WZCW Discussion Thread

[Awesome_Miz]

On reflection I am unsure if my feedback to Miz isn't too harsh - I'd be interested to get feedback on my feedback so to speak. I'm posting this here by way of a pseudo-apology to Miz.

Now worries man. The worst thing I can do is give you red rep. But, I get why you were that harsh. /tear You just want to see me excell. Don't worry I'll also be harsh on you.

 

[Miko]

S.H.I.T. - Joaquin's Cleft Lip

Some trivia to answer you're/your feedback concerns, thank you and I'll get some up for you tommorow, before Monday certainly.

Spoiler

-Your RPs legitimately confuse me, is the guy in the cardboard aware that he's not actually a robot? It's difficult to tell, there have been moments in previous RPs that have broken the fourth wall too much if he isn't. At the same time if he is, and by extension we are, what in the hell is going on with those orbs?

No he isnt aware of it, which is why he acts like such a robot.

What moments please? If you dont mind.

The orbs! Think of it this way. How do machines/computers think? I mean really, they're just circuits right? The guy in the robot costume doesnt know how they think even though he thinks he is one, the closest most people get to understanding it is the desktop interface on their computers, the man inside the cardboard costume still has a Human mind, he rationalises being a machine the only way his mind knows how. A computer will find information using a file search or whatever, a Human uses their desktop. Does that make sense?

Although perhaps I need to make it clearer.

Cons
-watch out for your and you're, you get it wrong a couple of times (see video)

NEVER!!

-Robots do not have minds, this brings me back to my point above. Are WE supposed to be aware that it isn't actually a robot? Is HE? You write most of the RP as though SHIT is actually a robot but then when you say something like "its mind" it shatters any suspension of disbelief (maybe it's just me but I would guess it isn't)

I wasnt allowed a proper robot character

I try to write the occasional cracks in its robot exterior, its undying love of Gustav, it's undying love of Alhazred, that sort of thing. I've got you questioning which is good, but I dont know whether I have properly succeeded with that or not, are you questioning for the right reasons?

-You're in a 4v2 handicap match and yet there is only a passing mention of Ty Burna and Alex Bowen, whilst I understand what you are aiming for it just strikes me as unusual to not at least mention them a little more, after all they're not just your team-mates for this match. You're in a frigging stable with them. I know you don't like applying a "method" to your RPs and you're a good RPer for it. That doesn't mean you should actively avoid mentioning your stable mates beyond a name-check. I've noticed quite a few of the apostles do this a lot and whilst I get how difficult it would be to co-ordinate that many peoples RPs I think as a stable it would make you even stronger.

Noted, although not likely to change.

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I AM NOT WATCHING IT!

 

[Shotaro]

Some trivia to answer you're/your feedback concerns, thank you and I'll get some up for you tommorow, before Monday certainly.

No he isnt aware of it, which is why he acts like such a robot.

Fair enough.

What moments please? If you dont mind.

I honestly can't remember. It is entirely possible that I'm misremembering.

The orbs! Think of it this way. How do machines/computers think? I mean really, they're just circuits right? The guy in the robot costume doesnt know how they think even though he thinks he is one, the closest most people get to understanding it is the desktop interface on their computers, the man inside the cardboard costume still has a Human mind, he rationalises being a machine the only way his mind knows how. A computer will find information using a file search or whatever, a Human uses their desktop. Does that make sense?

Yes - in a bizarre way.

NEVER!!

"delete you're search history" <--- right there. Although with S.H.I.T. being a computer it could be a part of himself so you could make a case...

I wasnt allowed a proper robot character

I try to write the occasional cracks in its robot exterior, its undying love of Gustav, it's undying love of Alhazred, that sort of thing. I've got you questioning which is good, but I dont know whether I have properly succeeded with that or not, are you questioning for the right reasons?

I hope so, in all honesty I do enjoy your RPs. I'm questioning because of the way it's written and the words you've chosen if that answers your question.

Noted, although not likely to change.

Fair enough. I don't think the apostles really need it but at the same time I felt it was a point worth bringing up.

