don't mind Baller. he's going to bust your balls because your new and we always bust his balls. Besides, it seems like you've been doing this before.
The RP I thought was good. I'll give feedback on it later. I checked your application for info on your character and I must say your RP referenced a lot that was in your Application, which is good since this is your introducing yourself RP.
I'm not going to get into the whole 'breaking third wall' question about that we created these characters so in essence they shouldn't be allowed to view exact info on their opponents gimmick, strengths/weaknesses and your character should come up with their own ideas, but what I will comment on is that it is pretty easy to list off 4 or 5 strengths in your character and point out potential opponents flaws when there is really no weaknesses for your character. I see about 5 strengths, but only 1 weakness "overly cocky which limits effectiveness" What does that mean? do you get distracted easily, overlook your opponents, posse to often, do moves with less effort. Also 5-1 str to weak, where is the say lingering knee problem? or a wrestling style you can't match well against? or you're not a high flier? suck at ladder matches? maybe a temper, or a dark secret? Not everyone's weaknesses are creative, but everyone has about 3 of each. This too goes for Sivsyboi (John Smith) Who's one weakness is he's touchy about his personal life. How is that a weakness? A disadvantage in the ring? I want to slap a bizarro Superman Logo on your guy. I like both your guys characters, but I would like to see more human weaknesses.
Sorry for the rant. Good RP Crashin. Welcome to WZCW.