Book This! - General Discussion
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Dang, Papa Grande gives incredible feedback. Brutally honest but right on point. Love it.
Get ready, Doc. Because... YOU'RE NEXT!
EDIT: Erm, on second thought, I'll probably get to yours later on down the line. You certainly look like you know what you're doing, and it looks like it's gonna be quite a long read. I'll get to it, don't worry, but I might hit up some others first.
EDIT: Erm, on second thought, I'll probably get to yours later on down the line. You certainly look like you know what you're doing, and it looks like it's gonna be quite a long read. I'll get to it, don't worry, but I might hit up some others first.
Haha, it's fine. Do it when ya want. 
Viola Moonlight
I'm Literally Just Here for WZCW
Well, I can't take all the credit but thank you for your humble words. I'm blushing, honestly.
Viola Moonlight
I'm Literally Just Here for WZCW
If we can go past the first four weeks of shows and the PPV, I'll be pleased. I have never seen a Joint-BT like this go further than the fourth week. Could be wrong though... but it's too much effort going through the old BT's. Y'know, as I'm lazy like that.
Yeah, that's the only problem I could see. 5 guys is quite a workload for a project, and if one drops out, you either gotta find a replacement or simply scrap him. That's why I'm demanding more WWE/TNA projects (that are well written) dammit. Screw this originality CRAP. Let's go with the big boys... and TNA
Viola Moonlight
I'm Literally Just Here for WZCW
You're going to need CM Punk and the Straight-Edge Society to help you convert the masses. And no, you can't use property own by the WPWA.
Da Prophet
Mid-Card Championship Winner
Um....quick question, was my first show good or shit?
Why do I ask, well Papa said it was terrible but Sam said it was good for a first show.I wasn't expecting a great review of my show and with the whole "I right long match's and such" but was it OK.I did fix the spelling mistakes and then changed the whole format of the show to something I find easy to write.I may have not done the best promo but it was a go.I had the my shot at Rock because he was giving the place of GM of VPW and everybody was happy, but when I picked Batista people said "what the hell?" (storyline wise of course)
But was it OK, because I didn't think I did that bad of a job.My match's were good, well that is what I believed.Plus I have started to get a base of a storylines in and have some ideas ready to come.Papa this is just for you, I like to put up long match's as that is what is fun for me.I don't care if it looks like a wall of text, I put it in spoiler tags so people don't have to read the match and it loads faster.But thanks for the review anyway.
I would just like to know if it was decent, because Sam has giving me the idea t was good.And he is apart of this whole WPWA thing.
EDIT: Thanks again to Papa for the feedback, really gave me something to think about.
Why do I ask, well Papa said it was terrible but Sam said it was good for a first show.I wasn't expecting a great review of my show and with the whole "I right long match's and such" but was it OK.I did fix the spelling mistakes and then changed the whole format of the show to something I find easy to write.I may have not done the best promo but it was a go.I had the my shot at Rock because he was giving the place of GM of VPW and everybody was happy, but when I picked Batista people said "what the hell?" (storyline wise of course)
But was it OK, because I didn't think I did that bad of a job.My match's were good, well that is what I believed.Plus I have started to get a base of a storylines in and have some ideas ready to come.Papa this is just for you, I like to put up long match's as that is what is fun for me.I don't care if it looks like a wall of text, I put it in spoiler tags so people don't have to read the match and it loads faster.But thanks for the review anyway.
I would just like to know if it was decent, because Sam has giving me the idea t was good.And he is apart of this whole WPWA thing.
EDIT: Thanks again to Papa for the feedback, really gave me something to think about.
Da Prophet
Mid-Card Championship Winner
I got a 2/10, so Peep I think that I win!
Da Prophet
Mid-Card Championship Winner
The thing is I don't get why it, Sam liked it but Papa hated it. So it can't be as bad as Papa is telling it.
Don't take this personally, but this is the 'Book This' section, and some of your booking decisions were quite, um, questionable. I looked at the web page and there was nothing about Williams or Morgan, so why were they just handed championship opportunities? No explanation, nothing. And why were Joe and Kaz in a no dq match? Normally there has to be some heat b/w wrestlers for that to happen, unless it's TNA or the original ECW where you have a lot of random matches. The promos that you had, I think you should read over. Like I pointed out, Batista makes himself look like a ****** by contradicting himself in his first show appearance, and he was just OOC a few times. And where was the Percy Watson promo that was promised for the show? I don't remember seeing it at all. Plus, the grammar/spelling was all over the place, I just didn't have a fun time reading the show.
I'm not saying that long matches are bad, but split them up a little bit so you don't get lost while in the middle of reading them. Just an option, but w/e.
Hey, different strokes for different folks, but a lot of the stuff that you had was very confusing, since there wasn't even an explanation as to why these things were happening. That's where your commentators come in hand and can explain why these matches are taking place.
And take all this criticism well, please. I'm not trying to insult you, but help you be a better booker. You have some interesting ideas, but the execution is what's lacking. And don't look too much in the rating. Look more at the criticisms and things I pointed out.
EDIT: And peep, man, use the Advertisement thread for that.
That's what it was made for.
I agree with Papa Grande. It just wasn't a fun read IMO. The grammar was atrocious.
I think that covers all the active titles in the E.
Theo, if you have time could you do this for my book this, take the heavyweight championship and change the writing on it from:
World heavyweight wrestling champion- to - WORLD WRESTLING CORPORATION HEAVYWEIGHT CHAMPION ( In Red)
in the format of:
WORLD
WRESTLING CORPARATION
HEAVYWEIGHT CHAMPION
WRESTLING CORPARATION
HEAVYWEIGHT CHAMPION
I could try. Working on SCW's second episode right now but I could eventually make you some.