I AM NOT WATCHING IT!

You really should it's actually pretty funny.

 

[Beastmode 24]

Sorry about my rant earlier. I do apologize for it. It's been a long week at work, i found out that i'm getting medically retired from the army and i'm stressing out big time about future employment. If anyone was offended by it I truly am sorry.

 

[Awesome_Miz]

Sorry about my rant earlier. I do apologize for it. It's been a long week at work, i found out that i'm getting medically retired from the army and i'm stressing out big time about future employment. If anyone was offended by it I truly am sorry.

Hey man don't worry. Just remember if you don't have anything nice don't say it. Always remember that before posting.

I'm also sorry about your retirement from the army. If you ever need a friend to talk about anything, I'll be here.

 

[GI Cake]

Sorry about my rant earlier. I do apologize for it. It's been a long week at work, i found out that i'm getting medically retired from the army and i'm stressing out big time about future employment. If anyone was offended by it I truly am sorry.

You're my boy Meeks, you're my boy!

 

[Beastmode 24]

We aim to please Mr. Pancake we aim to please

 

[The Crock]

Everybody who I promised feedback will get it either after the Finals game tonight, or tomorrow. I was going to do it earlier, but I played basketball for a couple of hours and I'm absolutely drained.

 

[Beastmode 24]

Would anyone care to give me some more feedback on my RP? I can't guarrantee i can give any in return as i will be busy as hell the next couple weeks, but i promise to reciprocate in the future.

 

[Awesome_Miz]

Sure, thing meeks.

 

[GI Cake]

Would anyone care to give me some more feedback on my RP? I can't guarrantee i can give any in return as i will be busy as hell the next couple weeks, but i promise to reciprocate in the future.

Are you sure you want my feedback brother?

 

[Bernkastel]

Are you sure you want my feedback brother?

I'll take some. I've been giving feedback this round via rep and PM, hope that's okay.

 

[GI Cake]

I'll take some. I've been giving feedback this round via rep and PM, hope that's okay.

I got you bro, but don't worry about returning the favor though. I'm not seeking feedback for this round.

 

[FlexAmerican Dynamite]

I'll return the favor of feedback through PM this round if anybody cares.

 

[Richard Blonoff]

I got you bro, but don't worry about returning the favor though. I'm not seeking feedback for this round.

I'll give you feedback anyway

 

[Awesome_Miz]

So, are we even going to have predictions this week?

 

[GI Cake]

So, are we even going to have predictions this week?

I'll get the predictions up sooner or later. And don't worry I will ask the tough questions like if Darren Bull will get blood on his hands.

 

[Awesome_Miz]

I'll get the predictions up sooner or later. And don't worry I will ask the tough questions like if Darren Bull will get blood on his hands.

Damn that was better than my question; Will Stormrage and Ricky will have a Yo Momma fight instead of a wrestling match?

 

[a0161613]

So we are getting the shaft. Great. Thanks to everyone who no showed and pretty much made the hard work i put into my RP count for shit. I don't get mad about much stuff since this is just an efed but that pisses me off major. I dont wanna step out of line here so if i do creative i'm sorry but if you're just gonna no show why did you bother signing up for WZCW in the first place?

I know Ty has put you in line but this was really out of order.

I've done a little rep feedback but not a lot

 

[Beastmode 24]

i hate looking for new jobs. this blows. anyway, how's everyone's day going?

 

[Silly Willy Nilly Vanilly in the Milly]

i hate looking for new jobs. this blows. anyway, how's everyone's day going?

I hate looking for jobs too. But it's pretty good, yours?

 

[Beastmode 24]

see above post. my day has BLOWN.

 

[Silly Willy Nilly Vanilly in the Milly]

That... blows.
Had to say it.

 

[The Crock]

Feedback's up for Meeks, Awesome Miz, and Lee.

 

[JGlass]

see above post. my day has BLOWN.

If it makes you feel better, I plan to give you feedback in the near future.

That... blows.
Had to say it.

That wasn't funny. Also, did you really give your character a Hobbs to his Calvin?