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World Wrestling entertainment has today been taken over and with the take over have come some huge changes. The new man in charge Dylan Kelly has promised the fans a new era and intends to give it to them personally as he is the new general manager of Raw. He has also brought the news that Smackdown has been cancelled and the show will no longer air. Some of the talent on Smackdown will be moved to Monday night Raw or some will be future endeavoured. We can also confirm that the united states championship and the world heavyweight championship are no longer apart of the company, the only titles remaining are as follows:

WWE Championship
Intercontinental Championship
Tag team Championships
Women's championship

WWE however regret to inform C.M Punk, Big Show and Primo and Epico that their titles have been vacated.

At this time WWE would also like to say that the WWE divas will now be permanently on NXT. The show will take a one week hiatus and will start again with new rookies and WWE mentors.


WWE has also changed it's pay per view schedule:

WWE Backlash
WWE Judgement Day
WWE No Mercy
WWE King Of The Ring
WWE Summerslam
WWE Unforgiven
WWE Money In The Bank
WWE Survivor Series
WWE Armegeddon
WWE Royal Rumble
WWE No Way Out
WWE Wrestlemania XXIX

The drastic schedule change from the new chairman sees the return of many old pay per views that used to be on the WWE calendar.
WWE Monday Night RAW Roster

Alex Riley
Big Show
Brodus Clay
Chris Jericho
CM Punk
Curt Hawkins
David Otunga
Dolph Ziggler
Epico
Evan Bourne
Jack Swagger
John Cena
Kane
Kofi Kingston
The Miz
Primo
Rey Mysterio
R-Truth
Santino Marella
Tyler Reks
Zack Ryder


Here is the list of superstars moving from Smackdown to Monday Night Raw:

Alberto Del Rio
Christian
Cody Rhodes
Damien Sandow
Daniel Bryan
Drew Mcintyre
Jey Uso
Jimmy Uso
Jinder Mahal
Justin Gabriel
Mark Henry
Randy Orton
Sheamus
Sin Cara
Ted Dibiase
Tyson Kidd
Undertaker
Wade Barrett
Yoshi Tatsu

Any superstar not on this list is no longer apart of the WWE roster we wish them the best in all their future endeavours.










 
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Monday April 2nd 2012
American Airlines Arena - Miami, Florida

*Start Video*

A dark room appears on screen and imediately a light flashes a video then begins to play showing iconic moments in the past of the WWE such as Hulk Hogan bodyslamming Andre The Giant and Mankind being thrown off the top of the cell. The video comes to an abrupt end and a young man appears on screen with blonde hair. He introduces himself as Dylan Kelly the new owner of the WWE he says he remembers all of those moments shown from his childhood but he states he wants to make some new moments for people to remember he says this is a new era for the company and he tells us that it starts tonight.

*End Video*

*Burn It To The Ground*

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Michael Cole: Hello and welcome to Monday Night Raw coming to you live from the American Airlines Arena in Miami Florida! I’m the voice of the WWE Michael Cole alongside WWE hall of famer Jerry ‘The King’ Lawler. And well King the shocking news broke yesterday what is gonna’ happen!?

Jerry Lawler: Well Cole I’ve been in this company for many years and this is the most shocking news I could have never imagined Vince Mcmahon selling his pride and joy! And even though Raw has always been the A show, but Smackdown is no longer airing now!

Michael Cole: We will be hearing from our new boss Dylan Kelly later tonight and we will also have a farewell appearance from Mr Mcmahon but amongst all this excitement we witnessed one of the greatest Wrestlemanias’ in history last night.

Jerry Lawler: I never thought that Wrestlemania wouldn’t be the topic of conversation however this news has shook this company to the core.

*Cult Of Personality*​

The Miami crowd erupts as the Second City Saint CM Punk walks out to the stage he looks all business and begins to storm down to the ring he grabs a microphone and begins to speak. He says he put in the fight of his life at Wrestlemania and things were looking up for not just him but for the company. He then goes on about his happiness of Mr McMahon selling the company however he then turns angry and starts ranting about having HIS title stripped from him.

*Written In My Face*​

As Punk is about to continue the venting of his frustrations he is interrupted by the former World Heavyweight Champion Sheamus who is given a huge ovation as he walks down to the ring with a microphone in hand. He talks about winning the World Heavyweight Championship in 18 seconds against Daniel Bryan. He says he agrees with Punk that it is wrong for the titles to be vacated. He says instead of whining about it that they should do something about to which Punk nods his head.

*Seven Nation Army*​

The crowd look puzzled as the famous White Stripes song blurs out through the speakers. The young man from the opening video appears the NEW owner of WWE Dylan Kelly. He stands at the top of the ramp and begins to introduce himself. He tells the crowd about his business credentials and his love for Wrestling! He makes the announcement that as the two former World champions that they will face each other at WWE BACKLASH for the WWE Championship much to the delight of the fans. The two in the ring let out a smile at each other as we go to commercial.

*Commercial*​

As Raw comes back on air Cole & King recap what just went down before the break.

*In The Middle Of It Now*​

Tyler Reks appears on the stage accompanied by his tag team partner Curt Hawkins to some heat from the Miami crowd.
Reks and Hawkins enter the ring and begin to talk stratergy before Reks’ opponent comes out.

*Booyaka 619*​

The Miami crowd explodes as the masked sensation Rey Mysterio makes his return to the WWE. He makes his way down to the ring and soaks up the atmosphere with the fans. He then enters the ring and poses on the turnbuckle.

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Tyler Reks w/ Curt Hawkins vs. Rey Mysterio

As the bell sounds for the match to begin Reks corners Mysterio and overpowers the masked man. Reks then begins to use his size and strength to advantage and manhandles Mysterio. He then nails him with a huge clothesline.
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Hawkins tries to encourage his partner to finish of Mysterio who doesn’t look 100 % after returning from injury. Reks whips Mysterio into the turnbuckle and nails him with a boot as he comes back towards him. Reks looks as though he is ready to finish off Mysterio, However Mysterio nails two kicks to the legs of Reks and begins to build momentum. Hawkins tries to distract Mysterio but he ends up being pummelled to the floor by Mysterio. This time however allows Reks to pick Mysterio up however Mysterio counters and dropkicks Reks into position for the 619! Which he hits to perfection and he nails a splash to follow.
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Winner: Rey Mysterio by pinfall​

Miami lets out a huge pop for Mysterio who despite not being 100% pulls out a win on his return. His celebrations are shortlived however as Hawkins & Reks attack him from behind and begin to double team Mysterio. Hawkins motions for Reks to get a chair from ringside. However as Reks gets back in to the ring.

*Ancient Spirit*​

The Miami crowd looks shocked as another masked sensation Sin Cara appears on the stage.

Michael Cole: Oh my King Sin Cara is back!

Cara sprints down to the ring and cleans house disposing of Reks and Hawkins with an array of high flying moves. He then helps fellow masked superstar Rey Mysterio to his feet, The pair then shake hands as Raw goes to commercial.

*Commercial*​

When Raw returns Cole and King hype up Mr McMahon’s farewell for later tonight. They also tell us that John Cena has gone missing after his defeat to The Rock at WrestleMania.

*Oh Radio*​

Long island iced Z Zack Ryder comes out to the delight of the Miami crowd he gives his headband to a child in the front row and enters the ring.

*Somebody Call My Momma*​

Brodus comes out to the stage accompanied by Cameron and Naomi and dances down to the ring. Once he enters the ring his pyro explodes as he and Ryder fist pump together.

*Here To Show The World*​

The crowd jeers as Vickie Guerrero leads out American Perfection Dolph Ziggler and Jack Swagger to the ring for the tag team contest.

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Zack Ryder & Brodus Clay vs. American Perfection

The match begins with Ryder and Ziggler in the ring, the pair lock up with Ziggler getting the better of the exchange. The show off then does push ups with Ryder down to the delight of his manager. However as soon as he gets up Ryder nails him with huge clothesline that sends him reeling. He then tags in the All American Jack Swagger who charges at Ryder and hits a NFL style football tackle to the internet darling. As Ryder is in the corner he tags in the big man Brodus Clay who overpowers him with ease. He then hits a bodyslam to Swagger who retreats to the corner but gets back up ready to attack Clay again but to no avail as the Funk man fends him off again to which Swagger tags in Ziggler who is still recovering from the clothesline. Ziggler looks unhappy to be tagged in and stares at Swagger as he turns around Clay hits a huge running splash and goes for the pinfall.
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Winners: Zack Ryder & Brodus Clay by pinfall​

Vickie looks on in horror as Clay and Ryder pull of a huge win. She enters the ring with Swagger as they help Ziggler to his feet however Ziggler shoves them aside and tells them he is done and that they are holding him back. He then storms to the back alone as Raw goes to commercial.

*Commercial*​

As the show comes back on the air we go to the back were Josh Matthews is with the new owner of the WWE Dylan Kelly. Kelly talks about the beginning of a new era for the company after such a slow few years it has had. He also says that you will see some new faces on Raw and you will see some leave Raw. He announces that Eve will remain as his assistant with John Laurinitas going back to his role as Executive vice president of talent relations. Triple H is also still the COO of the company and will be on Raw next week. Kelly says he wants to feel the excitement of the fans flow through the company and says he knows the recipe for a successful business and he looks forward to the future.

When we cut back to the ring the lights cut out and we see the light up jacket of Chris Jericho on the stage much to the jeers of the WWE universe. His pyro explodes and he makes his way down to the ring. He grabs a microphone and tells the crowd to shut up as he has an announcement. Jericho runs through his list of accolades in this company and says he has loved his time here but he announces he is leaving for a while and thanks the fans for his journey. The crowd look shocked at the announcement and chant Y2J. They seem more shocked at Jericho’s change in attitude and appreciate his kind words.

*End Of Days*​

Just as Jericho is about to continue he is interrupted by his former NXT rookie Wade Barrett. Barrett enters the ring wearing a sharp looking suit as the crowd boo him. Barrett grabs a microphone and questions Jericho about sucking up to the fans as he and everyone else knows he is not good enough. Barrett tells the crowd about his days on NXT and how bad Jericho was as a pro he says that he is lucky he is that good because anyone else would have been eliminated in the first week with Jericho as their pro. He then says that he was better than Jericho then and he still is now. He says that Jericho will come back because he loves the attention of everyone. Jericho says he agrees with Barrett about loving attention but that is because he is the best at everything he does. He then says Barrett may talk a good game but he will always be an ASS CLOWN! As Jericho goes to continue Barrett decks him with a huge right hand and begins pummelling Jericho. He then picks Jericho up and throws him to the outside, as Barrett follows to the outside Jericho begins to fight back but it is short lived as Barrett delivers a knee to the gut. He then sends Jericho flying into the ring post head first which takes him out. The crowd jeers as Barrett looks over the dismantled body of his former pro as RAW goes to commercial.

*Commercial*​

When Raw returns we see Big Show in the ring ready for action as the crowd cheer.

*Ride Of The Valkyries*​

The Miami crowd erupts as Daniel Bryan makes his way to the ring with his girlfriend AJ by his side. The crowd begin huge YES! Chants as Bryan climbs the top rope and raises his arm.

