My Match

[Downward Spiral]

This is a match written for the WZMania that we have going on. The rest of the feud is in the WZMania section, but I just wanted to hear your thoughts on how my first ever match went. Now please be kind and I know it's not the best and it starts off a little dull but again, this was my first match and it took a while to write. Team Jonny consists of Luther Hull, Big Ace, myself, Jonny B and Pastie1545. Team Jake/the J Team consists of Abyss, Y2Jake, wordisborn, extremetwistoffate and wrestledude.

Team Jake has left the building, but Downward Spiral and the rest of Team Jonny have assaulted Extremetwistoffate. He is lying in the ring as Spiral calls for a referee to come out.

Downward Spiral (w/Team Jonny) vs ExtremeTwistoffate (ETOF)​

The Start
Downward Spiral goes for a cover on a seemingly unconscious ETOF. 1, 2...KICK OUT! Spiral looks up furiously at the referee as he goes for a second cover. 1, 2...KICK OUT AGAIN! Spiral now gets up and starts furiously bashing the ring and starts kicking the ropes. He looks angrily out at the crowd as he starts laying the punches on ETOF. He lifts him up and goes for a clothesline which connects. He quickly goes for a cover. 1, 2, and a kick out by ETOF. Spiral is going maniacal at this point and is tearing out his hair while kneeling on the ground.

Spiral locks on an STF and is aiming at choking out ETOF, who is bleeding from the mouth. He is locking it on and the referee is asking ETOF if he wants to quit. After about 15 seconds, the referee lifts ETOF's arm up to see if he is knocked out. It falls down once. He lifts it up and it falls down again. Spiral is really putting it on now. The referee lifts it up...and ETOF fights back! He is standing up now and Spiral is still holding on. ETOF drops Spiral into a sidewalk slam and both guys are laid out on the ground.

Mid match notes

The referee starts the 10 count. 1, 2, 3, 4, and Spiral is the first to get up and walks groggily around the ring for a few minutes and is waiting for ETOF to get up. As ETOF slowly gets up, Spiral is readying himself for a spear. ETOF turns around and dodges out of the way of the spear attempt and Spiral slams into the turnbuckle and ETOF goes for a quick rollup. 1, 2 and Spiral just kicks out. Spiral is looking bewildered now and both men get up into a punching brawl which ETOF gets the better of. He kicks Spiral in the gut and places him for a powerbomb. He goes to lift Spiral up and Spiral starts punching him in the head. Spiral nails a quick DDT from the powerbomb position and goes for a cover and gets a two count.

Spiral quickly runs up to the turnbuckles and does a leg drop on ETOF. He goes for the cover after raising his hands to the heat of the crowd. 1, 2...and kick out by ETOF. He lifts a groggy ETOF up by the hair and goes for a suplex which he nails on ETOF. He lifts him up and goes for a second one but ETOF hits some elbows to the back of the head and does a running neckbreaker. He slowly rolls into the cover. 1, 2, kick out from Spiral! ETOF stomps on Spiral and spits out at an angry Team Jonny as the crowd gives a good pop. He drops his knee over Spirals face and goes for the cover. 1, and Spiral kicks out. He looks around the ring and goes up to the turnbuckle and steadies himself for a Swanton Bomb before Spiral gets up ala Kurt Angle, runs up the turnbuckle and tries to Superplex ETOF. ETOF holds on, and manages to big back body drop Spiral to the outside where Spiral writhes in pain.

ETOF steadies himself again and before he can jump, Pastie distracts the referee as Jonny B shoves ETOF off of the turnbuckle, and sends ETOF flying to the outside where he gets caught by the guardrail on his throat. The referee turns around and starts doing the 10 count as Team Jonny raise their hands innocently.

