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Titus
Since I've given feedback to everyone else I thought I'd go through my own RP.
A bit of background, I've had this idea for a year to do what I did in my RP. Titus has existed since 2000 through backyard wrestling and since 2007 in WZCW. He's done a lot of things, but he's never done this.
I had the idea to do it and thought ala Chris Jericho where he vanishes, appears, people love him then suddenly he's heel. that's why Bruce Irwin came in, I regret not putting as much effort in with him but I knew he was a stop gap. That being said the last year I've moved house, had four aunts/uncles die, got promoted, had a kid from my Sunday School get a brain tumour and get a girlfriend so my focus wasn't on Bruce.
I decided to bring Titus back before LL so I could get into the habit of writing him again.
The idea of the RP was that a lot of people are new to the fed over the last year who may have heard of Titus but not know him. It's for that reason I went with the history side of things to reintroduce the character. I have also made subtle changes through the previous RP's I've done for him showing a bit more of ruthless streak for him.
One part of the RP I changed and ended putting in was when Mick mutters under his breath. He'd obviously think this but there's no way of conveying that. If re-writing I'd probably have Titus just question him later on (as he did).
Now about Mick, the name comes from me just saying he was a Man In the Crowd which I noticed was Mic. One person thought it was a reference to Mike Killam, it's not.
I've always done descriptions in bold but reading through so many RP's over the last few days I think it looks better just normal non-formatted. I'll change this for future.
As Showtime said I should have added a slight more to the end such as Titus pouring a drink or something. Description has never been my strong point.
I liked the build up of the RP and the delivery which shocked people. I had a lot of rep for the RP including one person saying "I was getting mad reading this. Unbelievable.". I have debated whether to do the heel turn or not (you'll find out the decision soon enough) but I was worried in case this wasn't well received. It was, thankfully.
I think I'll have a decent showing in the LL, whilst I don't think I'll win it'll be good to put Titus back on the map and remind people that I can RP well when focused.
Since I've given feedback to everyone else I thought I'd go through my own RP.
A bit of background, I've had this idea for a year to do what I did in my RP. Titus has existed since 2000 through backyard wrestling and since 2007 in WZCW. He's done a lot of things, but he's never done this.
I had the idea to do it and thought ala Chris Jericho where he vanishes, appears, people love him then suddenly he's heel. that's why Bruce Irwin came in, I regret not putting as much effort in with him but I knew he was a stop gap. That being said the last year I've moved house, had four aunts/uncles die, got promoted, had a kid from my Sunday School get a brain tumour and get a girlfriend so my focus wasn't on Bruce.
I decided to bring Titus back before LL so I could get into the habit of writing him again.
The idea of the RP was that a lot of people are new to the fed over the last year who may have heard of Titus but not know him. It's for that reason I went with the history side of things to reintroduce the character. I have also made subtle changes through the previous RP's I've done for him showing a bit more of ruthless streak for him.
One part of the RP I changed and ended putting in was when Mick mutters under his breath. He'd obviously think this but there's no way of conveying that. If re-writing I'd probably have Titus just question him later on (as he did).
Now about Mick, the name comes from me just saying he was a Man In the Crowd which I noticed was Mic. One person thought it was a reference to Mike Killam, it's not.
I've always done descriptions in bold but reading through so many RP's over the last few days I think it looks better just normal non-formatted. I'll change this for future.
As Showtime said I should have added a slight more to the end such as Titus pouring a drink or something. Description has never been my strong point.
I liked the build up of the RP and the delivery which shocked people. I had a lot of rep for the RP including one person saying "I was getting mad reading this. Unbelievable.". I have debated whether to do the heel turn or not (you'll find out the decision soon enough) but I was worried in case this wasn't well received. It was, thankfully.
I think I'll have a decent showing in the LL, whilst I don't think I'll win it'll be good to put Titus back on the map and remind people that I can RP well when focused.