GCB FEEDBACK GENERAL THOUGHTS ON PPV:
OK, fellas, time for some thoughts. Apologies Ive taken a while to get round to it, Ill be honest, Ive not been reading much here; Ive been on a different forum thats a hell of a lot more active. However, I do enjoy reading your show so Ive taken some time over the past couple of days to catch up and I thought Id give you a few thoughts on the PPV and then on NMs RAW. Here goes.
I enjoyed the PPV but there were two major things that bugged the hell out of me with it; I think Ive picked you up on this before, CM, but the grammar is really off-putting and I ended up skipping most of your matches and simply reading the final paragraph. Its a shame youre putting so much effort into writing these matches and segments but you cant spare five minutes to use the grammar/spellcheck facilities on Word or something just to get that bit right. Whilst its CMs responsibility to check this and sort it, Id also suggest that NM needs to get involved here too. Offer to proofread it for him? Your show, bar the odd error, is not a problem grammar wise and I dont skip through your stuff so much and definitely not the main event stuff. Your biggest problem, CM, is the homophone words your/youre, there/there/theyre etc Your user name suggests that youre a CM Punk fan; in that case, take a look at these - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=13FV1GaA20I and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Y4zxcSuwlI as a starting point. If you dont correct the grammar for me, sort it on the off chance that Mr. Brooks might read your show!
The other thing is something I also alluded to in my first feedback back after the first couple of shows whether or not you know what the other is doing. On TV and at the PPV, there were/are too many run-ins and after match assaults for my liking and I think if you were clued up completely about each others work, youd notice that before posting.
With a PPV having now gone, Im not worried about commenting on your storylines; I loved the Angle/Perfect stuff especially the segments with Angle looking for a partner. Love that Perfect looked strong despite his loss to Angle but thats a great platform to launch Angle into the main event picture once again. I loved the goofball heel Angle so much and I think when WWE made him that tad more intense and serious, it kinda damaged him a little particularly post WM 20. I also enjoyed CMs use of Hogan and Shows feud set up to elevate Christian and Storm and I hope this means that they will be more than Jerichos lackies moving forward. NM is doing a great job on RAW of causing chaos for Ric Flair and thats a really interesting side note to a lot of feuds, where is it all leading for Flair? Regals petition, Undertaker as his World Champion, Austin hitting him with Stunners, the NWO clearly not respecting him; I sense Flair getting back in the ring at some point but its been done well so far. The subtle change CM has made to Jericho has been done well and the title defence for HHH, whilst necessary, didnt bury Jericho and its not unrealistic that he could challenge again at some stage. Taker/Austin was the match of the night for me and I was glad you went with Taker rather than Austin. I sense that Austin might have something else coming down the line that means, for now, he doesnt need the World Championship and Taker is a solid enough guy to run as World Champion.
Storyline wise, things I dont like both on RAW Im afraid, NM. The whole Big Show and Hogan thing was utterly predictable, you could see it coming a mile off. Whilst I dont mind Show and Hogan feuding personally think Show should go over too it was the set up that didnt work for me. Too obvious it was coming. The second thing is Benoits returnwhich Ill touch on in my RAW feedback in a moment. You can probably guess why.
Overall, this is the best thing on BT right now unfortunately, your only competition right now is Falk who is doing something completely different anyway. With so little happening here though, I think your show has to go from good to outstanding to keep people coming back and reading it. It doesnt surprise me that youre struggling for feedback and reviews because your show is just good. Its solid and its fine but it has to do more. CM needs to fix the grammar and you need to stop relying on after-match assaults so much as a pair. Chaos for Ric Flair can be done in different ways other than assaults. Theyre losing their impact; count how many times somebody has been left laid out or sent to hospital and youll see what I mean. Dont get me wrong, theres a lot of good stuff here, guys, its a perfectly acceptable read but it lacks something for me that will make me come back and check it out regular.
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GCB FEEDBACK RAW FEEDBACK FOR NM:
OK, Notorious, moving on to RAW and Im going to write this as I go. Coming off the first PPV, this is the telling time now as to whether this is going to stick and become a top, top show or not. Most BTs fail to reach the first PPV and, of those that do, most of them fail to move much further. Is this going to fizzle out now? Or is it going to be up there with the great past shows of Peep/Theo, Prophet, JAM and myself? Lets see what RAW brings us.
