sporadic thoughts..

[lordslix0129]

When I look into the sky at night and see the seemingly endless specs of light, I can't help but wonder if something our minds have yet to imagine lies beyond. The blackness rains wonder and screams insignificance. It sets ablaze all my certainty, and leaves me with only a heap of confusion. I'm overwhelmed with a feeling of ignorance when I look into the sky, and yet am filled with the deepest feeling of love and awe for what nature has so beautifully put together. When I see that consuming blackness, I yearn to conquer it and understand all and achieve everything. I am filled entirely with passion and inspiration, only to realize that I have no chance of ever seeing first hand everything our universe has to offer. It is only within my own imagination that I will satisfy my desire to understand and clear away the bewildering blackness.

I first started this as a poem, but I don't know how to describe the way it ended up. What do you think?

 

[LigerBomb]

Generally it's ok. Nice topic if not a tad banal. For me, personally, it's a bit amateurish and clumsy but otherwise it's pretty good.

 

[Kanye South]

I think lordslix needs to stay away from the drug cabinet.

 

[FromTheSouth]

Generally it's ok. Nice topic if not a tad banal. For me, personally, it's a bit amateurish and clumsy but otherwise it's pretty good.

I love you. Why are you not here more?

 

[Turd Ferguson]

[YOUTUBE]UKwwx4dW5cg[/YOUTUBE]

Oh radio, tell me everything you know

I like to sing with the radio
I like to play it real loud
I like to drive with the top down
Rolling like thunder, always drawing a crowd
Every babe's gonna want a piece of me, yeah

I stare into the mirror
I like the things I see

Oh radio, tell me everything you know
I will believe your every word, just tell me so
I see the look in their eyes, I see desire in their lies
In their lies...

Oh yeah

I'm gonna drink some beer tonight, yeah
Gonna get some girls I like
Gonna wear my pants real tight
All the girls are gonna treat me just right
They don't think I see them stare at me, no

I stare into the mirror
I like the things I see

Oh radio, tell me everything you know
I will believe your every word, just tell me so
I see the look in their eyes, I see desire in their lies
In their lies

I like to sing with the radio
God knows I could be a rock star
I'm sure all you girls want to know
How you could meet me, oh you know who you are
I feel your eyes so locked on me

I like to sing with the radio
I like to play it real loud
I like to drive with the top down
Rolling like thunder, always drawing a crowd
Every babe's gonna want a piece of me, yeah

I stare into the mirror
I like the things I see

Oh radio, tell me everything you know
I will believe your every word, just tell me so
I see the look in their eyes, I see desire in their lies
In their lies

 

[Kanye South]

[YOUTUBE]UKwwx4dW5cg[/YOUTUBE]

Oh radio, tell me everything you know

I like to sing with the radio
I like to play it real loud
I like to drive with the top down
Rolling like thunder, always drawing a crowd
Every babe's gonna want a piece of me, yeah

I stare into the mirror
I like the things I see

Oh radio, tell me everything you know
I will believe your every word, just tell me so
I see the look in their eyes, I see desire in their lies
In their lies...

Oh yeah

I'm gonna drink some beer tonight, yeah
Gonna get some girls I like
Gonna wear my pants real tight
All the girls are gonna treat me just right
They don't think I see them stare at me, no

I stare into the mirror
I like the things I see

Oh radio, tell me everything you know
I will believe your every word, just tell me so
I see the look in their eyes, I see desire in their lies
In their lies

I like to sing with the radio
God knows I could be a rock star
I'm sure all you girls want to know
How you could meet me, oh you know who you are
I feel your eyes so locked on me

I like to sing with the radio
I like to play it real loud
I like to drive with the top down
Rolling like thunder, always drawing a crowd
Every babe's gonna want a piece of me, yeah

I stare into the mirror
I like the things I see

Oh radio, tell me everything you know
I will believe your every word, just tell me so
I see the look in their eyes, I see desire in their lies
In their lies

Generally it's ok. Nice topic if not a tad banal. For me, personally, it's a bit amateurish and clumsy but otherwise it's pretty good.

 

[lordslix0129]

Generally it's ok. Nice topic if not a tad banal. For me, personally, it's a bit amateurish and clumsy but otherwise it's pretty good.

amateurish. spoken like a true newb.

 

[X]

I'm fairly certain LigerBomb has destroyed more brain cells than you have in total.

 

[Kanye South]

I'm fairly certain LigerBomb has destroyed more brain cells than you have in total.

lulz

 

[Kanye South]

X you should read CKD.