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I don't know; it's one thing to get a hooker to ruin Morley's life. A whole other thing to take a pomegranate bath.

I might have went too far there. XD
 
I imagine in going all first person, all the time is you get in danger of falling into the "grr, I am so angry about last round and all the bad stuff that happened to me" trap

Actually, it was the rhyming for me. I imagine I would have been fine, if I didn't set the precedence that Dr. Zeus not speaks, but thinks, in rhyme. Once I did that, I was right fucked, and realized it would be nothing more than rhyming all the time, and no one wants to read that for too long.
 
I don't know; it's one thing to get a hooker to ruin Morley's life. A whole other thing to take a pomegranate bath.

I might have went too far there. XD

Maybe, but do you get my meaning?

Like, with the bath thing, if you hadn't directly said it was juice so soon it could have been a subtle nod that it could have been blood which is a signification of evil.

Now, it seems you've dropped "evil" and replaced it with sometimes being kind of a jerk. Like with your Unscripted RP, when you were offering Jon a spot in Cerberus, that was old Ramparte I think. You were trying to be a "button pusher," now you're not really anymore.
 
Actually, it was the rhyming for me. I imagine I would have been fine, if I didn't set the precedence that Dr. Zeus not speaks, but thinks, in rhyme. Once I did that, I was right fucked, and realized it would be nothing more than rhyming all the time, and no one wants to read that for too long.

Doesn't Blade do, or used to, 1st Person?
 
Maybe, but do you get my meaning?

Like, with the bath thing, if you hadn't directly said it was juice so soon it could have been a subtle nod that it could have been blood which is a signification of evil.

Now, it seems you've dropped "evil" and replaced it with sometimes being kind of a jerk. Like with your Unscripted RP, when you were offering Jon a spot in Cerberus, that was old Ramparte I think. You were trying to be a "button pusher," now you're not really anymore.

You're right. Just trying to find that balance. Eh, I'll find it eventually. Thanks man.

And 3rd person omniscient might be what I need.
 
You're right. Just trying to find that balance. Eh, I'll find it eventually. Thanks man.

And 3rd person omniscient might be what I need.

One thing I could suggest, you'd have to talk it over with Dynamite obviously, but why not try to push Flex's buttons? Not to get him against you but to join the Darkside, so to speak.
 
Just wanted to update folks; We're looking at one more segment and intro to write up, and this show should be setting sail. At the risk of jinxing us, expect this show to come up fairly soon. I'm hoping in the next sixty minutes.
 

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