Find'er Woo'er Ryder
:( lost ma Mayhem Title
I killed a bottle of absinthe and half a bottle of jack. Fuck I hate life right now.
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I killed a bottle of absinthe and half a bottle of jack. Fuck I hate life right now.
So for criticisms I really only have a couple. The first isn't much of a big deal but you did have a typo. "6p, later that night..." probably should have read "6PM", but again not that big of a deal. The bigger one is you should probably have addressed the match a little more. The line of "You have history with Ty. Leave El Caidos to me." does address it, but speaking of it a little more may have helped. This was a character development piece though and it was a good one. Well done and I look forward to the rest of what you're writing this cycle.
The 6p thing is a quirk I've always had. Someone I worked with always wrote it like that, and it's stuck. I did it with 6a too. As soon as I posted, I realized I left out a segment I meant to write, addressing the match, but Ty and I talked soon after about him possibly not being able to post at all, so it worked out. We have another round too![]()
That aside, can't wait to see what's next. This is gonna be a heck of a cycle.
So I have a rat infestation. And I've found the holes. Anyone want to guess what I am doing tomorrow?
Should be posting the next couple of JA RP's in the random thread within the next couple days. I'd really like some feedback if ya'll wouldn't mind. I'll return the favor when I can.
I stepped on one barefooted the other day. I turned on the light a got a good look at it. It's about 8 inches long. Not including tail. Not quite the size of a dire rat, but big enough that I don't want it in my house eating my food.
Oh well, at least I'm not Falkon living in Australia.
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Real imagine BTW LOL
Short RP posted in the random RP thread, if creative want to use the material to explain the no show I'll be grateful, or if you want to job me out like a chump I'll understand.