Thought I'd share my work.

[TSG]

This isn't much, just an article I wrote for our school paper on the major sports rivalry game at our school, which is coming up on Saturday evening for football. I decided I'd take the article and some pictures and make a Wordpress site for it. Just thought I'd share it, since I really enjoyed writing the article. The link is below if anyone wants to check it out (which I highly doubt).

http://southernvseastern.wordpress.com/2011/10/28/southern-vs-eastern-the-rivalry/

 

[Harthan]

It's good. The content is solid. I noticed a lot of writing errors creeping up, though. Thorough proofreading, maybe let an English teacher have a look at it, would be a good idea. Keep working at it. You've got a solid foundation.

 

[TSG]

Yeah, I noticed two reading over it. I messed up the county name at one point, and typed "feel" instead of "fill." They're usually proofread over, but I didn't get a chance this time.