Teddy Irving
Pre-Show Stalwart
This should be one sentence, with commas coming after the word "year" and "big Zeke," with the latter replacing the period you used. Commas are your friend.
I believe you were meant to say after the words "year" and "big Zeke" rather than "after the word "year" and "big Zeke" " as saying word would imply it is only one word singular when it is in fact there is two words you are talking about. Also if his name is Big Zeke should Big not be a capital as well due to it being a name such as the Big Show.
If you take the qualities that define a main-event talent, Zeke possesses little to no of any of these qualities. Would you honestly even notice if Zeke was gone? I know I wouldn't.
I believe this should read "If you take the qualities that define a main-event talent, Zeke possesses little to none of these qualities", as little to no of any of these qualities does not make sense.
You're welcome.
Now onto the question that was asked. Big Zeke failed because he has nothing to make him stand out from the other people on the roster. The only thing that makes him stand out is his size and muscles but as there is others that fill the role of big and muscly that doesn't work for him as a stand out trait. His promo work is bad and is in ring work is bad that is why he failed he has nothing good going for him.