail the conspiracy! :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Hahahahaha! Brilliant!
 
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