WZCW Discussion Thread

[Beastmode 24]

Oh and folks, just a reminder; please PM me your bios. Just a friendly reminder.

Sent you mine

 

[FunKay the Inevitable]

Sent you mine

Yes so far I have you and Shotaro. I haven't looked at them properly yet for the record, and I expect a large bulk to come after the RP deadline so that's fine, I'll just be popping in to remind everyone every so often.

 

[FunKay the Inevitable]

Either I've posted at a very good time or I opened my mouth too soon, because two more bios came in like a three minute window. Bizarre.

 

[Shotaro]

Yes so far I have you and Shotaro. I haven't looked at them properly yet for the record, and I expect a large bulk to come after the RP deadline so that's fine, I'll just be popping in to remind everyone every so often.

I was online at the time and figured if I don't do it now I never will...

 

[FlexAmerican Dynamite]

Either I've posted at a very good time or I opened my mouth too soon, because two more bios came in like a three minute window. Bizarre.

Yeah I had a minute so I thought I'd do it. I hope it's long enough, after reading it seemed fairly short.

 

[Барбоса]

Bios?

 

[Beastmode 24]

Bios?

http://forums.wrestlezone.com/showthread.php?t=227485

 

[Барбоса]

Barbosa in less than 60 words? That's unpossible

 

[Shotaro]

I'm at a point with my RP where I'd like some feedback before I finish it off on Tuesday. Anyone interested?

 

[Remix]

Eh, sure.

 

[FunKay the Inevitable]

I tweaked the bios I received to varying degrees in an attempt to reign them in to around 60 words. Some of these include the omission of a single word to restructuring sentences, but the bios are still essentially the same.

(TL; DR? The bios are received were good but were tweaked slightly for word count purposes).

 

[Remix]

I'm at a point with my RP where I'd like some feedback before I finish it off on Tuesday. Anyone interested?

Nit status: picked.

And it's nice to see someone else RPing in paragraphs. That makes what, three people?

 

[Harthan]

Man, I can't believe how much a round off has gotten me re-energized. I'm really excited to be writing this RP this round. Can't wait for matches either.

 

[Viola Moonlight]

I hadnt noticed that.....

Consider the deadline changed to Wednesday. It's the only thing we can do.

My apologies. I put the deadline on Thursday so we could get the shows up a day later than normal because the deadline is a day later than normal.

 

[Shotaro]

Nit status: picked.

And it's nice to see someone else RPing in paragraphs. That makes what, three people?

Thanks, I've taken a lot of your feedback on board. As with most things it's difficult to see the flaws in your own work. I have a habit of being unnecessarily wordy sometimes and I think it hampers my writing a great deal...

I would offer you two whole rep points but it appears I have repped you too recently - I promise I will give them too you as soon as I am able. It was supposed to be in past tense but I will endeavour to proof read it several times more before it is posted so I should hopefully fix the tense issues.

 

[ABMorales787]

Dandy. Halfway through my RP and the fucking laptop freezes before I can save it. Back to the draftboard.

 

[Kermit]

Dandy. Halfway through my RP and the fucking laptop freezes before I can save it. Back to the draftboard.

I have had that happen to me before. I feel your pain, bro.

 

[Барбоса]

I tweaked the bios I received to varying degrees in an attempt to reign them in to around 60 words. Some of these include the omission of a single word to restructuring sentences, but the bios are still essentially the same.

(TL; DR? The bios are received were good but were tweaked slightly for word count purposes).

Thou Shalt Not Censor Me!

 

[FunKay the Inevitable]

Thou Shalt Not Censor Me!

I took a word out of yours. That was it.

 

[Барбоса]

I took a word out of yours. That was it.

Now, you have me interested in what word it was...

 

[FunKay the Inevitable]

Now, you have me interested in what word it was...

You'll just have to wait and find out dear boy.

 

[Richard Blonoff]

I PMed myself my RP. It was a rough version but for some reason the PM left out about 80% of it

 

[Remix]

If you want to create a backup of an RP, use dropbox for crying out loud.

 

[Bernkastel]

I PMed myself my RP. It was a rough version but for some reason the PM left out about 80% of it

The PM post quota is like half of the regular post quota.

 

[Jessie Lynn DivaGirl]

I've sent my RP out via PM a few times and it never did that...