Showtyme, really sorry about not getting the review in earlier, but I forgot, then remembered. Sorry! Ill try give a long informative review.
CW Match: Love the stipulations, wrestlers and variety of moves at the end of the battle royal. The early elimination shocked me a little, but the length of this part turned out to be good. One thing I noticed was the writing was a little sloppy. For example-
Yang and Tajiri get back inside the ring and continue to battle, Alex Shelly whips Jeter to the rope but Jeter counters into a springboard spinkick off the second ropes, Jeter jumps up and delivers a fliping lepdrop to Shelly's throat, Shelly is tring to breath and gasping for air, Jeter lays some stomps to the head as Shelly hols on to the ropes tring to escape the beating he is reciving, acrossed the ring Low-Ki nails Sabin with a devestating kick to the back of his head dazed and confused Sabin walks right into a kick to the gut from Williams and his incredible finishing move the canadian destroyer Sabin is laid out but Low-Ki turns on Williams and blindsides him with a wicked high leg clothesline, Andy Douglas dropkicks London into a nearby corner and then clobbers him with a jumping corner splash, Stevens and Kendrick are tradeing punch and just when it looks like Kendrick is getting the upper hand Douglas nails him from behind to help his partner, Douglas then grabs Kendrick and floats him over with a reverse vertical suplex but Stevens catches his body and they together deliver their tagteam finisher the natural disaster(stunner and gutbuster combo), Jeter still in full contorl of Shelly sees his opprotunity and jets right over to the Naturals and slings his body in the air attemping to eliminate both Naturals with a high crossbody but is caught in mid-air and dumped over the top rope by the Naturals.
-is all one sentence! That could be broken down for easier reading. The ladder part was great, but I loved the finish, with the post-match beat-down. I was glad Low-KI won, and I was rooting for him all the way.
Bashams vs. Island Boyz
Lol, Batistas run in was so predictable. But I liked the fact that his move failed (in the sense that Island Boyz still won), and it was well planned. Again, breaking paragraphs down into smaller sentences, IMO is better. Great variety of moves, and Im glad youre promoting Rosey to mid-card, and losing his shit gimmick, as he has a fair amount of power potential. Good solid match, which fooled me into thinking it would be a squash.
Burke/McMahon promo Solid, but nothing special. Elijah Burkes speech could have been a little different, though I see you trying to make him a suck-up. I liked Shane completely ignoring him and then exploding like that.
RVD/Punk Liked the crack reference without directly addressing it, but then that drug-free line from RVD ruined it. Would have liked it a lot more if you had kept everything subtle. Arent both of these guys faces, or am I forgetting something? Cant really see either of them turn heel, especially CM Punk. Sorry, just read Tazz and Coles comments. Understand now.
Hardy vs. Booker T vs. Carlito
Great back and forth match, with a quite remarkable array of manoeuvres, but I would have preferred you to keep the action in the ring. Still, I suppose steel steps and announcers table are all good, and you didnt keep them out there for too long. Thought Sharmells role was very authentic, and the finish was great, but somehow I had a hunch that Hardy would win. I like the fact Booker doesnt have his King gimmick, even though he is a heel. Great match, one of the best so far.
Styles/Daniels vs. Punk and RVD Great high flying moves, and good solid match, and the finish was interesting and definitely original. Didnt know what to make of it! Great match up!
Strong vs. Noble Didnt really want anyone to win, and couldnt see this matches potential, but you turned it into quite a decent match. Again, great writing performance, creating something out of what I considered to be nothing.
Birchill vs. Benjamin I was loving it as a wrestling match, and thats how it should have stayed, I think. But still, it didnt completely ruin it or anything. Benjamin had to retain, as he is so damn easy to write on and entertaining because of his athleticism, and he did so accordingly. Engaging match-up.
Lol, doesnt Fusion (lalakerz show) have an Angle Benoit feud? Na just kidding, its hard to resist pitting these two against each other.
HOW MANY MATCHES? Lol jks, jks. Long show.
Six Man Tag: Blockbuster main event, and the Benoit Angle feud is continued well with Benoits submission. Big names attract big crowds, and I was a great match, with everyone playing their part, second in the night only to the CW match.
Very Long show, maybe limit the matches next time, but again, an entertaining one, and Im looking forward to your next show. Again sorry, for the wait. Overall, 93/100, Great Stuff!!