1,2,3,4,5,6,7. Team Jonny quickly rushes and throws Spiral in the ring as ETOF beats the 10 count and rolls into the ring. Both men are groggy as they start another punch fest. ETOF looks to have won it before Spiral thuds his eyes. Spiral runs back to the turnbuckles and runs forward and hits a bulldog on ETOF. He quickly covers. 1, 2...KICK OUT AGAIN! Spiral is furious again as he starts laying the punches into ETOF and stomps on his face a few times. He lifts him up and runs back for the clothesline, only to be met with a spinning wheel kick from ETOF.

ETOF crawls into the cover, but the referee is being distracted by Team Jonny again, as Big Ace is on the ropes trying to get the referee's attention. ETOF sees this after the crowd chant 1, 2, 3, and goes and blasts Ace in the head as Ace tumbles to the floor. As the referee is trying to settle Team Jonny, Spiral goes from behind ETOF, who is still glaring out at Team Jonny, and hits a backbreaker ala Randy Orton. Spiral pauses and then grabs ETOF and Irish whips him into the corner, where ETOF slumps down.

Spiral wraps ETOF's head in the ropes and gives him a foot choke as the referee turns around soon after and starts the 5 count. 1, 2, 3, 4 and Spiral breaks the hold. The referee gives Spiral a talking to, as Team Jonny continue to choke ETOF out. ETOF eventually is untangled after they release the hold. Spiral then walks to the corner cockily and tries to lift ETOF up by the hair but gets a kick in the face. Spiral is groggy as he runs back and tries for a clothesline but gets tripped into the bottom turnbuckle.

ETOF drags him out to the middle of the ring and hits a clothesline. He quickly runs up to the turnbuckles and hits a whisper in the wind on Downward Spiral. He goes for the cover. 1, 2, and kick out from Spiral. Both men are down for a while before ETOF slowly gets up and starts looking around at a cheering crowd. As Spiral gets up, he turns around to face his team and looks confused and angry. ETOF runs up behind him and throws him out of the ring into all of his team as they sprawl across the floor. ETOF then throws himself over the top and hits a crossbody on everyone as there are bodies lying everywhere.

The referee begins a 10 count, which is stopped at 5 after ETOF gets up and rolls into the ring, breaking up the three count. He goes back out and irish whips Spiral into the steel steps. ETOF has snapped as he lines Spirals head up against the steel steps, and knocks the rest of Team Jonny down again. He turns around and runs up for a big boot to Spiral's head but he is met with a vicious clothesline from Spiral.

The End
Spiral groggily rolls ETOF back into the ring and slowly crawls toward a cover. 1, 2, and KICK OUT AGAIN! Spiral is looking angry again as he grabs the referee and looks to hit him before he lets go and starts stomping on ETOF. As he slowly lifts ETOF up, he signals that he is going for his signature Downward Spiral. As he has got him in the rock bottom position, ETOF fights out and hits a kick to the gut and hits a TWIST OF FATE! He goes for the cover, but Jonny B jumps up on the edge of the ring and gives a neckbreaker on the top rope to the referee before he can count, and the referee slumps down. ETOF has seen none of this as he waits for the count. He turns around with a puzzled look on his face and sees the referee down. Team Jonny is walking away innocently, but ETOF looks furious as he goes out and grabs a steel chair. He runs towards Team Jonny, who are standing at the front of the ring and they all back up and walk backwards to the top of the ramp.

ETOF looks back at Spiral knocked out in the ring and then looks at the chair and smiles. He goes back into the ring and lines up Spirals head against the turnbuckle. He picks up the chair and points at the chair and then at Team Jonny. He raises it and SLAMS it into Spirals head. He brings the referee slowly back to life as he covers Spiral. The referee very slowly crawls over to make the count. Just before he does, Team Jonny starts running down again quickly to the ring. The referee begins counting. 1, 2, and Team Jonny drag the referee out of the ring again and Big Ace starts beating on him again. ETOF gets up and starts shaking his head. Jonny B starts turning and laughing towards the crowd as ETOF reaches down and tries to pick him up by the hair. Pastie and Luther Hull then quickly grab a chair each and sandwich ETOF while he is bending down.