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Daniel Bryan vs. Big Show

As the bell sounds Show uses his strength to overpower Bryan and throws him around like a rag doll. After dominating Bryan, Big Show calls for the WMD but AJ jumps onto the apron to grab the attention of Big Show after he glances at AJ he turns around and hits a WMD however he hits the ref! As Bryan ducked out of the way. Show then grabs Bryan and hits a Chokeslam. Then out of nowhere Cody Rhodes appears with a chair and cracks Show across the head with it. This sends the giant to his knees which allows Rhodes to hit a disaster kick! Another ref heads to the ring as Rhodes heads for the hills which allows Bryan to make the cover.
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Winner: Daniel Bryan by pinfall​

Bryan wins! He stumbles to his feet as AJ enters the ring and embraces him, He pushes her away however and sends her to get a chair. As she hands Bryan the chair he repeatedly hits the fallen giant which brings The Viper Randy Orton running down to the ring. He goes to town on Bryan with lefts and rights as AJ watches on in the corner, Orton sends Bryan flying over the top rope with a clothesline and then stares at AJ. She pleads with him to let her go as Bryan watches from the floor. Orton hits her with a RKO!! The Viper strikes again as Bryan and Orton look each other in the eyes as Raw goes to commercial.

*Commercial*​

When we return we get an update on AJ from Michael Cole as she has been taken to a nearby medical facility. Cole then tells us Mr McMahon as arrived at the arena for his farewell later on tonight. He then hypes up our main event of CM Punk and Sheamus Vs The Miz and Christian as we go backstage to Eve.

Eve is seen talking to a bunch of superstars who are complaining about not being on the show. Superstars such as Alberto Del Rio, Kofi Kingston and R-Truth plus many others. Eve tells them that she feels their pain and that they will get on air over the coming weeks she says tonight has been hectic due to Mr Kelly putting his feet firmly under the desk and they shouldn’t worry.

*I Came To Play*​

The Miz comes out for our main event to a mixed reaction from the crowd as he clearly must have some fans here in Miami. He runs and jumps onto the apron and poses for the camera he then gets into the ring and looks around at the fans.

*Just Close Your Eyes*​

Out comes his tag team partner Christian to a positive reaction from the crowd he walks to the ring and poses on the turnbuckle. He then looks at his partner and lets out a little smirk.


*Written In My Face*​

Here comes the Irishman Sheamus to a huge ovation from the Miami crowd. The man who will take on CM Punk for the vacant WWE Championship at BACKLASH. He enters the ring and beats his chest as The Miz and Christian look on.

*Cult Of Personality*​

Then to a huge pop Sheamus’ partner and opponent at BACKLASH appears on the stage he gets on one knee and does his famous taunt. He then turns around to show his ‘Best In The World’ t-shirt. He climbs the top rope and shouts out to the crowd WWE CHAMPION! And motions around his waist.

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Sheamus & CM Punk vs. The Miz & Christian

Sheamus tells Punk to stand on the apron which ends up turning into a stare down between the two. However all is not well in the other team corner as The Miz and Christian argue about who will start the match for their team. In the end Christian ends up being the starter for the pair. As the bell rings Christian and Sheamus lock up with Sheamus overpowering the Canadian. Sheamus then motions some great strength and looks at Punk to see if he can do better, this prompts Sheamus to make the tag to the Straight Edge Superstar. Punk then delivers some kicks to Christian’s chest as Miz moans and belittles his own partner from the apron! As Punk picks up Christian he counters with a dropkick with both of them hitting the floor. The Miz again belittles Christian from the apron and demands the tag as Christian stands first he walks up to Miz and makes a tag by smacking his chest. The Miz enters the ring and looks Christian in the eyes and as he turns to attack Punk Christian grabs his arms and hits a Killswitch! Much to the delight of the crowd he then leaves the ring and heads to the back this allows Punk to drag The Miz to the centre of the ring and apply the Anaconda Vice.
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Winners: CM Punk & Sheamus by submission​

The Miz taps out as Punk releases the hold, He then raises his arms as he goes to turn to his partner he is hit with a huge BROUGE KICK! Sheamus makes an emphatic statement to his opponent for BACKLASH as he stands over Punk.

*Commercial*​

As RAW returns we see a replay of what just went down. Cole and Lawler discuss how things have just heated up between Sheamus and CM Punk.

*Seven Nation Army*​

The new owner of the WWE comes out to a huge pop from the Miami crowd he walks down to the ring and shakes hands with a few of the fans. He gets in the ring and picks up a microphone he says he isn’t out here to talk about himself but the man who has lead the WWE for so many years. He says it’s an honour to be the man to take over this company. He introduces Mr McMahon to come down to the ring.

*No Chance In Hell*​

The Miami crowd goes wild as McMahon appears at the top of the ramp wearing a grey suit, he walks down to the ring with his famous strut and shakes hands with his successor. He then talks about his pride to have run this company for so many years. He tells the crowd that all he set out to do is entertain them and even if some of them don’t like him h knows that they were entertained. As he goes to leave the ring the whole WWE locker room appear on the stage as Vince looks confused he looks back at Kelly who brings out the McMahon family.

*Here Comes The Money*​

The music prompts the crowd to go into ecstasy as Shane, Linda and Stephanie McMahon emerge from the back. The locker room moves aside to let them walk down to the ring. When they get there they each embrace Vince who begins to become emotional. His children talk about how much of a great father he was and how much of an inspiration he was. Kelly then says if there is one thing Vince loves his firing someone so he offers to fire one last person before he leaves now. Vince smiles and looks at the locker room with a huge grin on his face as he looks through the superstars he has an epiphany and turns around to the announcers. He then points at Michael Cole and shouts YOUR’E FIRED!! To which the crowd pops huge.

*Glass Shatters*​

The Miami crowd look on in shock as Stone Cold comes bouncing down the ramp as McMahon looks on in horror. The locker room begin to follow Austin down to the ring and everyone enters. Austin talks about the amount of times he has hit the stunner on Vince and all the things they have been through, but he says he wouldn’t change anything about it. He then calls for some beers as Vince begins to cry, Everyone in the ring has a beer in hand and Austin proposes a toast to Vince McMahon as he and Vince smack their cans together. McMahon begins to cry as the fans go into a ‘Thank You Vince’ Chant. Big Show hoists up the tearful McMahon on to his shoulders as the chants continue as RAW goes off air.

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GCB FEEDBACK
RAW

Welcome to BT, my friend.

Right, feedback. A decent start to your BT, mate. The formatting is good, good use of images etc ... However, there is a distinct lack of detail in the show and it isn't a good thing. If you want the reader to get into the storylines, I fear you need more detail in your promos. I understand match summaries - except for main events and PPV's - but the promos are the things that get people involved. You had some good ideas but it needed writing out as a script with more detailed direct speech or you needed to elaborate on the reported speech further to give the BT some body, some life. I think your next show needs that so we can get attached to the stories and the matches you're creating.


Punk and Sheamus:
Not sure why you stripped them of the titles if they were just going to face each other. Why not have them both show up as WWE and World Champions and then announce a title unification for the Undisputed WWE Championship? Anyway, face vs. face is tough to pull off especially for a newbie, you need a reason for this. I'd consider Punk or Sheamus going heel here. Dylan Kelly seems like Chip Butty in my BT, too nice at the start, too bland. Looking for character development later in him. Can't take him seriously with 7 Nation Army as his music, my football team sing that after every goal (We're the red and white army!) and I also sing it at my little baby girl while I change her nappy!

Tyler Reks vs. Rey Mysterio:
Short and sweet, Rey gets the expected win. Had a feeling Reks and Hawkins would beat him down, Sin Cara out to make the save. Interesting to see the Mexicans teaming here, could they form a luchador team that will eventually put Sin Cara over as head luchador? Hmmm. Reks and Hawkins could use a big win if you wish to push them.

Brodus/Ryder vs. Swagger/Ziggler:
A bit too similar to current WWE, make a break from it. We've seen this on RAW already. Especially with Ziggler getting annoyed afterwards. You need to put your mark on the BT and set up some new feuds. I could go with more intensity in a Ziggler vs. Brodus Clay feud with Zig-Zag man ending the undefeated run, that's interesting. Rehashing feuds in Tag Team matches could get boring if you see where I'm going.

Dylan Kelly:
God, this guy needs a slap already. Come on Del Rio or somebody, get him hurt! Triple H as COO could lead to power struggles I guess?

Jericho:
Whoa, complete 180o turn in attitude from Jericho. That's fine, it's different, just felt it was rushed a little. I sense he isn't going anywhere though, I sense Barrett will convince him that at least one more match is needed. Like the thought behind Barrett targeting Jericho, good call there. I'm interested to see where that goes.

Bryan vs. Show:
AJ and Cody cause the distraction, Bryan gets the win over Show with some dirty, underhand tactics. Worried that this leads to Big Show vs. Cody Rhodes for the IC Title! Randy Orton makes the save - where did Cody Rhodes disappear to? RKO to AJ?!!! Wow! Strange decision there, AJ might be with Bryan but I doubt she has the heelness for Orton to get away with that! Not sure he would do it.

Punk/Sheamus vs. Miz/Christian:
Ha! I knew it! That was a bit predictable, mate! One of them wins, the other does the damage afterwards. I'd have guessed at Punk to win and Sheamus to Brogue Kick him too, Sheamus' move is a bit more out of the blue. First seeds of their feud now laid.

Vince McMahon send off:
Nice touch with Vinny Mac's send off. Cole fired - I wouldn't have done that, I think Cole could be a good heel.

Good start mate, more detail and it'll be even better. Read around the forum and check out the more established guys, give some feedback. It'll help you get to grips with the way you write, what works and what doesn't. Looking forward to the next RAW.

GCB
 
Thanks for the review man, I wasn't sure about writing full promos but I will do it for the next episode. I hope I can improve off you're feedback. Thanks again man
 
Jam's Review
First of all, the show is looking pretty good with those graphics I made, aha. But also, the presentation is easy on the eyes so it's easy to read, that's a good thing to see. Also, I like how everything seems new. New WWE logo, sort of a new-ish Raw logo, and sort of a new opening video, hopefully that changes.

I agree with GCB that you needed to add more details in your promos but they did get their messages across. I have to disagree with GCB about having an Undisputed Title. Having an Undisputed Title would have to be in an era where there are a lot of big stars, much like Jericho. It might take away from the prestige of the Undisputed Title, so a WWE Title will have to suffice. Kelly reminds be a lot of Butty, so maybe you can get more pointers from GCB in how to develop Kelly. Would like to see him establish himself so he'll probably be a heel at first.

I like that you're giving Reks and Hawkins a chance on Raw. With Reks's match ending the way it did, I see that you're going to build your tag team division. A team of Sin Cara and Rey Mysterio will definitely be fun to watch. Can't wait to see what you have in store for that team, or what you'll even call them, haha.

Is see why you had this match between Clay & Ryder vs. Zig-Swag. However, I gotta agree with GCB once again about how you gotta keep away from real life WWE happenings. But I'm a fan of Ziggler so I'm glad that he'll go solo. Or well, it looks that way. Hopefully, he goes higher up the card and we see bigger and better things for him.

Also, there was a sentence about Cena there. Looks like you're gonna be having Cena not appear on Raw for a while and I don't mind that. Give the guy a break and when he comes back, let him wreak havoc.