One thing I forgot to mention above was that I really enjoyed the NWO vs. Dudleys feud and I am glad it is getting a mention to open RAW here tonight. It would be easy now to move Nash into the main event picture but I hope you resist that for now and continue this feud which could elevate the likes of DVon, Bubba and X-Pac into US Championship level. Here we go though with Flair, I like how youre causing chaos for him although I have issues with the way youre doing it as Ive already mentioned. Regal interrupting Flair with his petition was the red herring of course to set up for Austin, nicely done. Im intrigued as to how Austin continues here on RAW as there will always be a temptation to have him in the title picture which you could easily do at the PPV still but there are issues with NWO and Flair too. If youre going Austin vs. NWO in some form, it needs to be done in an interesting way as Hall vs. Austin wasnt great at WM18; like I say, Im intrigued to see how this goes down.
OK, here goes. Benoit. I know people have different opinions but, for me, I find it utterly distasteful to use him and that vignette video in particular. Listen to the words in it with knowledge of what happened a few years later. Chris Benoit the wrestler, I had all the respect in the world for and he was in my list of favourites. However, even if youre writing 2002, its 2014 and we know what he did. Hes a murderer. He killed innocent people and I think his use in this BT is in extremely bad taste. Just my opinion of course, Im guessing your opinion is different and thats why youre using him. I dont expect you to change your plans but Im not gonna read his matches or segments and it could put me off completely. I wont be alone. Maybe Im a little over-sensitive but I dont think his wrestling career deserves to be glorified over the his vile actions as a man in the last days of his life. I just think it is wrong.
Ha, Hurricane defeats Albert. I can only assume that any future plans for Albert are null! I am finding this a little strange re: Regal; hes in a fairly high profile angle with the Ric Flair petition and the match against Austin but hes fussing around over Hurricane? Nice swerve with Henry though, a Henry/Albert team would be a good with Regal so maybe I need to revise my thoughts on Albert.
Nice way to introduce Randy Orton with Perfect although Im a little confused re: Perfect. Comments saying hes no longer the best but is perfect dont really work for me, the beauty of Perfects character in the 90s was that he believed in himself as being perfection. I dont think the humble approach worked for him there, I prefer his brash, confident, perfect character a whole lot more.
Did I mention that I love goofball Angle?!
OK, Dreamer vs. Raven didnt interest me at all. Ive enjoyed the bits youve had so far with Raven loved the Hardcore Championship steal from Maven but having a fight because theyve got previous in another now defunct company? Not for me. Youve got to give me a reason to be interested and I dont think you have.
Nice little promo from Test and he aligns himself against Flair too. Test had so much potential in 2002 with the whole immunity thing and I think that could still be used. If he attacked Flair and he was fired but then pulled the immunity card, thatd be a great way for him to really get under the skin of Flair here. I was always a Test fan but Id like to see the push that the WWE started in 2001 and pulled out of in 2002 given a fresh bit of momentum here.
Fuckity-fuckity-fuck. Was loving Angles promo and Edges interruption and then you pulled out Benoit. Meh. Standard Divas stuff, looks like Lita is next up for Jazz. More Flair? I know he is the GM of RAW but Im starting to get a little sick of him now!
The aftermath of the main event was mental and so chaotic but Flair is taking charge a little with how things went down. Not really sure how much it advanced things between Austin and Taker but glad to see their title match will be on RAW which should mean were going to get some advancement on how things are going to work out going forward with them as the next PPV approaches.
Reading this back, Ive been pretty critical but I think Ive said what I felt at the end of each segment and how it interests me as a reader. For me, theres still not enough to get excited about, its still just a good, solid show and it lacks a really interesting storyline to really hook me in. There is potential in some stories, i.e. Flairs struggle to earn respect as the GM, the NWO's presence and Taker/Austin but I just think you need something thats going to make people sit up and take notice of it and really want to come back and read this as soon as the next RAW is posted. Ive read other threads youve done and simply producing a decent show is not really where youre at no more; youre completely adapt at the basics of a show and now you need to come up with something to show that this is awesome and that youre the man here on BT. I dont know, I just havent felt it yet; RAW just seems very formulaic right now.