Spiral is getting up again and as ETOF turns around, he hits him with a vicious Downward Spiral. He then tells Big Ace to bring a table into the ring as all of Team Jonny get in there and set up the table. Pastie pulls out some Brass Knuckles and knocks ETOF to the ground again. Spiral climbs the top rope and Team Jonny help ETOF into his arms. Spiral then hits a spinning DDT right through the table, and both men are writhing on the ground. Luther Hull runs to the back as Team Jonny go out of the ring, leaving Spiral in there with an unconscious ETOF as the crowd are booing loudly. Hull brings out a referee who runs to the ring and begins the count as Spiral puts one arm over ETOF. 1, 2, 3!!!

Here is your winner by pinfall:

Downward Spiral!!!!​

Spiral slowly gets to his feet and is raised by a wild Team Jonny. They all stand over ETOF and raise eachothers hands in victory. They all take turns at doing their finishers on ETOF as Downward Spiral holds him in place for Pastie to slap him in the face. Jonny B then goes up and spits into ETOF's face. Spiral then throws ETOF to the ground. ETOF is bleeding from the forehead and mouth now and is lying unconscious again.

Team Jonny leaves the ring as the paramedics rush to ETOF. As they are walking backwards up the ramp, Team Jake is shown arriving back in a limo in the parking lot.

...............................................

The cameras go back to Team Jonny celebrating in the back. After they all go to the parking lot, they are met by Team Jake, who are carrying steel pipes and other weapons and this begins an all out parking brawl between the two teams. Eventually, Team Jonny is knocked out, and Team Jake place Downward Spiral and Jonny B together on the hood of a car. Wordisborn then climbs up to the top of a truck, and does a leg drop with a chair onto the two, smashing the windsheild.

Team Jake then picks up Big Ace and slams him into a car door as Luther Hull and Pastie are beaten on by Team Jake with two steel pipes. Security eventually runs out and backs Team Jake away from the now unconscious Team Jonny. Team Jake are looking angrily at Team Jonny and saying this is not over, as Extremetwistoffate limps out from the building holding one of the steel chairs used against him. Spiral is now lying against the front of a car, and Team Jake knocks the security out of the way so that ETOF can get through. ETOF slowly walks up to Spiral and smashes the chair across his skull.

Team Jake then celebrate as they say: "This is not over! You will pay!"

The scene closes with The J Team walking away from the scene as the cameras roll across the laid out Team Jonny.

 

[showtyme27]

This style looks very familiar(lol), no this match was great you took my style and for the most part did it better than I do, I loved the pace you set for the match and the way the even though I didn't know the characters moves you named them by moves I would understand, I wish I had the incredible use of words you have it made the match flow even better, This is probably one of the best matches I have read lately, also loved the aftermath with Team Jake lying out Team Jonny, You did a great job and I hope you do it more often.

 

[Downward Spiral]

Thankyou. Yeah I did steal the style sort of, but your's were too effective to miss that oppurtunity. I will try to write a few more but it did take a while and I can't do it like you do. Thanks for the review!

 

[Downward Spiral]

This is a match written as a pre-WZMania match. I don't think it is as good as the last one but I had to make another one.

(Downward Spiral's music hits as Spiral walks to the ring in his ring gear, ready for action. He stops for a moment in the ramp before glaring at the crowd and walking up the steps and under the top rope into the ring. He climbs the turnbuckle and raises his arms in the air, He jumps down and stands in the middle of the ring and stares at the top of the ramp.

Announcer: This match, is scheduled for one fall. In the ring, weighing in at 230 pounds...Downward Spiral!!! (The crowd boos.)

Abyss' music hits and after a while, Abyss slowly walks out to the top of the ramp.

Announcer: "And making his way to the ring, weighing in at 265 pounds, Abyss!"

Abyss stares out at the crowd for a while, before running down and rolling in the ring. Downward Spiral starts stomping on him straight away and the bell rings and this one begins!)

