WZCW Discussion Thread

[Dave]

I love my Scottish accent.

 

[Dagger Dias]

Ascension is up, complete with a subpar opening by yours truly.

Review coming shortly. It really only addresses the opening, but please take a look when you get a chance.

 

[Miko]

Southern English accent. Sounds good when you say "cunt" but otherwise its only 40+ year old single mums that fall at your feet. And I am pretty good looking apparently, bit of a drunk though.

Even Shotaro will hate my accent and we are practically next door

 

[Johnny Scumm]

I know the boards haven't even gone up yet & I don't know what I'm even doing at the PPV, but I've written, call it an "intro" to my RP.

Is there somebody who could give it the once over for me? It's different to what I've written recently & just wanna see what someone thinks.

 

[Find'er Woo'er Ryder]

Send it over

 

[Johnny Scumm]

Send it over

Shall do dude.

It isn't formatted & is just over 900 words, so it's a longer intro than usual that's for sure.

 

[Richard Blonoff]

The boards are up.

 

[Johnny Scumm]

The boards may be up, but Black is going down.

 

[John McCass]

So blokes have started writting, haven't they?

 

[Dagger Dias]

I did something awesome.

http://forums.wrestlezone.com/showpost.php?p=5265133&postcount=401

Something I should have done a long time ago. Enjoy!

 

[NSL]

So my house may be haunted I find out tonight.

It would explain why my one TV turns on randomly by itself.

The hotel I worked at for 8 years in PA, I recently found out, was built on land that was originally a Civil War graveyard. Which totally explains the random 100 foot "hill" on the back end of the property.

The hotel I currently work in, is 211 years old...Imagine the shit I pretend not to hear...

I hope the people involved in the match I wrote like it, had fun writing it.

I did enjoy it. It was a well written opening match. Neither guy is locked into a feud, so it was important for both of them to look strong, and I felt they both did. I really wasn't sure who would win till the last paragraph, which is good for the reader. My one big critique (there were a few grammatical errors, but I'm famous for that so I shouldn't comment) is to not copy and paste the characters entrance description off their profile. If you read John Doe's you'll understand why. Use them as a guideline and write whatever. The last thing we'll care about is whether or not our wrestler does some specific hand gesture before entering the ring.

I'm with Showtime here, on basically everything. It was a great match, and excelled as an opener. Up until the final reversal, I really thought I had it won. I'm also getting used to your writing style, because I believe you've written every John Doe match so far.

Falk's Aussie accent can't defeat my Southern accent.

I moved to SC with a NY accent, and even though I am not much to look at, the accent has opened doors I can not enter, due to recently getting hitched

I love my Scottish accent.

When I am really pissed, or really drunk, my Scottish heritage shows through. It's really quite funny, because people can't understand what the fuck I'm saying, and I can hardly tell to clarify for them.

 

[Bernkastel]

First batch of feedback is up. More coming tomorrow.

 

[NSL]

So......Pancake's taking his ball and going home? I see #1 at the Lottery being an easy as fuck elimination.

 

[FunKay the Inevitable]

Shocked to win against Theron/Dagger. Can't wait to win the Lottery and shock myself even more

 

[Shotaro]

Right so just to clarify, my RP in the match against Eve also counts towards the Lottery? OR am I ineligible for the Lottery Match because I am a champion?

Just so I know as it will clearly affect my RP.

 

[Viola Moonlight]

Read the Meltdown opening: Vance Bateman states everyone but the World champ can enter the Lottery.

Your RP for your match will also count for the Lottery; you only need to write one and submit it in your match thread.

 

[Richard Blonoff]

Right so just to clarify, my RP in the match against Eve also counts towards the Lottery? OR am I ineligible for the Lottery Match because I am a champion?

Just so I know as it will clearly affect my RP.

Your RP against Eve also counts toward the Lottery.

 

[Thriller Ant]

Right so just to clarify, my RP in the match against Eve also counts towards the Lottery? OR am I ineligible for the Lottery Match because I am a champion?

Just so I know as it will clearly affect my RP.

I don't know if you heard, but one RP counts for both.

 

[Con T.]

Hey, Shotaro, did you hear that one RP counts for both matches?

 

[John McCass]

Yes Shotaro, you have to write one RP regarding both matches Hope you heard

 

[Shotaro]

Read the Meltdown opening: Vance Bateman states everyone but the World champ can enter the Lottery.

Your RP for your match will also count for the Lottery; you only need to write one and submit it in your match thread.

Thanks for clarifying. No need to be rude about it but at least you answered my question

 

[Spidey Revivey]

I don't understand the rules on RPing for the LL Match, and I might have stuck my penis in a car door. These things are related.

 

[John McCass]

Feedback up, Ech & Haiku. In case you care

 

[Con T.]

Thanks for clarifying. No need to be rude about it but at least you answered my question

Btdubs, I was only breaking balls; sorry if I was rude, brother

 

[Con T.]

Feedback up, Ech & Haiku. In case you care

Much appreciated, man. Gonna be real helpful. Hope my feedback was helpful.

Logan, I'm in the middle of writing yours.