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OK, fellas, time for some thoughts. Apologies Ive taken a while to get round to it, Ill be honest, Ive not been reading much here; Ive been on a different forum thats a hell of a lot more active. However, I do enjoy reading your show so Ive taken some time over the past couple of days to catch up and I thought Id give you a few thoughts on the PPV and then on NMs RAW. Here goes.
I enjoyed the PPV but there were two major things that bugged the hell out of me with it; I think Ive picked you up on this before, CM, but the grammar is really off-putting and I ended up skipping most of your matches and simply reading the final paragraph. Its a shame youre putting so much effort into writing these matches and segments but you cant spare five minutes to use the grammar/spellcheck facilities on Word or something just to get that bit right. Whilst its CMs responsibility to check this and sort it, Id also suggest that NM needs to get involved here too. Offer to proofread it for him? Your show, bar the odd error, is not a problem grammar wise and I dont skip through your stuff so much and definitely not the main event stuff. Your biggest problem, CM, is the homophone words your/youre, there/there/theyre etc Your user name suggests that youre a CM Punk fan; in that case, take a look at these - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=13FV1GaA20I and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Y4zxcSuwlI as a starting point. If you dont correct the grammar for me, sort it on the off chance that Mr. Brooks might read your show!
The other thing is something I also alluded to in my first feedback back after the first couple of shows whether or not you know what the other is doing. On TV and at the PPV, there were/are too many run-ins and after match assaults for my liking and I think if you were clued up completely about each others work, youd notice that before posting.
With a PPV having now gone, Im not worried about commenting on your storylines; I loved the Angle/Perfect stuff especially the segments with Angle looking for a partner. Love that Perfect looked strong despite his loss to Angle but thats a great platform to launch Angle into the main event picture once again. I loved the goofball heel Angle so much and I think when WWE made him that tad more intense and serious, it kinda damaged him a little particularly post WM 20. I also enjoyed CMs use of Hogan and Shows feud set up to elevate Christian and Storm and I hope this means that they will be more than Jerichos lackies moving forward. NM is doing a great job on RAW of causing chaos for Ric Flair and thats a really interesting side note to a lot of feuds, where is it all leading for Flair? Regals petition, Undertaker as his World Champion, Austin hitting him with Stunners, the NWO clearly not respecting him; I sense Flair getting back in the ring at some point but its been done well so far. The subtle change CM has made to Jericho has been done well and the title defence for HHH, whilst necessary, didnt bury Jericho and its not unrealistic that he could challenge again at some stage. Taker/Austin was the match of the night for me and I was glad you went with Taker rather than Austin. I sense that Austin might have something else coming down the line that means, for now, he doesnt need the World Championship and Taker is a solid enough guy to run as World Champion.
Storyline wise, things I dont like both on RAW Im afraid, NM. The whole Big Show and Hogan thing was utterly predictable, you could see it coming a mile off. Whilst I dont mind Show and Hogan feuding personally think Show should go over too it was the set up that didnt work for me. Too obvious it was coming. The second thing is Benoits returnwhich Ill touch on in my RAW feedback in a moment. You can probably guess why.
Overall, this is the best thing on BT right now unfortunately, your only competition right now is Falk who is doing something completely different anyway. With so little happening here though, I think your show has to go from good to outstanding to keep people coming back and reading it. It doesnt surprise me that youre struggling for feedback and reviews because your show is just good. Its solid and its fine but it has to do more. CM needs to fix the grammar and you need to stop relying on after-match assaults so much as a pair. Chaos for Ric Flair can be done in different ways other than assaults. Theyre losing their impact; count how many times somebody has been left laid out or sent to hospital and youll see what I mean. Dont get me wrong, theres a lot of good stuff here, guys, its a perfectly acceptable read but it lacks something for me that will make me come back and check it out regular.
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GCB FEEDBACK RAW FEEDBACK FOR NM:
OK, Notorious, moving on to RAW and Im going to write this as I go. Coming off the first PPV, this is the telling time now as to whether this is going to stick and become a top, top show or not. Most BTs fail to reach the first PPV and, of those that do, most of them fail to move much further. Is this going to fizzle out now? Or is it going to be up there with the great past shows of Peep/Theo, Prophet, JAM and myself? Lets see what RAW brings us.