Oh man, this is gonna be a big feud. Dating back to his NXT days, I've loved this pairing from the get-go. Barrett has really come into his own and could very well be the champion pretty soon but he needs that big feud to really elevate him. I think this feud with Jericho will be good for him, so kudos to you for doing that.

So the Rhodes/Big Show feud will continue, I honestly hope that this will not take long. Also, having Orton RKO AJ was interesting. So Orton is heel now, yeah? Maybe you can make him the mega heel, bring back his punt. But anyway, I like the feuds that are coming but there's gotta be more development to it.

Well the main event couldn't have ended cleanly. Interesting to see that Christian is gonna be a face, he works both roles pretty good. Plus, he'll probably feud with Miz so it'll be another nice feud. Sheamus makes his mark by delivering a Brogue Kick. Can't wait for this feud!

This was a pretty good feel good moment for the exit of Mr. McMahon. I like that you added Steve Austin for the farewell. Don't know about firing Cole but I don't mind it. Maybe he'll be back in some form later. So I'm wondering who you'd have replace him, maybe someone new like Edge? He's pretty good on commentary.

Overall, pretty good first show man. I like the feuds that you have got going on. I didn't really expect much but hey, this show exceeded my expectations for sure. Just continue to fix some grammar and some punctuations and you'll do fine. Good job bro!
 
SXEnightmare's Review:

Reks vs Rey first off let me say i really hope you push reks and hawkins i think they make a really good team so it would be nice to see them get a push looks like were getting a new team in rey and sin cara good move there looking forward to see where this fued goes.

Clay/Ryder vs Ziggler/Swagger short but decent tag team match didnt really perk my interest looks like Ziggler might be going solo maybe hes gonna fued with Swagger? might be interesting if so.

Jericho/Barrett Segment now this...this could be a great fued right here espically if its the fued that propels Barrett into main event stardom! both men are talented so they might put on some great matches together.

Bryan vs Show another short but decent match i wonder if you can make AJ and Bryan into a power couple that would be intersting and different if its the route you decide to take looks like Show isnt done with Cody just yet.

Sheamus/Punk vs Miz/Christian i saw the face turn by Christian coming the second he smirked at Miz but i prefer Christian as a face anyway so i dont mind it the brouge kick again saw it coming but Punk vs Sheamus and Miz vs Christian could be two good fueds if there done right.

overall not bad for your first show you need to put more detail into promos and maybe make the matches a little longer too i liked the send off for Vince as it makes sense and was a good way to end the show espically with Stone Cold coming out not sure about firing Cole but i wouldnt mind seeing JR or as JAM said maybe Edge replacing him on commentary.

anyway goodluck with your shows in the future so far so good as far as im concered man.
 
Opening Segment: A more aggressive Punk against the new owner is good to go along with his anti-establishment ways. Having Sheamus come out and agree with him is odd, as I think that there could have been some conflict there between the two. I'm not to sure on this Dylan Kelly bloke just yet, but I'm sure that we'll see some development over time, as to his alignment. A big match for Backlash, my only worry is that the momentum for one of these guys following their Wrestlemania wins is going to be killed right away. But a feud between these two could be golden.

Reks vs Mysterio: Just being competitive in this match with Rey is giving Reks a good rub and some decent exposure, but even a not fully fit Rey Mysterio is going to win this match every day of the week. Sin Cara returning to help Rey is good, and I can see a new tag team forming from this possibly.

Ryder/Clay vs Ziggler/Swagger: I know that people have said that you are getting too close to reality here, but I'm sure that you're going to go your own way with this and actually have Ziggler elevated by this whole thing. Hopefully you end Brodus' streak soon... or heel turn.

Jericho/Barrett segment: I hope that this means that Jericho now has a reason to stay, and a feud between these two going into the summer months will be an apt send off for Jericho if he is still leaving as well as the perfect platform for Barrett to advance into the main event.

Bryan vs Big Show: You did good here in advancing the Cody vs Big Show feud, but I hope you don't miss a step like the WWE did and give Cody the title right back, it was stupid to see Cody win it a month later and lose it a month after that; served no point whatsoever. Anyway, I'm not that sure about Orton RKOing AJ, as I think Orton would probably be booed for doing that and not cheered; the RKO should have been on Bryan. Like someone else said, Rhodes must be a magician because he just disappeared in the aftermath.

Punk/Sheamus vs Miz/Christian: Good to see Miz and Christian up here with the big boys, as both men have bags of potential. Christian's face turn is good, as it seems we have a Sheamus heel turn after the match. Heel Sheamus > Face Sheamus. Christian vs Miz will be a nice feud to carry on forwards for the future. You have also already got me looking forward to the next show as I can't wait to see what Punk's reaction to the cheap shot is going to be!

A good start to the thread mate :) Maybe there could have been more detail like others have said, but nonetheless, an enjoyable read. You will only improve in time. Can't wait to see where it all goes!

TWG
 
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RAW PREVIEW

This week Monday Night RAW comes from the Verizon Center in the nation's capital Washington D.C.

TIME TO PLAY THE GAME
Last week new owner Dylan Kelly confirmed that Triple H will be on RAW tonight what will happen when The Game returns?

NEW COAL IN THE FIRE
Last week as his final firing ever Vince McMahon fired WWE commentator Michael Cole! The self proclaimed Voice of the WWE took to twitter to tell people he will be on RAW.

@Michael Cole Last week was a dark day for Monday Night RAW. But don't worry beloved fans this will be sorted tonight!

FOUNDATIONS LAID

The Celtic Warrior Sheamus delivered a message to his BACKLASH opponent CM Punk last week, with both men being in the same ring again tonight will the Brogue Kick strike again?

Also confirmed for RAW:
Wade Barrett will speak about his attack on Chris Jericho last week.
Sin Cara in ring return
Daniel Bryan and Randy Orton on the same show!
Plus much more!
 
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Monday April 9th 2012
Verizon Center – Washington, DC

Raw comes on the air with Michael Cole outside the arena with a megaphone in hand.​

Michael Cole: OUTRAGE! THIS IS AN OUTRAGE! AN INNOCENT MAN HAS LOST HIS JOB. A MAN WHO IS UNDEFEATED AT WRESTLEMANIA, THE VOICE OF THE WWE MICHAEL COLE.

Just as Cole goes to continue the new owner Dylan Kelly appears on screen to a pop from the D.C crowd.​

Dylan Kelly: Michael you don’t work here anymore, I’m sorry but it’s just the way it is. You’re going to have to leave.

Michael Cole: But come on sir, you know I’m the best commentator in the world, I have a contract you can’t just terminate my contract!

Dylan Kelly: The only way you can work here now is by becoming a wrestler which I highly doubt, or you can manage a superstar. The only problem with that is… everyone who works here hates you!

Michael Cole: I’ve got it just wait I’ll show everyone you can’t get rid of Michael Cole that easily!

The crowd boo as Cole runs off into the distance with Dylan Kelly looking on as the camera pans to the inside of the arena.​

Jerry Lawler: God I hate Cole! Anyway welcome to Monday Night RAW with me Jerry ‘The King’ Lawler and my new broadcast partner MATT STRIKER!

Matt Striker: Hey King, it’s great to be here not just as cover for once this is my dream! But enough about me last week on RAW we saw the announcement made, Sheamus vs CM Punk for the WWE championship at BACKLASH. Last week Sheamus made a statement by hitting Punk with a huge Brogue Kick.

Jerry Lawler: Well Matt, Punk and Sheamus are both in the building so expect some fireworks later tonight.

Matt Striker: We also witnessed the apex predator, Randy Orton hit Daniel Bryan’s girlfriend with a huge RKO! We’ll hear from him later on tonight.

*End Of Days*

The crowd begin to boo as Wade Barrett makes his way onto the stage wearing a smart looking suit.​

Matt Striker: Well King here comes the British Brute Wade Barrett who delivered an extremely violent attack on his former NXT pro Chris Jericho last week on RAW.

Jerry Lawler: And now we’ve got to listen to him come out here and brag about it!

Barrett enters the ring and calls for a microphone.​

Wade Barrett: Well Ladies and gents in case you’ve been hidden under a rock for the last week or are just plainly dumb like these people here tonight, you will have heard that I have ended the man that is Chris Jericho and just in case you missed it here is a little reminder.

Barrett points up to the titantron and a replay of his attack on Jericho from last week plays, showing his hard hitting punches on the Canadian repeatedly. As the video ends the crowd jeer and Barrett continues.​

Wade Barrett: Beautiful, absolutely beautiful! You see I told Chris the truth last week that I’ve always been better than him, I was better than him when I was on NXT and I’m most certainly better than him now!.

The fans begin a loud Y2J! chant.​

Wade Barrett: Chant his name all you want, but he’s not here! He’s gone, you thick people don’t understand I’ve ended his career! And it’s something you will get used to seeing me do.

*The Game*

Just as Barrett finishes the music of Triple H hits to send the crowd into raptures. The COO then appears on stage also wearing a suit. He begins to walk down towards the ring, towards Barrett. He enters the ring and picks up a microphone just as he goes to speak Barrett interrupts.​

Wade Barrett: What do you think you’re doing interrupting me Hunter!?

Triple H: What do I think I’m doing? I’m out here to inform you Wade, inform you that you were wrong about a few things you just said. Number one you’re not better than Chris Jericho and you probably never will be! And number two you haven’t ended Chris Jericho’s career in fact you’ve reinvigorated it!

Wade Barrett: What the hell are you talking about?

Triple H: Ya’see Wade, last week Chris was out here to tell the world he was leaving but after what you did he has decided to stay on one condition. That he faces you, one on one at BACKLASH.

Wade Barrett: Is that supposed to scare me Hunter, it just means I can end his career on pay per view! So you’re little announcement means nothing but more pain for Jericho to endure!

?: Hold on a second!

A voice is then heard out of nowhere, we learn that is the owner of the WWE Dylan Kelly who comes strolling down the ramp and into the ring.​

Dylan Kelly: Who has okayed this Hunter? In case you’ve forgotten I own this company now so everything and I mean EVERYTHING! Comes through me first!

Triple H: Listen Dyla-

Dylan Kelly: That’s Mr Kelly to you Hunter.

Triple H: Mr Kelly, you’ve never run a wrestling company before, the people want to see this arrogant bastard get what’s coming to him!

Dylan Kelly: I’ll tell you what, do you people want to see Wade Barrett take on Chris Jericho at BACKLASH?


The crowd respond with a huge cheer to the suggestion.​

Dylan Kelly: Fine, at BACKLASH you Wade will take on Chris Jericho. But Hunter if you ever make a decision without consulting me again I’ll have to seriously consider the consequences. Now Wade please go and get ready as you will face Brodus Clay later on tonight.

After the suggestion Barrett leaves the ring to a chorus of boos leaving Triple H in the ring with the chairman.​

Dylan Kelly: Now as I’m out here already I’d like to let you all know that Randy Orton has been fined $2500 for attacking the girlfriend of Daniel Bryan AJ. I will not tolerate male superstars attacking diva’s in this company unprovoked! Now Hunter you told me you wanted to appear on RAW this week for a reason so what is it?

Triple H: The reason I wanted to speak with you was about my job, to be honest I don’t want this job, I want to run a show and now that you’ve made the decision to get rid of Smackdown there is nothing for me.