THE START​

Spiral is still laying the boots into Abyss, and Abyss eventually shrugs them off and stands up and Spiral backs away a little. The two look at eachother for a moment before locking up in the middle of the ring. Abyss gets the better of it and gets Spiral in a headlock. He is wrenching his neck before Spiral gets to the ropes and holds on, yelling at the referee to get Abyss off of him. After Abyss is moved back by the referee, Spiral throws a punch into Abyss that knocks him down. Spiral starts smirking to the crowd as the referee is warning him about the punch.

Spiral mounts Abyss and continues the punching, before Abyss grabs Spiral by the neck, and begins to get on his feet before Spiral elbows him in the temple. Spiral continues doing it before running back into the ropes and rebounding off them and hitting a clothesline on Abyss that sends him to the ground again. Spiral looks around to the turnbuckle and starts climbing up, before Abyss gets up as well. The two trade punches, with Abyss winning the bout, turning around and hitting a bulldog on Spiral from the top rope! Abyss crawls to the cover...1, 2...and kick out from Spiral.

MID MATCH NOTES​

Abyss looks around before picking Spiral up by the head slowly, and hitting a neckbreaker on him. Abyss quickly goes for the cover again. 1, 2, and another kick out from Spiral. Abyss looks angrily at the referee, before locking an STF on Spiral. The hold is cynched in and Abyss is really straining it as Spiral is writhing in agony. Spiral is trying to crawl to the ropes from the middle of the ring, but Abyss pulls him back. The referee is asking Spiral if he wants to continue as the crowd is hyping up. Spiral reaches his arm out and look to be going to tap, before he rolls over and has Abyss lying on his back with the hold still locked in. The referee counts Spiral's cover. 1, 2 and Abyss lets go of the hold and rolls out.

Abyss steps back and begins stomping on Spiral for a while, before lifting him up by the hair. But Spiral counters with a thud to the eye, and Spiral quickly rolls out of the ring and looks groggy on the outside.

Spiral heads over to the ring announcer area and shoves the announcer off of his chair, before snatching the chair up and slowly limping towards the ring. Abyss is still recovering from the eye poke, as Spiral rolls in the ring with the chair. As he moves up behind Abyss, the referee takes the chair off him and starts yelling at him. As the ref goes to put the chair on the outside, Spiral pulls some brass knuckles out of his pocket, and turns around but is met with a spinebuster from Abyss. Abyss throws the knucks out of the ring and rolls into the cover as the ref turns around. 1, 2, and Spiral kicks out just before 3.

Abyss looks a little angry before stomping on Spiral once, and then climbs up the turnbuckles. He reaches the top, and goes for a leg drop, but Spiral rolls out of way just in time. Abyss rolls around in pain a little, as both men are on the ground. The referee begins the 10 count. 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 but Spiral gets up a little groggily, and lines himself up against the opposite turnbuckle, and is yelling at Abyss to get up. As Abyss slowly gets up and turns around, Spiral runs at him and nails a spear on him. Spiral quickly goes for the cover. 1, 2 and Abyss kicks out. Spiral is ripping his hair out and looks furious as he gets up and grabs the referee by the collar.

The referee starts pointing to the WZ logo on his shirt and tells Spiral to get off him. Spiral eventually lets go and turns around to Abyss. Spiral stands on his throat and holds on to the ropes, but stands down after the DQ count reaches 4. Spiral rolls out of the ring, and places Abyss' head against the steps. Spiral walks back a few paces, before running at Abyss and smashing his head with a big boot. Spiral raises his arms in triumph as the crowd boos at him. Abyss is now bleeding above his right eye. Spiral lifts Abyss's head into the bottom rope from the outside, and wraps it around there and begins to choke him with the ropes. The referee doesn't count this time, but goes outside and tries to get Spiral off of Abyss.