One thing I forgot to mention above was that I really enjoyed the NWO vs. Dudleys feud and I am glad it is getting a mention to open RAW here tonight. It would be easy now to move Nash into the main event picture but I hope you resist that for now and continue this feud which could elevate the likes of DVon, Bubba and X-Pac into US Championship level. Here we go though with Flair, I like how youre causing chaos for him although I have issues with the way youre doing it as Ive already mentioned. Regal interrupting Flair with his petition was the red herring of course to set up for Austin, nicely done. Im intrigued as to how Austin continues here on RAW as there will always be a temptation to have him in the title picture which you could easily do at the PPV still but there are issues with NWO and Flair too. If youre going Austin vs. NWO in some form, it needs to be done in an interesting way as Hall vs. Austin wasnt great at WM18; like I say, Im intrigued to see how this goes down.
OK, here goes. Benoit. I know people have different opinions but, for me, I find it utterly distasteful to use him and that vignette video in particular. Listen to the words in it with knowledge of what happened a few years later. Chris Benoit the wrestler, I had all the respect in the world for and he was in my list of favourites. However, even if youre writing 2002, its 2014 and we know what he did. Hes a murderer. He killed innocent people and I think his use in this BT is in extremely bad taste. Just my opinion of course, Im guessing your opinion is different and thats why youre using him. I dont expect you to change your plans but Im not gonna read his matches or segments and it could put me off completely. I wont be alone. Maybe Im a little over-sensitive but I dont think his wrestling career deserves to be glorified over the his vile actions as a man in the last days of his life. I just think it is wrong.
Ha, Hurricane defeats Albert. I can only assume that any future plans for Albert are null! I am finding this a little strange re: Regal; hes in a fairly high profile angle with the Ric Flair petition and the match against Austin but hes fussing around over Hurricane? Nice swerve with Henry though, a Henry/Albert team would be a good with Regal so maybe I need to revise my thoughts on Albert.
Nice way to introduce Randy Orton with Perfect although Im a little confused re: Perfect. Comments saying hes no longer the best but is perfect dont really work for me, the beauty of Perfects character in the 90s was that he believed in himself as being perfection. I dont think the humble approach worked for him there, I prefer his brash, confident, perfect character a whole lot more.
Did I mention that I love goofball Angle?!

OK, Dreamer vs. Raven didnt interest me at all. Ive enjoyed the bits youve had so far with Raven loved the Hardcore Championship steal from Maven but having a fight because theyve got previous in another now defunct company? Not for me. Youve got to give me a reason to be interested and I dont think you have.
Nice little promo from Test and he aligns himself against Flair too. Test had so much potential in 2002 with the whole immunity thing and I think that could still be used. If he attacked Flair and he was fired but then pulled the immunity card, thatd be a great way for him to really get under the skin of Flair here. I was always a Test fan but Id like to see the push that the WWE started in 2001 and pulled out of in 2002 given a fresh bit of momentum here.
Fuckity-fuckity-fuck. Was loving Angles promo and Edges interruption and then you pulled out Benoit. Meh. Standard Divas stuff, looks like Lita is next up for Jazz. More Flair? I know he is the GM of RAW but Im starting to get a little sick of him now!
The aftermath of the main event was mental and so chaotic but Flair is taking charge a little with how things went down. Not really sure how much it advanced things between Austin and Taker but glad to see their title match will be on RAW which should mean were going to get some advancement on how things are going to work out going forward with them as the next PPV approaches.
Reading this back, Ive been pretty critical but I think Ive said what I felt at the end of each segment and how it interests me as a reader. For me, theres still not enough to get excited about, its still just a good, solid show and it lacks a really interesting storyline to really hook me in. There is potential in some stories, i.e. Flairs struggle to earn respect as the GM, the NWO's presence and Taker/Austin but I just think you need something thats going to make people sit up and take notice of it and really want to come back and read this as soon as the next RAW is posted. Ive read other threads youve done and simply producing a decent show is not really where youre at no more; youre completely adapt at the basics of a show and now you need to come up with something to show that this is awesome and that youre the man here on BT. I dont know, I just havent felt it yet; RAW just seems very formulaic right now.
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