Dylan Kelly: Maybe there is Hunter, ya’ see tomorrow night NXT makes it’s return to WWE and I couldn’t think of anyone better with you’re amount of experience to run the show, so what do you say Hunter?

Triple H: You got it!

The crowd pop at the huge announcement of Triple H running NXT! Kelly and Triple H shake hands as RAW goes to commercial.

*Commercial*​

As Raw comes back Matt Striker and Jerry Lawler debate the appointment of Triple H as NXT general manager. They also debate the fining of Randy Orton as we go backstage to Josh Matthews.

Josh Matthews: Ladies and gentleman my guest at this time Daniel Bryan. Daniel, how is AJ doing? As we know she isn’t here tonight.

Daniel Bryan: Forget about AJ, last week I pinned the Big Show, 1,2,3! And then Randy Orton comes down and attacks me and badly damages my ribs!

Josh Matthews: But Daniel last week Randy RKO’ed your-

Daniel Bryan: Shhhhh! I’m gonna’ head down to the ring and get answers from Orton face to face.

Daniel Bryan walks off screen as Matthews looks confused.

*Ride Of The Valkyries*

Daniel Bryan emerges from the back to plenty of jeers, however a few YES! Chants can be heard by the older fans. Bryan steps into the ring and picks up a microphone.

Daniel Bryan: Randy come out here and look me in the eyes, face to face man to man!

*Voices*

Washington goes wild as Randy Orton appears on stage, he slowly walks down to the ring without taking his eyes off Daniel Bryan he enters the ring and grabs a microphone.

Randy Orton: Daniel you want to know why I attacked you and you’re girlfriend last week?

Daniel Bryan: I don’t care about why you attacked her, I want to know what problem you have with me!?

Randy Orton: Daniel this all started back in February, before the Elimination Chamber pay per view. You took me out before you had to defend you’re title against me and 4 others inside the chamber. Because of you I was in a filler match at WrestleMania, I should have had a title match, the reason for my attack was revenge!

Daniel Bryan: Well you’ve started something that I’m gonna finish now Randy, you may have had a fine but that’s not enough, I challenge you to a match at BACKLASH for redemption!?

Randy Orton: You really don’t want to face me Daniel, I-

Just as Orton is about to finish Bryan smacks him with the microphone to the skull. Bryan then applies the YES lock to Orton who begins to tap out as officials run down to the ring to get Bryan to release the hold.
Matt Striker: Well King Orton is usually the master of surprise but Bryan has caught out and played the viper at his own game here.
Officials eventually pull Bryan off Orton as Bryan the slithers under the ropes and walks to the back with a huge smile on his face. Raw then goes to commercial.

*Commercial*

*Here To Show The World*

The Washington crowd begin to jeer as Dolph Ziggler walks down the ramp by himself. After last week we have learnt he is no longer apart of Vickie Guerrero’s stable. Ziggler poses on the turnbuckle in front of the Washington crowd.

BOOM!
*Veil Of Fire*

The whole crowd jumps with fright as Kane’s pyro explodes. Kane then walks down to the ring wearing his outermask. He enters the ring and then removes his outermask. He then stares at Ziggler.

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Dolph Ziggler vs. Kane
As the bell sounds Ziggler charges at Kane but flies right off the big red monster. Kane then picks up Ziggler and throws him into the turnbuckle, he then begins unloading on the show off with right hands. Kane then whips him into the ropes and nails him with a huge backdrop that sends Ziggler crashing to the mat. Ziggler makes it to his feet but turns around into a huge boot from Kane.
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Ziggler just about gets his shoulder up much to the anger of Kane. Kane then waits for Ziggler to get to his feet before grabbing him by his throat, Kane then picks Ziggler up and hits a giant Chokeslam!
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Winner: Kane by pinfall

Matt Striker: Kane makes short work of Ziggler here tonight who seems to be stuck in a rut.

Jerry Lawler: This match was never in doubt for Kane as Ziggler didn’t come out of the blocks.

Kane looks down at Ziggler’s dismantled body and exits the ring, heading towards the back. Ziggler begins to move and eventually gets to his feet. He then begins throwing a tantrum in the ring, as he walks to the back he crosses paths with Jack Swagger & Vickie Guerrero who just laugh in his face. Swagger’s match with Big Show is after the commercial.

*Commercial*

*Crank It Up*

Big Show makes his way out to the delight of the crowd. He passes his beanie hat to a youngster in the crowd and then enters the ring.

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Jack Swagger W/Vickie Guerrero vs. Big Show

As the referee calls for the bell Big Show charges right at Swagger and hits a huge spear to the All American. Show then waits for Swagger to get to his feet and hits the W.M.D.
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Winner: Big Show by pinfall

Big Show cuts his celebrations short and calls for a microphone.

Big Show: Cody Rhodes, I know you’re here tonight, if I were you I wouldn’t come out here though you just witnessed what I did to Swagger!

Cody Rhodes then appears on the titantron with the owner Dylan Kelly.

Dylan Kelly: Show, I’ve got some good news and some bad news. The good news is that you will face Cody Rhodes at BACKLASH. The bad news for you is that it will not be for the Intercontinental championship.

Cody Rhodes: Show I’m not scared of you anymore as there is nothing to fear, I don’t want us to face for the Intercontinental championship as I want my victory to be the most important thing, not the championship. This isn’t about the title anymore it’s about me and you!

Big Show looks up at the screen as we go to commercial.

*Commercial*

*Ancient Spirit*

The Washington crowd erupts as Sin Cara and Rey Mysterio the new partners appear on stage. The masked men run down to the ring and vault over the top rope.

*In The Middle Of It Now*

Curt Hawkins then appears with his tag team partner Tyler Reks to the jeers of the crowd. The pair walk down to the ring and Hawkins enters while Reks stands on the outside.

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Sin Cara w/ Rey Mysterio vs. Curt Hawkins w/ Tyler Reks
The match begins with a quick exchange between the two superstars with Hawkins getting the better of the returning Cara. Hawkins then puts Cara in an abdominal stretch. Mysterio tries to urge his new partner back into the match as Hawkins tries to keep the hold applied, Cara eventually escapes the hold and hip tosses Hawkins. He then hits a series of kicks to the legs of Hawkins before Hawkins counters with a huge clothesline.
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Cara just about stays alive in this match, he then gets to his feet and hits a dropkick. The pair quickly get back to their feet and Cara hits a hurricanrana. As he goes for the pin Tyler Reks jumps onto the apron to provide a distraction. Cara dropkicks Reks off the apron and his partner Mysterio dropkicks Reks on the outside. Hawkins however rolls up Cara while holding his tights.
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Winner: Curt Hawkins by pinfall

Hawkins quickly exits the ring and reconciles with his partner. They then head up the ramp as Mysterio and Cara look on. RAW then goes to commercial.

*Commercial*

When we come back we see Alberto Del Rio talking to Dylan Kelly.

Alberto Del Rio: Why aren’t I on RAW in that ring, huh? Chico.

Dylan Kelly: Well Alberto the reason I called you back here was to offer you a title match.

Alberto Del Rio: A title match?

Dylan Kelly: Yes, a Intercontinental championship match at BACKLASH. I don’t know who you will face yet however I will find out next week.

Alberto Del Rio: j’u got a deal boss.

The pair then shake hands as we go back to ringside.

*Somebody Call My Momma*

Brodus Clay comes out to the ring without his dancers, he still dances alone but he looks like he means business. As he knows his undefeated streak could be under threat. Clay enters the ring and looks on focused at the stage.

*End Of Days*

Wade Barrett’s music hits but after a few seconds there is still no sign of the Brit. Suddenly Barrett attacks Clay from behind in the ring. The referee then calls for the bell to start the match.

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Brodus Clay vs. Wade Barrett
After the bell sounds Barrett continues his attack on Clay. He then climbs the top rope and hits an elbow drop right to the heart of Clay
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The whole arena looks shocked as Clay powers his shoulder up. Clay then fights to his feet and begins hammering away at Barrett. Clay then sends him flying to the corner and charges into him. As Clay runs towards Barrett to hit a huge splash, Barrett counters with the Winds Of Change!
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Winner: Wade Barrett by pinfall

Matt Striker: Barrett’s done it! He has ended the undefeated streak of Brodus Clay with an impressive show of strength.

Jerry Lawler: Yeah, well don’t forget he attacked Clay before the match even started!

Barrett exits the ring as the crowd boos, he walks back up the ramp with his arm raised and goes to the back as RAW goes to commercial.

*Commercial*

When RAW comes back Striker and Lawler hype up the confrontation between CM Punk and Sheamus later tonight.

*I Came To Play*

The Washington crowd begin to boo as the ‘Awesome One’ The Miz comes out on the ramp.

Matt Striker: Well King, last week we saw The Miz get his just desserts! In our main event he teamed with Christian who he kept disrespecting from the apron, in the end Captain Charisma had enough and hit The Miz with a killswitch.

*Aleluya*

Just as Striker finishes new RAW arrival Damien Sandow comes out with a microphone in hand.

Damien Sandow: Good evening, I am Damien Sandow. I am here to lead all of you, the masses to enlightenment. You’re minds have become indulged with what you see on television but I will lead you! Tonight me and my partner will take quick and easy care of Christian and the ignoramus known as Zack Ryder.

*Oh Radio*

Zack Ryder then comes out to a big pop, he fist pumps to the crowd as Sandow looks on in disgust. Ryder then waits outside the ring for his partner.

*Just Close Your Eyes*

Captain Charisma then appears on stage to an enormous pop from the crowd, he walks to the ring and shakes hands with Ryder.

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The Miz & Damien Sandow vs. Zack Ryder & Christian
The bell rings as The Miz and Christian start the match for their respective teams. The pair lock up and exchange a few headlocks. Christian then outsmarts Miz and reverses a headlock into a back drop for the cover.
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The Miz kicksout with relative ease but Christian slaps the headlock back on. Miz reverses and throws Christian into the corner were his partner Sandow grabs onto the Canadian. Miz makes the quick tag and lets Sandow go to work on Christian. Sandow hits a beautiful dropkick and goes for the pin.

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Christian just powers his shoulder up as Sandow puts a sleeper on Christian. The crowd begin to chant and will Christian back into it, which he does by dropping Sandow with a ferocious clothesline. Christian crawls to Ryder and makes the huge tag! Ryder comes in and cleans house, he whips Sandow into the turnbuckle and hits a rebounding clothesline. As Sandow lies in the corner Ryder sets up the Broski Boot! He charges towards Sandow and hits it!

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Ryder looks down in shock as Sandow lies there. Ryder then picks up Sandow but he gets hit with a huge right hand. As he falls towards his partner Christian tags him. Christian runs in and whips Sandow to the ropes but Miz makes a tag without Christian realising. As Sandow comes back to Christian he grabs his arm and hits the Killswitch! As he goes for the cover the referee tells him Sandow isn’t the legal man, as Christian stands up TheMiz grabs him from behind and hits the Skull Crushing Finale! He then makes the cover.

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Winners: The Miz & Damien Sandow by pinfall.

The Miz ducks under the ropes and celebrates by the announce table, he then snatches a microphone.

