Awesome_Miz
Proud LSN mentee
I'll be able to review anyone's show starting Friday. Just hit me up, I'll probably start with Theo and then GS.
Book This! - General Discussion
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Skairipa Matrix
3 Time Elite Openweight Champion
sure man ill take a review.
GrandSword
Burning Hammaaaaah!!!
Thanks Awesome_Miz, would love to get everyone's feedback on Victory Road.
Da Prophet
Mid-Card Championship Winner
Final show before Sacrifice is finished. It's in a recap so it isn't long compared with what I normally put out. Hopefully it hits all the points I wanted.
Punkanomics
Dark Match Winner
Hey guys, just posting a quick update on my show. I've finished the 1st hour and I am working on the 2nd as I'm typing this. I should have the finished show up by tonight or at the very latest tomorrow morning! I would really like if y'all could give some reviews so I can improve.
Straight Awesome
Miss Straight Edge
Thanks for the warm welcome, folks. I'll definitely read around and post some proper reviews!
I'll try and get around to some reviews this week but new guys, read around and post your thoughts on the existing stuff to get in everyone's good books.
As for Smackdown: I have two matches and two big promos to go, and I'll post Superstars once I get the graphics from Theoski.
As for Smackdown: I have two matches and two big promos to go, and I'll post Superstars once I get the graphics from Theoski.
Johnny Scumm
InZayn In The Membrane
Hey guys, popping back to this place for a one off thing.
Got a TNA/WWE mashup hitting in the next week or so, love you guys to read it when it does surface!
Got a TNA/WWE mashup hitting in the next week or so, love you guys to read it when it does surface!
Straight Awesome
Miss Straight Edge
Got some awesome feedback, thanks a lot to everyone. I'll definitely be going around and trying to post some more reviews tonight, I've been reading up on some of the longer posts to try and get up to speed.
Skairipa Matrix
3 Time Elite Openweight Champion
feel better man
Man, I wish I could give you some good news but, alas, I can't. It's not progressing fast, it's not looking likely anytime soon. That's why I refused to put a time limit on it. Too busy with work.
However, despite my absence of late, I have to say it is fantastic to see all the newcomers. When my time allows me to, I shall look and review your work.
GCB
Hey all,
First off, great to see so many shows being pumped out ATM.
I've been working on my show a little but I've had a bit of a lull, including some time off for other reasons, and I've decided to discontinue my show and start again.
I'm looking at a project similar to 'Straight Awesome', in where I use the current WWE but this time I will make some significant changes.
I'll be sure to keep you posted.
Cheers
WH
First off, great to see so many shows being pumped out ATM.
I've been working on my show a little but I've had a bit of a lull, including some time off for other reasons, and I've decided to discontinue my show and start again.
I'm looking at a project similar to 'Straight Awesome', in where I use the current WWE but this time I will make some significant changes.
I'll be sure to keep you posted.
Cheers
WH
Punkanomics
Dark Match Winner
Hey guys, due to my stupid little cousin, my first show will have to be postponed. I was working on it and was just about to copy and paste it to the website when I had to go to the bathroom. When I came back, my 5-year old cousin,Jaylon,had his finger on the off button of my computer tower and erased ALL of my progress!!! So, it will take me another couple days to get it done now that I have to start all over! Anyways, how is everybody else's shows going?
Skairipa Matrix
3 Time Elite Openweight Champion
just finished up my 3rd show gotta proof read it then do a double check to make sure i covered everything it needs to cover then it will be up probably sometime today or tomorrow but no guarentees.
Awesome_Miz
Proud LSN mentee
Well, I had promised some reviews but due to a mild stomach virus I went to the hospital. So, I'll try to finish my SD! show and get my promised reviews.
Punkanomics
Dark Match Winner
Sorry to hear that man,I'll check out your show and give a review. Hope you get to feeling better.
Punkanomics
Dark Match Winner
Yeah, thats one mistake I'll never make again, I was rushing the show and I wanted it to be done since I'd been working on it since the start of the summer.
But,now that I can take it slow I'm sure it will be alot better. Hows your show going by the way? I just got finished reading OTL and it was great!
Awesome_Miz
Proud LSN mentee
Thanks man and I'll try to return the favor.
Thanks for the review Proph, just some points from my end.
1. Putting the belt on Rey gives him plenty of options, especially as I have a roster of a lot of young, unestablished or faltering superstars. Having the match end in a roll up would of been lame, a lot of bookers are 'scared' of having people lose after a finisher but it shouldn't mean that much. That would mean more DQ's, count-outs, unclean finishes etc. He got a Cross Rhodes and a Frog Splash, he'll be good.
