Feedback for Men of Mayhem is up
Thanks dagger. Feedback was appreciated. In regards to Logan speaking sans accent, it's been part of my rps that him being around Britt, is bringing the accent back for Logan where he had been purposefully masking the accent due to his past.
I can see where the accent can be rough, and I could probably drop the befoahs n whatnot, was just not tryna half ass the accent and just doin the obvious "pahk my cah in havahd yahd" type stuff.
As for Hayden, he's still a big part of the overall plan, as is Brittany. Look for Hayden to be more prominent as he was in the beginning.
Again thanks for the feedback, I never am one to get mad at someone's advice, as matter of fact, u n haiku have probably been two of the most helpful ppl to me since I've joined WZCW. (No offense to anybody else)
Your feedback will be up late, prolly like 3/4 am pst so check for it in the am.
I'm glad you said both pieces flowed well together, as me m FWR have spent a lot of time both on this one and the last to have them be essentially one long cohesive rp as opposed to rp from Logan+ rp from Armando
Lots of communication, and itd be impossible if my partner wasn't as focused as I am. Lots of hrs spent just planning it out prior to writing it.
