WZCW Discussion Thread

[Bernkastel]

What genre is it? I'm kinda curious as to how that crossover works out. SSJ Goten vs Pikachu? That would be an interesting read...

The only DBZ character I used is Pan, and the story primarily takes place in the Pokemon universe folowing anime canon. I've got the plot written, it's just writing details that suck. There are some new aspects that aren't in either story, and I reaaaally over-exaggerate the strength of legendary pokemon... just because.

 

[Richard Blonoff]

Gonna put some pen to paper and work on my RP a bit. Got a tasty stromboli, amped after a great UFC card and my buddy doing JR commentary on it all night

 

[FunKay the Inevitable]

Yeah my longest RP was 2000 words. My KC RP is only slightly longer than that. Length isn't everything folks...

 

[Johnny Scumm]

Yeah my longest RP was 2000 words. My KC RP is only slightly longer than that. Length isn't everything folks...

That's what he said. But she didn't like it.

I've had an idea to use my Birthday in my RP as Scumm's birthday. It could work alongside the other ideas I had, this just got better. I like it.

 

[Shotaro]

Yeah my longest RP was 2000 words. My KC RP is only slightly longer than that. Length isn't everything folks...

That's as maybe but don't discount girth. For me a story is as long as it needs to be (within reason). For Kingdom Come I've been building on a few different topics and I've managed to hit them all whilst writing what I think is a pretty damn good story. I "finished" it this morning, but I will probably not post until Friday to give me time to proofread it.

As a side note would anyone in creative be able to take a look at it for me to make sure it's within the rules etc (I'm not asking for advice or an opinion necessarily, more making sure it won't get me disqualified)? Normally I would send it to Numbers but since he's my opponent... I have sent it to Ty but seeing as he posted Diablo III over and over above I doubt he'll get chance to read it before I post it.

 

[Beastmode 24]

The one i posted up this week was my longest. and it was around 1,000 words? Big thanks to killjoy for helping me so much with it.

 

[Shotaro]

The one i posted up this week was my longest. and it was around 1,000 words? Big thanks to killjoy for helping me so much with it.

I've given you some feedback - the formatting is a matter of personal preference, but other than that it showed promise, take note of all of the advice you're given and you'll quickly develop as a writer.

 

[Beastmode 24]

I definatley appreciate the feedback that you gave me. I'm just trying to get better at this because i legit enjoy doing it

 

[Harthan]

Sorry I haven't been very present the last few days, folks - very long international journey with a sixteen hour flight plus layovers. I suppose I should have mentioned this at large, rather than just to fellow creative, but I'm in Botswana for the next couple of weeks. Still here for KC and all that entails, of course, but in case maybe some of you wanted to contact me I'm roughly at UK time now (two hours ahead).

And now for my thoughts on relevant topics of discussion:

I have two RPs that hover around 8000 words. I now despise the first one (my recentish return RP), but I hadn't gotten fully back into the mindset of Drake, so I suppose it was a necessary evil. The second one I'm quite fond of (the LL RP) but it appears not to have gone over so well. It was entirely necessary to set up what I'm doing now, though.

Thinking KC will clock in somewhere in the 3000-4000 range.

I've always wanted to write some fanfiction. I might try my hand at some MLP things. I've got several creative writing projects I want to take a stab at over the summer. I'm not sure if I should focus on one or dabble in them all.

 

[Silly Willy Nilly Vanilly in the Milly]

I think I have a winner with this RP of mine here for AF, but I still don't want to post it just yet. Still sitting here, staring at it, thinking of how I can improve.
My massive headaches are not helping either. Tylenol hasn't done bull crap.
If anything, I feel worse as a result.
It makes me wonder if one of those commercials will pop up...
"If you or a loved one have taken Tylenol and have experienced [insert side effects here], you are obligated to get [insert amount of money here]."

 

[Dave]

I suppose I had better get started then?

 

[Beastmode 24]

I wonder if anyone's gonna no show this time. That would be pretty stupid to no show on the biggest cards of the year.

 

[Silly Willy Nilly Vanilly in the Milly]

And yet some people wouldn't consider it stupid, as they don't have a grasp on what stupidity really is, thus defining them as stupid.
It isn't just the action that is stupid, but he who does it as well.
"Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not so sure about the former." -Einstein

 

[Beastmode 24]

And yet some people wouldn't consider it stupid, as they don't have a grasp on what stupidity really is, thus defining them as stupid.
It isn't just the action that is stupid, but he who does it as well.
"Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not so sure about the former." -Einstein

what he said

 

[Silly Willy Nilly Vanilly in the Milly]

Honestly, I don't know what I said either. My Zoloft is getting to me...
At any rate, I think I am confident enough to post my RP.

 

[Dave]

And yet some people wouldn't consider it stupid, as they don't have a grasp on what stupidity really is, thus defining them as stupid.
It isn't just the action that is stupid, but he who does it as well.
"Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not so sure about the former." -Einstein

What?

 

[FunKay the Inevitable]

I've got several creative writing projects I want to take a stab at over the summer. I'm not sure if I should focus on one or dabble in them all.

Same with me Harthan. Same with me.

 

[Silly Willy Nilly Vanilly in the Milly]

What?

I don't even really know, man. My meds are making me high.

 

[a0161613]

Then shhh....

 

[Silly Willy Nilly Vanilly in the Milly]

Then shhh....

My apologies. But I still think it sounded pretty cool.

 

[Dave]

It didn't.

 

[Silly Willy Nilly Vanilly in the Milly]

It didn't.

Fair enough. Shall henceforth hold my tongue of anything I may post under the influence...

 

[Steamboat Ricky]

Are you fuckers ready for the RP return of Ricky?

 

[Dave]

I was born ready.

 

[GI Cake]

Are you fuckers ready for the RP return of Ricky?