2. 'Swagger stepping out of the cover immediately' means he got right to his feet from the roll-up, without falling down to the mat or anything due to his size advantage. Swagger is a guy I won't to build up and far enough if you don't like him, if you think back to his stuff pre 2011, that is what I'm aiming for, he has personality and is incredible in the ring, he just needs to be able to show that.
3. Glad you liked the E/C stuff!
4. Yeah Gabriel and Slater are boring in real life as tag champs, because once again they haven't been given anything at all. I thought it was about time they split up, they don't have a gimmick or a character at all, they're not that great (ring wise they're good) as a team and I wanted something fresh. I also want to see how far I can take both of them. Yeah, having a big name team with a young star allows me to build a new division around them - have a few surprises for the division.
5. Despite what you said I felt that ADR/RKO had a decent build, they actually had something to work with besides 'I want the title more than you'. Anyway, the feud has just begun, it leaves room for more to happen and they have nice in ring chemistry. We didn't realise how many people would of wanted the WWE title to go on last, yes it had a great little twist but we both thought it would of left the show on a bad note if there was a no contest. Looking back, it should have been but oh well.
Again, thanks for the comments! Hope we can out do it with Cap Punishment - it does only have a three week build but it should be enough for the feuds Theo and I have planned. It's amazing how far my plans have changed from when I first thought of these storylines, and I'm sure they won't stay the same for future events.
Punk: If you had been working on it since last summer, wouldn't you have had it all saved in a Word doc or something? How can anyway write a whole show in one sitting?
1. Putting the belt on Rey gives him plenty of options, especially as I have a roster of a lot of young, unestablished or faltering superstars. Having the match end in a roll up would of been lame, a lot of bookers are 'scared' of having people lose after a finisher but it shouldn't mean that much. That would mean more DQ's, count-outs, unclean finishes etc. He got a Cross Rhodes and a Frog Splash, he'll be good.
2. 'Swagger stepping out of the cover immediately' means he got right to his feet from the roll-up, without falling down to the mat or anything due to his size advantage. Swagger is a guy I won't to build up and far enough if you don't like him, if you think back to his stuff pre 2011, that is what I'm aiming for, he has personality and is incredible in the ring, he just needs to be able to show that.
3. Glad you liked the E/C stuff!
4. Yeah Gabriel and Slater are boring in real life as tag champs, because once again they haven't been given anything at all. I thought it was about time they split up, they don't have a gimmick or a character at all, they're not that great (ring wise they're good) as a team and I wanted something fresh. I also want to see how far I can take both of them. Yeah, having a big name team with a young star allows me to build a new division around them - have a few surprises for the division.
5. Despite what you said I felt that ADR/RKO had a decent build, they actually had something to work with besides 'I want the title more than you'. Anyway, the feud has just begun, it leaves room for more to happen and they have nice in ring chemistry. We didn't realise how many people would of wanted the WWE title to go on last, yes it had a great little twist but we both thought it would of left the show on a bad note if there was a no contest. Looking back, it should have been but oh well.
Again, thanks for the comments! Hope we can out do it with Cap Punishment - it does only have a three week build but it should be enough for the feuds Theo and I have planned. It's amazing how far my plans have changed from when I first thought of these storylines, and I'm sure they won't stay the same for future events.
Punk: If you had been working on it since last summer, wouldn't you have had it all saved in a Word doc or something? How can anyway write a whole show in one sitting?
Da Prophet
Mid-Card Championship Winner
Writing out the Sacrifice preview at the moment. I've made some basic match cards for the event and I'll be doing it in full. Changed my mind from the other day and I'm aiming for this to be my best PPV ever. Going all out to make this thing great.
Kevin Nash for World Champion = Ratings!
Kevin Nash for World Champion = Ratings!
Punkanomics
Dark Match Winner
Nah man, since the start of this summer! And like I said, I'll take it slower so It will be better. Also,this is my first shot at Book This so I'm kinda playing with different fonts and formats.
Hey guys I will hopefully be putting some reviews out over the coming days due to there being no schoolI would really appreciate any feedback on my bt to help me improve. Thanks
You're next on my list, read your show earlier.
Peep/Theo, OTL feedback is up. Straght Awesome, feedback for RAW and SMACKDOWN is up. JAM, coming for your new show soon too - even if it is TNA. Proph (Horror), might need a while longer as your show will be a bit of a read for me first.
