WZCW Discussion Thread

[Prince Vee]

So far I've read half of the shows and I'm very much impressed. Excellent work. I'll first send in the show review for ascension before getting one to meltdown. Again, brilliant work.

 

[ShinChan]

I disagree.

You're a fighter who hasn't won and is desperate for a victory. Now at the try things you wouldn't normally do stage. The only description we have of Stokes is "A former independent wrestler and presently the manager of Xaitlyn."

Even reading through your last three RP's the only thing that would remotely imply that Stokes wouldn't have interfered is telling Xaitlyn off for going against the fans. In fact Stokes has the line "But I do care dammit" when talking about losses meaning he'll help Xaitlyn to try and win.

She ISN'T desperate for a victory.

That's what I wanted in you in the first place. Focus. Determination. Wins and Losses are secondary, Your performance in the ring is primary. I am truly glad for you and I am expecting you to win your debut PPV match at Unscripted.

Him getting involved in cheating just defeats the purpose of sticking around Xaitlyn.

 

[Lee]

So far I've read half of the shows and I'm very much impressed. Excellent work. I'll first send in the show review for ascension before getting one to meltdown. Again, brilliant work.

Cheers Vee.

 

[Lee]

She ISN'T desperate for a victory.



Him getting involved in cheating just defeats the purpose of sticking around Xaitlyn.

Then tell us that before hand rather than second guessing a character we know nothing about who has zero development in your RPs. We can only work with what we're given and with Stokes, it's not much.

 

[ShinChan]

Then tell us that before hand rather than second guessing a character we know nothing about who has zero development in your RPs. We can only work with what we're given and with Stokes, it's not much.

I am sure that I have told a lot of times that SHE WILL NEVER CHEAT TO WIN. Even in her App it was stated.

If you think that development is zero then i disagree. Something is always better than nothing.

 

[Dave]

I have to agree with Lee. I know that you have tried to make Xaitlyn a mystery and everything about her very mysterious. But the fact of the matter is that you help Creative out very little in trying to understand Xaitlyn or the people around her. Truth is, you have given us absolutely nothing to work with. If you want to see advancement, perhaps try filling us in once in a while.

 

[Hyorinmaru]

She ISN'T desperate for a victory.



Him getting involved in cheating just defeats the purpose of sticking around Xaitlyn.

That's the thing we as the readers don't know this, we don't know anything.

You have your own way you want to do things and that's fine but you gotta do them in a way that gives us at least a glimpse into who these characters are.

 

[The Doctor]

If you're gonna do a manager, make sure you know exactly what their deal is and how they benefit the character. Adonis, for example, is a negotiator who will help his client win/stay marketable no matter what. Other managers might be there just to serve as cheerleaders, moral support, and counsel. Still others are there to be loud. Compare Fuji to Heyman to Backlund. Hell, some managers are just there to enhance the mystique of the character, like Catrina for Mil Muertes. You have options, just make sure you know what you're doing when trying to write a character with a manager, and above all make it abundantly clear to Creative what you're going for. Cooperation makes the fed work and keeps all parties involved happy.

If you don't want to write things in your RPs that'll reveal plot or personality points, that's fine, but you're ostensibly allowing someone to write for your character every two weeks. You should at least be able to summarize and explain motivations and projected character arcs to help them further the story along and keep details straight.

 

[ShinChan]

I have to agree with Lee. I know that you have tried to make Xaitlyn a mystery and everything about her very mysterious. But the fact of the matter is that you help Creative out very little in trying to understand Xaitlyn or the people around her. Truth is, you have given us absolutely nothing to work with. If you want to see advancement, perhaps try filling us in once in a while.

I had stated that she would never cheat to win. Doesn't that mean that she is fully face? That defeats the whole purpose of cheating to win.

 

[Lee]

I am sure that I have told a lot of times that SHE WILL NEVER CHEAT TO WIN. Even in her App it was stated.

If you think that development is zero then i disagree. Something is always better than nothing.

Sometimes, She will break every rule just to destroy her opponent. She prefers dismantling over winning.

That's in your final app, on your roster page. It's literally one of the two characteristics of your gimmick.

http://forums.wrestlezone.com/showthread.php?t=313209

 

[Richard Blonoff]

The whole cheating thing is on me.

That said, this is lifted directly from your roster page.

Sometimes, She will break every rule just to destroy her opponent.

And not once does the roster page say she refuses to cheat.

 

[ShinChan]

That's in your final app, on your roster page. It's literally one of the two characteristics of your gimmick.

http://forums.wrestlezone.com/showthread.php?t=313209

I know.

I cleared it then too and am clearing it again. She won't cheat to win. She wants to dismantle her opponents. Dismantle aka to take apart her opponent. Dismantle is too different from cheating.

 

[ShinChan]

I had it written while she was a heel.

Character Psyche: Although she is a heel, yet she never cheats to win any bout. Her main aim is to dismantle her opponent to such extent that he/she has to lose the bout.

 

[Lee]

Then you changed her to a face.

But breaking every rule is the dictionary definition of cheating. Just give it up. Put a request in the character change thread and we'll change it.

 

[ShinChan]

Perspectives matter.

 

[ShinChan]

Enjoy Ascension, guys while I couldn't.

 

[Lee]

Moving on from Kapu.

Looking for feedback on my match, good or bad. Not written one in years but I was quite happy with this one.

 

[Dave]

Enjoy Ascension, guys while I couldn't.

What's your problem, man. This is, in every sense of the word, your fault. This isn't me saying that we're not willing to listen to people and take constructive criticism on the chin. This is nothing more than trying to blame us for your mistakes. If you don't care enough to properly update your roster page, you know, the whole thing we base a match off of, then that's entirely your fault. This is the last of the matter in the public forum.

If you need to continue it further, send me a PM and will try my best to completely ignore it.

 

[Richard Blonoff]

Moving on from Kapu.

Looking for feedback on my match, good or bad. Not written one in years but I was quite happy with this one.

It was a solid return effort. If you can keep up that level on the majority of your TV matches, then you will be good. I forget if I said it in the back or not, but Phoenix was before my time, so I appreciated the little history tidbits.

 

[Prince Vee]

Whatever. On the funny side, I completely disagree with Yaz and Lee on the name changes. "The Gift of Jericho" is the best ever name one can come up with. And that signature! DRINK IT IN MAAAAAN

 

[Lee]

Cheers man, thought that would be the case with most so it's why I wanted to put them in.

 

[Lee]

A first for WZCW:

The card is done and we'll be drawing a match a random. That match will have one stipulation...the loser will enter the LL at number 1! The winner doesn't get a number 30 though.

 

[Find'er Woo'er Ryder]

That's interesting especially the world champions match

 

[Lee]

If it's a tag match it'll be whoever is pinned.

 

[Prince Vee]

A first for WZCW:

The card is done and we'll be drawing a match a random. That match will have one stipulation...the loser will enter the LL at number 1! The winner doesn't get a number 30 though.

I mean, this #1, #30 and second chance are just to tell a story. It isn't going to give any credit to the writer or an advantage in the lottery match, does it? But this will be exciting to see and it makes the match more fascinating story.