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Guys, i want D'Angelo Dinero to be my rep in my future WZCW sig. That can't happen if Jameson's 500 pounds. Therefore, he's 280-300. So there, I win.

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I find myself in a position where I have plenty of free time. Too much free time in fact - I'm bored out of my goddamn skull and will be for potentially the forseeable future.

With that in mind if anyone wants me to look over RPs, do some low skill photoshopping or anything else of that ilk feel free to shoot me a PM.

Translation: Hey guys, I`m really, really, really, really, REALLY bored and would love to help out anyway possible.

I'll take some feedback on my All Stars RP, if you're up to it.

Translation: I'll take some feedback on my All Stars RP, if you're up to it.

Sure will Doc, will probably get to it tomorrow if that's ok.

Translation: I`m not THAT bored.


(I jest)

Personally I like to think an RP should be as long as needed. If you can hit all the points you aimed for in 2,000 words that's good. There's no point to add 1,000 of stuff that is not needed

This. My latest RPs clock in around 1000 words and I think they`re some of the best that I`ve written. They`re straight forward with minimal fluff
 
Cool. But I really do feel honored that WZCW not only let me back in, but they let me compete in a PPV. Thank you for everything Ty.
 
2nd RP is up.

Scene begins in what appears to be a personal training room, with portraits of renowned Canadian wrestlers on the wall, to include Stu Hart, Bret Hart, Owen Hart, Brian Pillman, Chris Benoit, etc. Nathan St. John is shown sitting on a bench with his head hanging low, talking to himself.

Pillman's not Canadian.

Chris Jericho
Abdullah the Butcher
Dino Bravo
Rocky Johnson
Pat Patterson
Roddy Piper
Ivan Koloff
Gene Kiniski
Killer Kowalski
Rick Martel
Maurice Vachon
Billy Watson
Edge
Vampiro
John Tenta
Lance Storm
Trish Stratus

This is a very small list of people that you could have used. Hell, you could have even used Val Venis as a Canadian on the wall in the gym. But you went will a guy born in Cincinnati.
 
This will probably be the last long epic RP you guys will see from me [at least until the next PPV], as I plan on making my future RP's shorter.
 
If I was to combine my three Colby Congo RP's I am doing this round in one post it'd easily be the longest RP I've ever posted. Never could see the point in ridiculously long Rp's, I reckon my Kingdom Come RP (which is probably my best one) came in at 3 and a half word pages after formatting.
 
If I was to combine my three Colby Congo RP's I am doing this round in one post it'd easily be the longest RP I've ever posted. Never could see the point in ridiculously long Rp's, I reckon my Kingdom Come RP (which is probably my best one) came in at 3 and a half word pages after formatting.

Like I said before, If I was creative member I wouldn't doc anyone for length especially if they want to tell a good story.

But maybe that's just me as I've been used to reading and reviewing fanfiction stories that are 150k words in length or longer.
 
I don't think anyone should be docked because their RP is long. I do think, however, they should be docked if they just ramble on and don't have a coherent thought.
 
Are there rules to the All Star RPs like we have for WZCW? Like would we get penalized for having certain content?

Last year, Jared the Subway Guy wrestled and was interviewed by Bobby Heenan who he mistook for Johnny Klamor. Erik nearly murdered a poor woman's hands for only washing them with soap and water after she used the toilet. Action Saxton was implied to have shot himself in the head at the end of the RP.

I think you're good.
 
Pillman's not Canadian.

Yeah, I know. I guess I was referring more to Canadian-based wrestlers; should've been more specific, but thanks anyway. I didn't want to list too many, though, so... yeah. My point was across, though, I'd assume.
EDIT: Thanks a bunch for the feedback, Shotaro. Just read it, and am much obliged. Will keep all of what you said in mind. I'd already posted my 2nd RP before you had put up your feedback, but could you take a look at it and give me some feedback anyway? Though I do have a feeling it will be about the same, if not worse, than the previous.
 

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