The Miz: Ya’ see Christian that is why you don’t cross The Miz. And I showed all of you Washington that I’M THE MIZ AND I’M AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

We then see a split screen of CM Punk and Sheamus making there way to the ring. Their confrontation is next.

*Commercial*

*Written In My Face*

The great white Sheamus comes out to a huge pop from the Washington crowd . He enters the ring and soaks up the applause. He then picks up a microphone and begins to speak.

Sheamus: Last week on Monday Night Raw I delivered a Brogue Kick straight to the throat of CM Punk. And tonight we’ve been told to come out here for a confrontation, a confrontation? I believe that just means a fight!

*Cult Of Personality*

CM Punk comes out with a microphone in hand and interrupts his music.

CM Punk: We get it Sheamus! You’re Irish, you love to fight people you’re basically a big ginger Finlay! Anyway I do actually agree with you, a confrontation basically means a fight, but why don’t we talk before I kick you’re ass all over the Verizon Center! When you became WWE champion back in 2009 it was a hot topic. You had only been here what? 3 months and you won the big one! The only reason you are this high up on the scale is because of you’re workout buddy Triple H! hell if I had the chances you’ve had I’d be a ten time WWE champion by now! I thin-

Sheamus: Listen to me now Punk! I’ve worked damn hard to get where I am today fella’. So you can say whatever you want because I know I’m going to be the new WWE Champion come Backlash.

The crowd lets off a mixed reaction to that statement from the Irishman.

CM Punk: Well that’s were I beg to differ Sheamus but I think we’ve talked enough, I owe you one for that Brogue Kick last week so lets go!

CM Punk drops his microphone and sprints down to the ring. He and Sheamus go at it trading blows with each other. Sheamus then takes down Punk and begins to hammer away at him, eventually Punk turns the tables.​

Matt Striker: Things have exploded here on Monday Night RAW! Someone needs to stop this!

Jerry Lawler: I think these two can fight till BACKLASH the way they’re going at it here!

Eventually the WWE locker room run out to try and split the pair up. They eventually split them with them separated into opposite corners. The crowd chants ‘Let them Fight’ . Punk just looks at the Irishman and smiles.​

Matt Striker: What the hell King, Punk is smiling! What will happen next week on RAW!?

The pair stare at each other from opposite corners as RAW goes off the air.

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SXEnightmare's Review:

first off im gonna get this out of the way now....more detail in matches would be great here it doesnt have to be the whole match all the way through like i do but it would show off your match writing ability by adding more details to the matches just wanted to say that.

the opening segment was good it set up wade barrett vs chris jericho even more thats gonna be a good one looking forward to that match triple h in charge of NXT hmm might bring in some interest to the show looking forward to finding out who the rookies will be though.

well based off everything daniel bryan has said this is him ending things with her....which is MUCH better then the whole aj in a neckbrace and the way wwe handled daniel bryan fued with big show originally over aj being hurt...that just got horrible fast so the fact you dont seem to be doing that i like.

i was hoping ziggler would win this kinda random match but oh well....is kane a face or a heel? swagger gets jobbed out bit a disapointment sense im not really intersted in show.

ahh hawkins probably my favorite jobber in wwe right now i like him and reks as a team and this fued seems like it will be good, i was surprised to see hawkins win but i love it.

damn wade wasted no time in destorying brodus! i had a feeling wade would win good to see him pick up the victory.

the tag match was good happy to see miz and sandow pick up the victory as it gives sandow much needed momentum and it furthers the fued between miz and christian. also happy to see ryder get some ring time.

good segment between the 2 men challenging for the belt at backlash but maybe the brawl could have went a little longer?

overall it was a good show my only compliants are it didnt feel like a 2 hour show and the matches should be a little longer i like what your doing with punk hes basically (to me atleast) turning heel with his pipebombs...i like it and you know im a fan of the hawkins/reks vs sin cara/rey fued keep up the good work.
 
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GCB FEEDBACK
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Well done, CoP, you clearly listened to your feedback and you put it into practice with an improved show. You're still a newbie, there are still things to work on but - because I saw improvements and I saw you listened to our feedback - I'm going to feedback again! :) I'm sure you won't mind.

Barrett promo re: Jericho:
Good to see you give Barrett the opening, shows that you're big on him and his place in your show. I'm expecting him to go over and Y2J to make him look a million bucks in the process. I'd suggest watching some promos of guys on YouTube as it can really help you get into the things that they say and can make your promos even more realistic. However, this was a good promo and all the other promos were much improved on last show. I think the scripted direct speech works really well. Barrett vs. Jericho at Backlash is now set, add some juice to it now, Jericho needs to return and what you do when he returns can make this go from interesting to great.

Heel seeds for Dylan Kelly / HHH to NXT:
So, there we have it - Kelly is going to be heel. Seeds of heelishness are there in his handling of Trips (and his awarding of IC shot to Del Rio later) but one thing I'd say now is to not make it obvious. Don't shove his heelishness down our throats. Drip it in, bit by bit, develop him a little each time until BOOM! Something big happens. HHH to NXT - great way to make NXT seem dead important (JBL and Rock in my NXT shows!) and I like that. "You got it!" from HHH? That's what I mean by listening to promos on YouTube - I can't buy the idea that Trips just says that!

Bryan challenges Orton:
Right, promo-match balance? You've had a long promo (two promos in one) to start, now another promo - the matches should have started there. Bryan-Orton could have waited until after the first match. Bryan not interested in AJ's health it seems, heel, good. Orton challenged and accepts. Bryan attacks. Wrestling 101, very simple, very clear. Not sure how Orton can be remaining face after attacking a face AJ last week though. Setting this up well though, think carefully about your next move.

Err, Ziggler squashed?
Finally, we have a match! And Kane destroys Ziggler in under a minute. Real waste here, mate. Facing Kane suggests Ziggler has turned face after leaving VG last week. That should equal momentum and a push. Instead, you buried him big time to Kane who hasn't really got a feud right now. Ziggler needs the push, he should have at least put up a hell of a fight and then lost via Swagger distraction? I see you're heading to Swagger vs. Ziggler at the PPV, fine, it needs more than Zigs just leaving Vickie though. Bit disappointed with that one, you made a great superstar look dead weak.

Another squash?
Big Show squashes Swagger? OK. Two in a row, one minute matches. If you're heading for Swagger vs. Ziggler, this is not going to work. Big Show vs. Cody Rhodes at BACKLASH but not for the IC Title. Good call. Hope Cody wins it somehow, he needs the bump. Be careful of too many squashes - particularly one after the other.

Hawkins surprises Sin Cara:
Now this was a little more detailed but I would like to see a little bit more of a summary of the match before you crack on with the ending. An issue I have with this is that it all seems a bit underwhelming at the end. Cara has hardly lost in WWE (once?) and Hawkins has just beat him. That's a heck of a big deal and you needed to show that - otherwise, you fail to capitilise on the big push you've just given to Hawkins (and Reks). Even if it is just Sin Cara's reaction in more detail, a few comments from the commentator, a replay on return after the commercial?

Barrett gets big win over Brodus:
I see what you tried to do. You tried to have Brodus lose his undefeated streak but have Barrett use dirty tactics to do it - therefore, Clay doesn't look weak. The only problem with this is that you now need Brodus to go after revenge on Barrett - you've set up a perfect feud between them - but he is going to be feuding with Jericho. You either forget Brodus' issues with the Wadester or you mix him up in the Barrett-Jericho thing. Either way, I fear Brodus looks weak. But you wanted Barrett to face a big guy to make him look strong, I understand that. Maybe he could have faced Ziggler? You made Ziggler look weak earlier, maybe Barrett could have used dirty tactics to beat Zigs instead and you could include Vickie and Swagger in it somehow? You have a lot of feuds developing on one show, it's inevitable there is going to be crossover between feuds but the key is to make sure you pick your moments in them. Like I say, whichever way you go here, Brodus' streak ending has been semi-wasted and he looks a little weak.

Miz and Sandow get win over Christian and Ryder:
Barrett could also have faced Mr. Ryder? Anyway, moving on, further developing Miz vs. Christian from last week, nice move. Miz with the sneaky win over Christian who looks strong as he had Sandow beaten. Good move. Nothing to complain about here, just need to see Miz and Christian become a little personal now for interest.

Sheamus and Punk:
Was that it?! I'm sounding harsh there but that was a little bit of a tame way to end RAW. They had a little argument, had a little fight, they were split up, end show. For the last segment, that isn't what I expect - maybe have one of the guys destroy the other, i.e. cement a Sheamus heel turn with a dastardly attack? It's fine, it does move the feud on a little but not a drastic ending like I expected heading into it.

Right, lots of 'negative' comments but I do think they're fixable if you plan it out a little more and think carefully about how you're going. The formatting and such is fine so you're being judged on the quality of the booking, pretty rare for a second show. You might think I'm talking bollocks at times, I probably am, but I hope you take some of my criticisms on board. The fact that I keep reviewing the show and feeding back shows you that I am reading and I am enjoying and I am interested. I want to see you make the show better and better, I think it could be a good BT if you stick at it.

GCB
 
Thanks for the feedback guys I'll hopefully improve on it for the next show which will be NXT. Just to answer your question nightmare Kane is a tweener it just depends who he is facing when he gets a reaction for now. Also GCB I haven't got plans for Swagger vs Ziggler as I've got something set for Ziggler in my mind. Hopefully on NXT I can improve my match writing as it will be more wrestling heavy then promo heavy. Thanks again.
 
Jam's Review
I'm always a fan of unconventional opening so I liked this one with Cole causing a ruckus outside. Interesting here that Dylan has given Cole a chance to come back but under one condition, good booking here. Striker replaces Cole on the announce team and I love this move. Striker should be able to provide a good sense of what's going on in the ring which is all we want really.

Seems to me that there may be a power struggle between Dylan and HHH but that's perfectly normal. I'm not sure about HHH just accepting a GM spot on NXT, maybe he could've come back as a wrestler instead. This Barrett/Jericho opening was pretty good with Barrett voicing his opinions of what he thought he did to Jericho. I'm excited to see a face Y2J.

I get that Daniel Bryan doesn't care about AJ at this point but there should've been something said about AJ at least. The exchange between Orton and DB was kinda awkward to be honest. It just seems a little cliché that Orton would actually say that he attacked DB for revenge. And with what Dylan said earlier about matches going through him first, I'm pretty confused as to why DB just made a match for himself at Backlash. But yeah, kind of an awkward part of the show for me.

I don't like the move of Dolph jobbing to Kane but you told me that there may be more to this. And with Swagger not fairing any better against Big Show, I believe you. Another awkward promo here with Show when you had him call out Cody but told him he shouldn't come out? Lol. But anyway, I get that you wanted to make this feud more personal so that's why the IC Title isn't up for grabs. Maybe you can have that for Miz and Christian.

Just handing Del Rio a title shot? Hmmm. I'll save my thoughts on that one. And damn, I would love to see Barrett hit that move on Brodus in real life. That must've been such an impactful move and could really end a match. I'm glad that Barrett is getting a push as he could be WWE Champion real soon much like in GCB's thread.

Sandow really is an interesting character so it was a good that he was in a high-profile match. I'm really liking this Miz/Christian feud as it could be a great promo battle between the two and they're not bad in the ring either. I

Pretty good way to end the night but I'm not sure that the locker room had to break this up, security would've been fine. Punk's shooting again with his promos, lol. This'll be a really nice feud if you book it correctly. And so far, it's been really good so kudos to you for that.

