Ah that's not that far. Are you too under overwhelming amounts of water?
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Ah that's not that far. Are you too under overwhelming amounts of water?
Find'er Woo'er Ryder
:( lost ma Mayhem Title
Not any more. We had some bad weather but it seems to have passed for the most part. Still wet but not a tropical storm. How's it where you are? Hope you are alright.
The dam upstate broke, and the rivers and creeks here are near record levels, so there's literally water everywhere. The rain has been terribly persistent as well, so it's just shit everywhere, really.
John McCass
You talkin' to me?
Let's hope he doesn't take time off. Coz, Alhazred is one of my favorite characters.
John McCass
You talkin' to me?
Thanks NSL. I'm thinking to get over the bizzare gimmick. That's why I articulate it as a vision. This was a helpful feedback.
It's not that it's a bad thing, it just seems like there's a lot of people with voices in their head. Ramparte, Flex, Alhazred, Constantine, Fallout...
Prince Vee
Better than I think I am
Thanks for the feedback mate. And I'm thinking about giving some feedbacks for a few coz I feel like I owe them one.
Feedback is up for Titus, Theron, Tastic, and Constantine.
Haiku - I won't feedback you in the thread, but if you want some, I can PM you. I don't like doing it for people I'm in a match with or in a storyline, where there's a chance of it affecting the outcome of things.
Haiku - I won't feedback you in the thread, but if you want some, I can PM you. I don't like doing it for people I'm in a match with or in a storyline, where there's a chance of it affecting the outcome of things.
Cheers mate
Prince Vee
Better than I think I am
RPs up for John Doe and Men of Mayhem!
Btw, Double'D where's the cute little figurine Reps you would give me for my RPs??
I miss those Flair, Raven and little little Sabin figures meh
Btw, Double'D where's the cute little figurine Reps you would give me for my RPs??
I miss those Flair, Raven and little little Sabin figures meh
Appreciated! I've got some shit to catch up on, now that the streets are opening up and the hotel is back to capacity, but I should still have plenty of time to get feedback up for those remaining.
I think it's Kagura, Ty, ECD, Logan, and Armando...
RPs up for John Doe and Men of Mayhem!
Btw, Double'D where's the cute little figurine Reps you would give me for my RPs??
I miss those Flair, Raven and little little Sabin figures meh
The wrestling ones should be returning soon, the new shipment of them got delayed. Sabin and the other Final Fantasy ones probably won't be until Christmas though.
Prince Vee
Better than I think I am
Had a little free-time at work, and been researching on Kagura Oz.. oh I mean Kagura Daikonran, sorry pretty lady..
I believe she's taken lol And, thankfully, Ech waited a week to go the naked/sex route, because it was slightly overdone last round.
Feedback is up for the final five. I did not do feedback for Zeus, Beard, or elegANT, considering the match and storylines, but I can always PM you, if you'd like.
Also, I wouldn't have done feedback for Live Mas, if they were in a tag match, but since they're in singles matches it doesn't really effect anything.
I highly recommend people read the heel promos in the 6-man. Not that they have any direct correlation to each other, but all three are pretty badass in their own right.
Also, I wouldn't have done feedback for Live Mas, if they were in a tag match, but since they're in singles matches it doesn't really effect anything.
I highly recommend people read the heel promos in the 6-man. Not that they have any direct correlation to each other, but all three are pretty badass in their own right.
Prince Vee
Better than I think I am
At least I didn't have sex with a stick or cane or a championship belt
First of all, thank you very much.
Secondly, we actually did have a concurrent theme throughout our three pieces of work. All three centred around the idea of darkness and light. The three pieces were called "Sunset", "Darkness" and "Dawn"/ Titus did the sunset because of the changes in his character and how the sun was setting on what once was. Zeus did darkness because it made a lot of sense given what has been going on with him. And I took dawn because of the realisation factor in my RP. Loved working with these guys.
Ty Burna
Getting Noticed By Management
Califa unmasking isn't really out of the ordinary. He always hides his face when he does so, and only to show someone they can trust him. Since it was Ty's daughter, there was no worries if she saw his face. As for the "pipe bomb", it really wasn't, it was just Ty venting his frustrations with WZCW to a friend. It's not like he walked out on Meltdown and said this. So take that into consideration when you say it's a "pipe bomb". It's about the more realistic side that I'm trying to write. Everyone gets frustrated with their employer and spout things off when they're pissed off, and Ty is no different. The blending of kayfabe and "non kayfabe" if you will is what I'm looking for right now.
Spelling, grammar, whatever not concerned about it as I didn't proofread this and rattled it off at like 8 AM so I could have it done. Not sure why Ty wanting to come in without an agenda is a con, it's simply a story line plot on his wishful thinking of not getting into another war with the same people again. That may be a relevant comment from my side personally as well, though I won't expand on it. What was I going to say about my opponents to be fair though? Nothing against them in the slightest but the most I could come up with is, hey this is who we're fighting, alright cool. I could have gone on about how the Phantoms would put them in the dirt but then I'd get knocked for saying the same things over and over again
. So less attacking the people and more writing the story I'm gonna tell, as you should know very well I'm not one to simply hit the usual talking points and call it a day.Thanks for the feedback though man, I just wanted to respond to what you wrote about my pieces. I don't want to be an asshole or anything but no one really needs to do feedback for me at this point. It's not fair as I'm likely never going to do any due to time constraints, and at this point more time spent helping others would be far more beneficial then taking time to do feedback on mine. I mostly write stream of consciousness with maybe just a small, fairly open framework to go off of, so any feedback kind of just rolls off the shoulders considering my writing style.
I know there's a big push for doing feedback now, but I'll make it easier for everyone that wishes to do so, and request no feedback for myself
.Prince Vee
Better than I think I am
I would want one if you don't mind.
