Great to see some cricket stuff mentioned, a proper geek out moment for sure.
Oh I'm an avid cricket lover and a player of course. I'm the Pace Spearhead (Frontline Fast bowler) for my team. It might sound odd coz I'm not tall enough to be a fast bowler considering my height being mere 166 cm. But I got varieties so who got the right to complain
I always look out of the league when I play for my school team as the other fast bowlers would be at least a feet (32 cm) taller than me. meh
"I'm getting tired of your wanky shits" I don't want to know what a wanky shit is but should this be you?
It's something that we use it in our streets when I was in England. Sweet memories came back and I did wrote some crappy things while conversing with my teammates. It's my mistake.
I see what you were getting with the randomness of the team but the bit with the underwear at the end was just weird.
It's a here there and everywhere RP which works sometimes but this one doesn't have a flow sadly. Shame as your last RP did, keep focussed I know you can do it.
I tried to add some comedy stuffs in the end coz I thought the other members of my team would go with the full jacket of comedic stuffs and I didn't want to look so bizarre from their RPs. But like you and Double D said I should've stick with my strongest part.
I will try to make my next RP better than ever. Thanks for your feedback mate! Oh BTW, if you too love cricket as much I do, you can talk about it with me anytime! It's a shame that I don't have anyone really to talk about it. Right now England is humiliating South Africa in South Africa!
The song was a cool touch. Was that you in the video? If so, cool.
Yep it was me! I love rapping and singing as well. When it comes altogether, I just don't want anything better than that. I thought, exposing Vee's multi talented skills might work in the RP. So I reckon it still is different from how Haiku has used his recordings. Damn, he was awesome in that.
On the Swedish line, I have to addresss that since I'm the only one who will catch it, unless someone else speaks Swedish. "Bra jabbot älsking!" should have been "Bra job, min älsking!" if your intention was "Good job my Love!". I've never heard the word "jabbot" before.
Ah, my girlfriend did warn me that I'm misspelling a lot when I write in Swedish and this is one among them. The actual statement is "Bra jobbät". She did warn me that my misspelling will be obvious for any Swedish. Pardon me on that one.
Like I said before, I'm not good at comedy stuffs. And I better should've stayed with my strongest part, the science. But I wanted my RP to look connected with my Matey's bizarre RP and I guess it didn't came well enough.
Anyhow Thanks for the feedback and I'll certainly look up your feedback before writing my next RP. Cheers!!