Overall, another quality episode here Cult. You're doing quite well for a new guy I must say. I just think you need a little more detail on your matches and you need to go back and check before you post. But everything else is fine, can't wait for the next show.
 
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Tuesday 10th April 2012
Live from Verizon Center – Washington DC

*Wild & Young*
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Josh Matthews: Ladies and gentleman welcome to WWE NXT! I’m Josh Matthews alongside William Regal.

William Regal: Hello WWE universe tonight we see new general manager Triple H take charge. But I doubt he could do a good as job as me, hey Josh!?

Josh Matthews: Errr sure William!

*The Game*​

The crowd goes wild as Triple H comes out wearing a smart looking suit. He shakes hands with a few of the fans and enters the ring. He then picks up a microphone.

Triple H: Welcome to NXT! Which by the way is under new management. Considering I’ve only had one night to set up tonight it won’t be running as smoothly as I would have liked but I know it will be fun! Speaking of fun I’m changing up NXT a little bit, there are no rookies and pros anymore, NXT will be the show for the divas and young up and coming talent! Now as for tonight your NXT main event will be Kofi Kingston taking on Drew Mcintyre! You will also se-

*Barcode*​

Just as the NXT GM goes to continue he is interrupted by the former tag team champions Primo & Epico along with their valet Rosa Mendes, The trio enter the ring with Primo picking up a microphone.

Josh Matthews: Well William I don’t think this is a wise move from the former tag team champions interrupting our general manager.

William Regal: Well if I still ran NXT Josh these two wouldn’t be interrupting me! I’ll tell you that right now sonny Jim!

Primo: Hunter I don’t see us getting much air time on RAW with that idiotic Kelly running things so we are offering you the chance to make us the faces of NXT!

Triple H: Well Primo I won’t deny that you, your boyfriend and whatever relation she is our talented wrestlers but nobody and I mean NOBODY tells me how I will run this show. You two want competition so bad….. I’ll give you it right now Primo you will take on Epico! Get a ref down here and lets go.

Primo and Epico look at each other confusedly and panic as Triple H exits the ring. A referee enters and rings the bell.

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Primo vs. Epico

After the bell is rung Primo goes to the ropes and shouts abuse at Triple H who Is walking towards the stage, suddenly Epico rolls up his tag team partner.

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Winner: Epico by pinfall.​

Primo turns around and looks at his partner Epico in disgust while Rosa tries to calm down the situation, in the end she succeeds and Primo shakes hands with Epico, the three then exit the ring to the jeers of the crowd.

Josh Matthews: When we come back we’ll see ‘The Glamazon’ Beth Phoenix take on Kelly Kelly.

*Commercial*​

As we come back Kelly Kelly and Beth Phoenix are already In the ring and are ready for action.

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Kelly Kelly vs. Beth Phoenix

Straight from the off Beth Phoenix overpowers Kelly Kelly, She throws her into the turnbuckle and begins to smack her head into the pads. She then drags Kelly by her hair to the centre of the ring and delivers a scoop slam. Beth then puts Kelly into a sleeper as both lay on the floor. Kelly fights out and delivers a back body drop to Phoenix which leaves the glamazon wiggling with pain! Kelly contemplates going for the cover but decides against it. She waits for Beth to get to her feet and attempts a hurricanrana however Beth counters mid flight and delivers a powerbomb.

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Winner:Beth Phoenix by pinfall​

Josh Matthews: Phoenix wins and looks very dominant here tonight.

William Regal: Listen Josh, no one will stop this lady from capturing the Women’s championship, it is an inevitability. I’d like to see any woman in the world stop her!

*Commercial*

*Broken Dreams*​

Josh Matthews: It’s time for our main event of the evening and what a contest this promises to be! The sinister Scotsman Drew Mcintyre taking on the high flying Kofi Kingston.

William Regal: These two have had many an encounter since being in the WWE and not one of them has disappointed, I’ve got to give it to Hunter on this one he is giving us a stellar main event.

Drew Mcintyre enters the ring and looks around at the capacity crowd he then awaits the arrival of his opponent.

*SOS*​

Kofi Kingston then comes out to a huge pop from the Washington crowd as he sets of his pyro, he then runs down to the ring and poses on the turnbuckle.

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Drew Mcintyre vs. Kofi Kingston

As the match kicks off the pair lock up and go through some nice chain wrestling with Kingston getting the better of Mcintyre. Kingston then hits Mcintyre with a dropkick that sends him to the outside. Mcintyre stays on the outside to gather his thoughts, the delay prompts Kingston to go high risk as he flies over the top rope onto Mcintyre to the delight of the crowd. Soon after both men make it to their feet they exchange blows on the outside and Kingston pushes Mcintyre into the ring post. Kofi then goes for Trouble in paradise but Mcintyre ducks as Kingston kicks the ring post with incredible force! Mcintyre then throws Kingston into the ring and goes for the pin.

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NO! Kingston kicks out

Mcintyre looks down at Kingston in disbelief as the crowd go wild! Mcintyre then starts to work on the injured leg of Kingston he stomps down repeatedly on the wound. Mcintyre then hits a ddt on the leg of Kingston and goes for the cover.

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AGAIN! Kingston kicks out

Kingston grasps on to his injured leg as Mcintyre screams ‘STAY DOWN’ In his bold Scottish accent. Mcintyre then puts Kofi in a single leg Boston crab making the Ghanaian wince in pain. Mcintyre locks the hold in tighter as Kingston tries to manoeuvre a way to the ropes, he eventually does forcing Mcintyre to release the hold. Mcintyre then calls for the end and picks Kingston up for the Future Shock, Kingston however gets his arms free and hits Mcintyre with a clothesline that leaves both men down. As the referee gets to the count of 8 both men get to their feet, they then begin throwing punches at each other with the crowd reacting to every blow. Eventually Kingston hits a huge dropkick that sends Mcintyre flying to the mat.

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KICKOUT!

Kofi questions the count from the referee but soon goes to the apron, Kofi awaits Mcintyre to get to his feet and goes for a springboard clothesline however Mcintyre hits a boot to the jaw of Kingston and crawls on top of Kingston.

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KINGSTON GETS HIS SHOULDER UP!

Mcintyre can’t believe what he is seeing and begins punching the ground in frustration. He picks Kingston up and sits him onto the top turnbuckle, Mcintyre then climbs to the second rope and tries to hit a superplex. Kingston however wriggles out and pushes Mcintyre to the mat, He then stands on the top rope and hits a Boom Drop! He then hooks the leg of the Scotsman.

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OH MY GOD! Mcintyre kicks out!

Kingston begins clapping his hands together and waits for Mcintyre to stumble to his feet , he goes for the Trouble In Paradise but Mcintyre ducks and hooks his arms for the Future Shock, Kingston however counters and hits the SOS.

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Winner: Kofi Kingston by pinfall​

The whole crowd stand up and show their appreciation for the match these two put on.

Josh Matthews: What a contest! If this is what were going to see in the Triple H era on NXT then we are in for some wrestling clinics in the future.

William Regal: These two up and comers left it all in the ring and gave us possibly the best match we’ve ever witnessed on this show!

As the referee raises Kingston’s hand Mcintyre gets to his feet, he looks at Kingston who extends his hand to the Scot. Mcintyre then looks around at the crowd and eventually shakes the hand of Kofi and then raises his hand. The fans show their appreciation to the two competitors as NXT goes off the air.

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SXEnightmare's Review:

well we got a weird opening segment with triple h being intruputed by primo,epico and rosa i mean why them? maybe you have plans for them as solo wrestlers or something based off the fact they faced each other but you could have put DETAIL into the match not just a roll up that was weak honestly.

next up is beth vs kelly well let me start by saying i dont like how your sticking all the women on nxt you could always trim the fat from the divison and make it strong again? just a suggestion but beth wins which is good hope she gets a push soon.

and main event time kofi vs drew i liked this match unlike the other two this one had plently of detail and its two guys who could use a big push just at different levels i would say this match should be as much detail as you put into all your matches.

overall not a bad first NXT show i was hoping NXT would go back to being pros and rookies sense you could use it to bring up some top FCW guys or some indy stars or even TNA stars you might wanna bring into your BT but i can handle this main event was easily the best match on the card and it looks like we might be in for a power struggle from triple h and william regal sometime down the road? that would be intersting.
 
Thanks for the review. I may introduce rookies and pros to NXT but I need to study superstars from fcw etc. To get to know them,this show is to help my match writing skills develop. After Backlash I hope my RAW matches can be like the Main event.
 
Right mate, NXT. Not for me, this one. I see what you're trying to do but Triple H has too much star power to be interrupted by Primo and Epico. Why would he put them in a match? Seems a bit of a rushed show all the way through. I think that NXT works as a competition type idea - maybe there could be an NXT Championship that only guys who've never been World/WWE Champion (maybe IC/US as well) can win? Maybe being the NXT Champion could guarantee a IC/US Title match down the line after they've lost it? Glad to see you're wanting to make a big deal of Drew Mac still, good match with Kofi. I think the show is definitely not your priority and it showed. Maybe you need to focus on the major parts of the WWE before you also try to fix NXT?

Looking forward to RAW.
 
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Monday 16th April 2012
O2 Arena – London, England

*Burn It To The Ground*

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Matt Striker: Hello and welcome to Monday night RAW live from London England. I’m Matt Striker alongside WWE hall of famer Jerry ‘The King’ Lawler. Jerry we have got a huge night In store tonight.

Jerry Lawler: You got that right Matt tonight we see the beginning of the Intercontinental Championship tournament taking place with the winner of the tournament facing Alberto Del Rio at Backlash for the vacant championship. Tonight will also see the return of the highlight reel with Wade Barrett being Chris Jericho’s guest, there’s sure to be fireworks between those two just a few weeks away from Backlash!

Matt Striker: We’ll also see a huge tag team main event with the team of Daniel Bryan & CM Punk taking on Sheamus and the viper Randy Orton!

*Born To Win*​


Matt Striker: OH MY! King it’s Evan Bourne he’s back, I can’t believe this!

Jerry Lawler: Well Matt things are about to get AirBourne!


The London crowd goes crazy as Bourne runs down the ramp to the ring.


Justin Roberts: The following contest is scheduled for one fall and is an Intercontinental championship tournament match! Introducing first from St Louis Missouri, weighing in at 165lbs Evan ‘Air’ Bourne!


Bourne then enters the ring and stands on the top turnbuckle, he then stands eagerly awaiting his opponent.


*I Came To Play*​


Justin Roberts: And his opponent from Cleveland Ohio, weighing in at 220lbs The Miz!

The Miz walks down the ramp to the jeers of the crowd with a huge scowl on his face. He enters the ring and looks down on his opponent, he then motions the crowd to shush.

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Intercontinental championship tournament match
Evan Bourne vs. The Miz

As the bell rings the crowd begin a huge Evan Bourne chant as he milks the applause, much to the displeasure of The Miz. The two then lock up and Bourne puts Miz into a waistlock and keeps it on tight. Miz then counters and puts Bourne into a headlock, Bourne then pushes Miz into the ropes and leapfrogs over him as he runs back towards him and he then nails him with a dropkick and drops into the cover.

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Bourne goes straight back on the offense and begins delivering swift kicks which leaves The Miz gasping for air. Miz then counters as Bourne lifts him up and hits a huge boot that sends Bourne flying to the ground.
Matt Striker: The Miz hits a thunderous big boot and has now gained control, we’ll see if he can keep it going when we come back.

*Commercial*

As RAW comes back on air The Miz has Bourne in an abdominal stretch with the crowd trying to will the St Louis native back into the match. The Miz shouts at Bourne to submit but he eventually counters and hits a hip toss on Miz. Bourne then begins to show some energy and begins his onslaught, hittling two kicks to the legs of Miz and then a spinning heel kick that leaves The Miz out on the ground.

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NO! Miz gets his shoulder up!

Miz slowly begins to get to his feet as Bourne climbs to the top rope then as Miz turns around Bourne leaps from the top and hits a huge crossbody landing in a pinfall!

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Bourne then looks on in disbelief as The Miz lays motionless in the centre of the ring, Bourne then looks up to the top turnbuckle again as the crowd pops for his thoughts, As he wanders towards the corner The Miz suddenly springs to his feet and throws his opponent into the corner and hits him with a backdrop as he rebounds towards him. The Miz then plays up to the crowd as they ferociously boo him, Miz then waits for Bourne to get up and attempts a Skull Crushing Finale however Bourne counters and sends Miz flying into the referee who falls to the mat.

Suddenly Christian appears from the crowd and enters the ring. He and The Miz trade blows however Christian gets the better of him and hits a dropkick. He then locks The Miz by his arms and hits a Killswitch! He then exits the ring and heads up the ramp then disappears around the curtain. Evan Bourne then makes it to his feet and looks around confused however his eyes light up and he drags The Miz nearer to the corner. He then climbs the top rope to the delight of the crowd and hits Airbourne! He goes for the cover as the official begins to awaken.

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Winner: Evan Bourne by pinfall​


*Born To Win*​


Evan Bourne goes crazy as the crowd does the same, he exits the ring and begins to hug some spectators while The Miz is still down in the ring.


Matt Striker: What a contest! Evan Bourne has pulled off a huge victory and advances to the next round of this tournament at the expense of The Miz.

Jerry Lawler: He performed so well on his return but I think Miz had this match won before Christian got involved.

Matt Striker: Well Christian will have his chance in this tournament later tonight.


As Striker finishes we go backstage into Dylan Kelly’s office, he is shown pacing around the room while Eve is sat down on the couch.


Eve: Sir what’s wrong?

Dylan Kelly: I’ve got a bad feeling Eve, a bad feeling about the Highlight Reel later tonight. I don’t want chaos ensuing!

Eve: What are you going to do sir?

Dylan Kelly: Security Eve, Security is what I need. There is no way those two are getting their hands on each other here tonight.


A knock is then heard on the owner’s door.


Dylan Kelly: Come in!


David Otunga then appears on screen, he says hello to Eve as Kelly looks confused.


Dylan Kelly: What do you want David?

David Otunga: Well I’m your legal advisor, so I’m here to work.

Dylan Kelly: That won’t be necessary David, I don’t need a legal advisor. Now thank you but me and Miss Torres have some business to discuss.


Otunga walks out with a dejected look on his face as RAW goes to commercial.


*Commercial*


*Start Video*

A video appears which shows highlights of John Cena’s career, it shows current wrestlers and former wrestlers talking about John. It then shows The Rock pinning him at WrestleMania XXVIII the last time he was seen in the WWE. The superstars talk about how much the match meant to Cena and that he may never be seen again. The video ends with a crowd chanting ‘We Want Cena’ as the video fades to black.

*End Video*​


Josh Matthews: Ladies and Gentleman my guest at this time Brodus Clay!


Clay then appears on screen alongside Cameron and Naomi much to the delight of the London crowd.


Josh Matthews: Brodus, last week you suffered your first defeat since your return against Wade Barrett, how are you feeling?

Brodus Clay: Josh ya’ know what I’m feeling pretty good. Even though I lost last week I know the funk is gonna come back stronger. I got my eyes on the gold baby and what I want…… I get!


Brodus then walks off the screen while Cameron and Naomi laugh with him.


*In The Middle Of It Now*​


The London crowd begin to jeer as the pair of Curt Hawkins & Tyler Reks come down the ramp. The pair walk around the ring and pull up two chairs.


Matt Striker: Well King, it looks like Curt Hawkins and Tyler Reks are out here to watch Rey Mysterio and Sin Cara in action. Hawkins picked up a huge victory over Sin Cara last week, his first defeat in the WWE.

Jerry Lawler: Cara was clearly frustrated after his defeat last week as our cameras caught this backstage.


A video is then shown of Sin Cara throwing things around backstage, it shows Cara screaming in Spanish as Mysterio calms him down.


Jerry Lawler: Some hard hitting stuff right there Matt. Cara clearly frustrated over his loss to Hawkins which was clearly an upset victory.

*Barcode*​


The crowd boo as Primo and Epico come out accompanied by Rosa Mendes.


Justin Roberts: The following tag team contest is scheduled for one fall, making their way to the ring accompanied by Rosa Mendes at a combined weight of 432lbs Primo & Epiiiiico!


The Puerto Rican pair stand on the apron alongside the luscious Rosa who flips her hair seductively….much to the delight of the older male members of the crowd.

*Ancient Spirit*​


The London crowd goes into ecstasy as the two masked superstars appear on stage, the pair shake hands with each other and begin to run down to the ring they both slide in and jump to the turnbuckles as the pyro goes off.


Justin Roberts: And their opponents at a combined weight of 355lbs Rey Mysterio and Sin Cara!

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Primo & Epico w/Rosa Mendes vs. Rey Mysterio & Sin Cara

The match starts with Sin Cara and Primo in the ring while Hawkins and Reks watch from the outside, Cara gets Primo into a headlock as the crowd chant his name. Cara then takes Primo into the corner and tags in Rey Mysterio. Rey and Cara then hit a double dropkick and Rey goes for the cover.

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Mysterio gets right back to work on Primo and hits a flurry of kicks to the legs of Primo, he then runs to the ropes and nails Primo with a hurricanrana. When Primo makes it to his feet he counters Rey’s attempt at another hurricanrana and drops the biggest underdog neck first onto the ropes. Primo then quickly drags Mysterio into his corner and he tags in Epico, Primo then holds Mysterio down as Epico stomps on him. Primo quickly exits the ring before the referee can count to 5. Epico then goes to work on Mysterio’s knee and drives it into the ground several times. Epico then places Mysterio’s leg on the bottom rope and springs himself up to land right on his knee. Epico then makes a tag to his partner Primo who picks up Mysterio and hits a snap suplex and covers.

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Primo then puts Mysterio in a leg lock as the crowd tries to will Mysterio out of the hold. Mysterio eventually makes it up to one leg and hits an enziguri to the head of Primo much to the dismay of Rosa. Mysterio begins to crawl towards Cara who has his arm extended ready for the tag…..HE GETS THE TAG!

Cara comes bounding into the ring and takes out Primo with a flying clothesline. He then hits a dropkick as he gets to his feet. Cara then waits for Primo to stand and he runs towards him, Primo however throws Cara over his head but to the amazement of the crowd Cara lands on his feet. Cara then runs at Primo and hits a hurricanrana. Cara then hits his patent Tilt-a-Whirl DDT! He then tags in Mysterio and goes flying into Epico who was on the apron,sending both of them to the outside. Mysterio then climbs the top rope and hits a splash on Primo. He then hooks the outside leg.

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*Booyaka 619*​


Cara makes his way back into the ring and embraces his partner as the official raises their hands however they are cut off by Curt Hawkins who has a microphone on the outside.


Curt Hawkins: Cut the music!


The music is then cut off abruptly as Hawkins continues.


Curt Hawkins: Ever since me and T-Reks here have teamed up we’ve never been given a chance, and last week I got my chance and I took it! We’ve had our eyes on the Tag titles for a very long time and there is no way you two are gonna’ take OUR chance. We’ve worked too hard to get where we are today and there is no way you two have got the chemistry or ability to beat T&C!


Hawkins then drops the mic onto the ground and starts to walk to the back alongside his partner. Cara and Mysterio look on as RAW goes to commercial.


*Commercial*​


When RAW comes back we see Dylan Kelly on the titantron to a mixed crowd reaction.


Dylan Kelly: Hello Ladies and Gentleman I have a quick announcement to make. Earlier tonight you saw Evan Bourne defeat The Miz to qualify for the semi-finals of the Intercontinental championship tournament. However I would now like to inform Evan he is now a tournament finalist!


The crowd pop big for this decision.


Dylan Kelly: Later tonight you will see a battle royal between other superstars on the brand with the winner facing Evan Bourne in the finals next week on Monday night RAW! I would also like to say that after the fine speech I’ve just heard Curt Hawkins and Tyler Reks will face Rey Mysterio and Sin Cara for the vacant WWE Tag Team Championships at Backlash!


We then go back to ringside.


Matt Striker: It may be a change in plans but battle royals are always full of excitement! And a huge tag title match in the offing now King, Kelly seems to be making waves running this company.

Jerry Lawler: You got that right Matt I can’t wait to see those superstars go at it for a title shot! Hawkins and Reks have waited a long time for their opportunity and there’s no doubt in my mind that they will be ready for Cara & Mysterio come Backlash.

Matt Striker: Well now some real serious business King, two weeks ago on RAW we saw the ruthless attack Wade Barrett perpetrated on Chris Jericho, Chris wasn’t here last week however he’s here tonight and he will host the highlight reel with his guest being his Backlash opponent Wade Barrett! See it unfold when we return.


*Commercial*​

When RAW comes back we see the set of the highlight reel set in the ring with the outside of the ring covered with security. Suddenly the lights go out in the arena and we see Chris Jericho’s light up jacket much to the fans delight.


*Break The Walls Down*​


Justin Roberts: Ladies and Gentleman please welcome Chris Jericho!


Chris Jericho soaks up the applause and begins to high five some of the fans in attendance, he enters the ring and takes a microphone from one of the stools set up in the ring.


Chris Jericho: I’m not in the mood for games, Barrett get down here!


The crowd and Jericho then look at the ramp awaiting Barrett's arrival.


Chris Jericho: Come on! Get down her-


*End Of Days*​


Wade Barrett then appears on the stage to a mixed reaction from his own country, he then walks down to the ring and locks eyes on the security. He then picks up a microphone from his stool.


Wade Barrett: Well I praise your courage Jericho to get back in the ring with me but I don’t praise your brains. I-

Chris Jericho: Will you just shut the hell up! Wade I was ready to put an end to my illustrious career in this company but you attacked me! But why? Wade…. Jealousy?

Wade Barrett: Ha! Jealous of you Chris, I don’t think so I’ve always been better than you! I attacked you to prove my dominance in this company. I wanted people in the back to stand up and take notice of Wade Barrett and what better way to do it than take out the most overrated internet darling there has ever been!

Chris Jericho: You’ve started something Wade that didn’t need to be started I was leaving with my head held high, I was leaving as the ayatollah of rock ‘n’ rolla, the man of 1,004 holds…….the best in the world at what I do!

Wade Barrett: Chris that is where you are a hypocrite! You come out week after week and bad mouth people but at the drop of a hat you decide to play up to them. I know you’ve always loved attention but the spotlight isn’t on you anymore Y2J! It’s on me and at Backlash you can leave this company with your head held high… by paramedics putting you on a stretcher!

Chris Jericho: When you debuted on NXT ,I tried to pass on my wisdom onto you and you told me I was your idol and that I was an inspiration in this business, so if you wanna’ talk about people changing you sir are the hypocrite. You can make all the threats you want but you won’t amount to anything in this business!


Barrett then begins to become angry and he throws over his stool.


Chris Jericho: Touch a nerve Wade did I!? See that’s what I do, I know I can get in your head as easy as I will beat you at Backlash. I can assure you Wade after Backlash you will never…


Jericho then throws his stool and begins to walk towards Barrett.


Chris Jericho: Everrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr


Security then rush into the ring and get in between the pair.


Chris Jericho: Be the same….again!


*Break The Walls Down*​


Matt Striker: I can’t wait for Backlash King, we’re gonna’ see these two go at it in one of the toughest battles of Chris Jericho’s career!

Jerry Lawler: Barrett’s hungry Matt, and he wants Jericho if we know one thing it is that we’re in for one huge battle at Backlash.


Jericho then drops his microphone to the ground and stares down Wade Barrett who stares back as we go to commercial.


*Commercial*​


Josh Matthews: Ladies and Gentleman my guest at this time CM Punk!

CM Punk: Heyyyy Josh!

Josh Matthews: Punk, later on tonight you will team up with a man you have a lot of history with Daniel Bryan, to take on Randy Orton and your Backlash opponent Sheamus. Are you looking forward to getting a piece of the Irishman?

CM Punk: First things first Joshy boy I don’t understand why I have to team with Daniel Bryan tonight, when everyone full well knows I’m the best in the world! I can take Orton and Sheamus all by myself. Now to answer your question, of course I can’t wait to get a piece of Beaker I mean Sheamus. There is no doubt he’s tough but when he steps into my hometown Chicago Illinois at Backlash he’s leaving with nothing! Nothing Josh, nobody beats me in my hometown regardless of who they are…. Tonight Sheamus is gonna’ get a little piece of C….M Punk!

Punk then walks off the screen to a huge ovation from the crowd.


*Realeza*​


Alberto Del Rio then appears on stage wearing a smart suit. He is out to watch the battle royal which is next.


*Commercial*​

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Intercontinental Championship Battle Royal

As RAW comes back on the air we are in the middle of the battle royal with 7 superstars remaining, we then see a replay of some previous eliminations. We then see Drew Mcintyre who has Tyson Kidd teetering over the top rope. Suddenly we see Kane send R-Truth flying over the top rope for the elimination. Which leaves just 6 remaining, Dolph Ziggler then is shockingly thrown over by Tyson Kidd who begins celebrating like he has won the title. His celebrations are cut short however as Kofi Kingston sends him over the top rope.

Suddenly Ziggler starts beating Tyson down on the outside and throws him into the steel steps. Christian is then flung over the top rope but he hangs on and stands on the apron, The Miz then runs down from the ramp and pulls Christian to the floor thus eliminating the Canadian, he then hits him with a Skull Crushing Finale and walks to the back.

Then only Kofi Kingston, Drew Mcintyre and Kane remain in the contest, Kofi and Mcintyre try to double team Kane and throw him over the top but he uses his power to great effect and fights them both off. Kane then grabs Mcintyre and sends him over the top leaving him and Kofi. Kane however makes short work of Kingston and Chokeslam’s him over the top rope to the floor.

Winner: Kane​


Matt Striker: Absolute dominance from Kane! He goes on to face Evan Bourne next week for the right to face Alberto Del Rio for the Intercontinental championship at Backlash.


Kane then stares at Alberto Del Rio before smirking, RAW then goes to commercial.


*Commercial*​


Matt Striker: Welcome back to Monday night RAW and during the commercial break our man backstage Josh Matthews caught up with Dolph Ziggler in the parking lot.


A video then comes on screen with Ziggler storming to his car and Matthews running after him.


Josh Matthews: Dolph! Dolph!


Ziggler then turns around from his car to Matthews.


Josh Matthews: Dolph, what was that attack on Tyson all about?

Dolph Ziggler: I’ll tell you what it’s about Josh, I was out there doing what I do best…stealing the show! It was only a matter of time before that Intercontinental title was coming to MY waist. And then I get eliminated by Tyson Kidd!!?? The guy can’t even get on this show without it being a Battle Royal! So Josh I was teaching the kid a lesson, he can come from the hart dungeon all he wants but he will never be better than me!


Ziggler then gets in his car and drives off as we go back to ringside.


Matt Striker: King, some harsh words from Dolph Ziggler there regarding Tyson Kidd.

Jerry Lawler: Well Matt, we all know Tyson can go in the ring as good as anybody here in the WWE and I’m sure he won’t be forgetting about this soon.


*Flight Of The Valkyries*​


The crowd then begins to boo Daniel Bryan who walks down to the ring with AJ who is sporting a neck brace after suffering an RKO from Randy Orton. Bryan then tells AJ to wait on the outside while he enters the ring.


Justin Roberts: The following contest is a tag team contest scheduled for one fall, introducing first from Aberdeen Washington weighing in at 210lbs accompanied by AJ, Daniel Bryan!


*Cult Of Personality*​


Justin Roberts: Introducing his partner from Chicago Illinois weighing in at 218lbs CM Punk!


The British crowd then goes wild as CM Punk makes his way to the ring. He looks at Bryan before throwing his shirt into the crowd.


*Voices*​


Randy Orton saunters down the ring as we see a replay of the attack from Daniel Bryan last week. Orton then glares at AJ who looks back with her eyes full of fear.


Justin Roberts: And from St Louis Missouri weighing in at 235lbs Randy Orton!


*Written In My Face*​


Sheamus then appears to the delight of the crowd and he begins to walk down to the ring.


Justin Roberts: And his partner from Dublin Ireland, weighing in at 267lbs Sheamus!

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Daniel Bryan & CM Punk w/AJ vs. Randy Orton & Sheamus

Punk and Orton start the match with a few exchanges of grapples, Punk eventually takes control and puts Orton in a headlock. Orton fights out and throws Punk to the ropes as he runs back Orton leapfrogs over him and hits a dropkick as Punk comes back towards him. Punk then slithers out of the ring before Orton can make a cover. The pair stare at each other as RAW goes to commercial.

*Commercial*

When RAW comes back on air we see Daniel Bryan has Orton in control by the corner, he starts delivering kicks to the kneeling Orton shouting YES! With every kick, he then goes for the cover.

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NO! kickout from Orton.

Bryan quickly gets on Orton to restrict him making a tag, Bryan then tags in Punk who springboards from the top rope and elbow drops Orton. Punk then puts Orton in a devastating dragon sleeper. Orton tries to manoeuvre out but Punk keeps on tight leaving Orton gasping. Orton eventually turns around and hits a northern lights suplex that leaves both men down in the centre of the ring. Orton crawls towards Sheamus and makes a tag! Sheamus comes in and jumps right on his Backlash opponent CM Punk pummeling down with ferocity. Sheamus then waits for Punk to get to his feet before hitting a huge clothesline, Sheamus then flies towards Daniel Bryan who is on the apron and sends him flying to the floor.

Sheamus calls for the end and begins beating his chest signalling for a Brogue Kick! As he charges towards Punk he ducks and then hits Sheamus with a high kick to the side of the head! He hooks the outside leg.

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No! Sheamus gets his shoulder up.

Punk then gets up to his feet and waits for Sheamus to get up but suddenly Randy Orton runs in and clotheslines Punk. He then looks outside to AJ and slides out of the ring walking towards her then with a sadistic look on his face. As he gets to AJ Daniel Bryan takes Orton out from behind throwing him into the barricade, he then grabs AJ’s hand and runs up the ramp with her going to the back.

Meanwhile in the ring Punk and Sheamus both make it to their feet and Punk delivers another high kick to the head of Sheamus and hoists him onto his shoulders….he hits an emphatic GTS! He then goes for the cover.

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3! Punk has pinned Sheamus!
Winners: Daniel Bryan & CM Punk by pinfall​


CM Punk then looks down at Sheamus and symbols a title around his waist.


Matt Striker: King, CM Punk has just pinned Sheamus!

Jerry Lawler: Punk has showed he’s no pushover, and he can take Sheamus.

Raw goes off the air with Punk looking down at Sheamus on the mat.

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Backlash Updated Card:


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WWE CHAMPIONSHIP
Sheamus vs. CM Punk



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Wade Barrett vs. Chris Jericho



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WWE TAG TEAM CHAMPIONSHIP
Tyler Reks & Curt Hawkins vs. Rey Mysterio & Sin Cara



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Cody Rhodes vs. Big Show


PLUS MUCH MORE TO BE ADDED
 
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Backlash Updated Card:


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WWE CHAMPIONSHIP
Sheamus vs. CM Punk



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Wade Barrett vs. Chris Jericho



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WWE TAG TEAM CHAMPIONSHIP
Tyler Reks & Curt Hawkins vs. Rey Mysterio & Sin Cara



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Cody Rhodes vs. Big Show


PLUS MUCH MORE TO BE ADDED

I'm new to this Be the booker so I don't know if it's aloud but I want to give you my predictions.

CM Punk v. Sheamus
Prediction - CM Punk

Wade Barrett v. Chris Jericho
Prediction - Chris Jericho
(Hopefully Wade can then come out the next night saying Jericho got a "fluke win" so the feud continues)

Tyler Reks/Curt Hawkins v. Rey Mysterio and Sin Cara
Prediction - Rey Mysterio and Sin Cara

Cody Rhodes v. Big Show
Prediction - Cody Rhodes
 
I'm new to this Be the booker so I don't know if it's aloud but I want to give you my predictions.

CM Punk v. Sheamus
Prediction - CM Punk

Wade Barrett v. Chris Jericho
Prediction - Chris Jericho
(Hopefully Wade can then come out the next night saying Jericho got a "fluke win" so the feud continues)

Tyler Reks/Curt Hawkins v. Rey Mysterio and Sin Cara
Prediction - Rey Mysterio and Sin Cara

Cody Rhodes v. Big Show
Prediction - Cody Rhodes

Sure mate, the card isn't full yet though. Predictions are welcomed, one more RAW before my first ppv! :)
 
Man, I'm loving your BTB. I'll do my predictions in a hole when all of the matches are annouced. I wish some day my BTB thread will be as big as yours. When will RAW be posted?
 
Man, I'm loving your BTB. I'll do my predictions in a hole when all of the matches are annouced. I wish some day my BTB thread will be as big as yours. When will RAW be posted?

Thanks mate, I'll check yours out tomorrow, I'll probably start writing RAW tomorrow, I don't know when it will be up though.
 
WWE NEWS


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Daniel Bryan vs. Randy Orton

We can confirm today via the owner of the WWE Dylan Kelly that Daniel Bryan and Randy Orton will battle one on one at Backlash on Sunday April 29th. With just one more episode of Monday Night RAW before Backlash we are sure to hear more about this match.
 

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