Spiral eventually breaks the hold but pushes the referee away. Spiral slides in the ring and drags Abyss into the middle of the ring, and goes for the cover, but the referee is slow to get into the ring. He reaches the cover and starts counting. 1, 2 but Abyss gets a shoulder up. Spiral gets up and starts kicking the ropes and looks furious, before lifting Abyss up by the hair, and gets him in a headlock, ready for the Downward Spiral. But Abyss shoves Spiral back and as Spiral comes off the rebound, Abyss hits him with a belly to belly suplex. Abyss irish whips Spiral into the turnbuckle, and as Spiral rebounds off the buckles, Abyss hits a flapjack on him.

He moves into the cover. 1, 2 and Spiral kicks out. Abyss quickly places Spiral against the top turnbuckle and mounts him with the 10 punches. 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10! Abyss jumps down as Spiral slumps to the ground. Abyss steps grabs Spiral up again and hits a running dropkick on him. Abyss lifts him up and hits several clotheslines on Spiral as Spiral is out. Abyss lifts Spiral onto his shoulders, and dumps him over the top rope with a TKO. Abyss runs up the turnbuckle and goes to hit a mid air clothesline on Spiral to the outside, but Spiral hits a DDT mid air on Abyss, who smashes into the ground. Both men are laying down exhausted as the ref begins the 10 count. 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and Spiral slowly gets up and rolls into the ring, breaking up the count.

He rolls back out to Abyss and lifts his head up and smashes it into the side of the ring. Spiral lifts Abyss up and hits a Rock Bottom onto the floor outside! Spiral walks up to a fan and tells him "Did you see that? Huh?" and takes his popcorn and dumps it on the fan's face. He turns around and rolls Abyss into the ring. Spiral locks in an Australian Agony on Abyss (Edgecator.) Abyss is down for a while as the referee is asking him if he wants to continue. Abyss is shaking his head and he crawls to the ropes and grabs them. Spiral looks angry as he is forced to break the hold. Abyss slowly gets up and rests against the top rope. Spiral comes charging at him with a big boot, but Abyss ducks, and Spiral lands on the top rope on his nuts. Abyss hits a swinging neckbreaker from off the top rope on Spiral (Rob Conway's finisher.)

Abyss and Spiral are down before Abyss slowly crawls over to Spiral and lays an arm over his chest. 1, 2 and Spiral just kicks out. Abyss gets up and looks out at the crowd after a while, and limps over to Spiral and lifts him up and walks back and hits a chop block on Spiral, who falls to the ground again. Abyss has shaken off any pain now, and while still holding his head a little, he is gesturing for the crowd to get up as they are going wild.

THE ENDING​

Abyss is looking pumped as he lifts Spiral up and nails a DDT on him. Abyss runs back to the ropes and rebounds off them into a shining wizard on Spiral. He lifts Spiral up and puts him in a powerbomb position. As he lifts Spiral into the air, Spiral starts punching Abyss in the head, and jumps down and attempts a clothesline, but Abyss ducks and hits a neckbreaker on Spiral. Abyss quickly gets up a little groggy, and raises his hands to the crowd who are cheering him on. He lifts Spiral off the ground, and gets him on his shoulders, ready for the Black Hole Slam!

But before he can do anything, Jonny runs towards the ring and gets on the top rope. Abyss lets go of Spiral as he and the referee get in Jonny's face. Abyss smashes him with a fist, and as he turns around, a groggy Spiral nails a quick Downward Spiral on him. Spiral crawls into the cover as the crowd boos, and the referee turns around and begins counting. 1, 2, 3!

Here is your winner by pinfall, Downward Spiral!​

(Jonny gets in the ring holding his head and raises Spiral's hands in the air. They both start beating on Abyss, but St Joe and Kfowlkes hit the ring as Spiral and Jonny scurry outside and through the crowd. Joe and Kfowlkes glare at them and tell them to get back but Spiral and Jonny just laugh at them and walk away....)

 

[showtyme27]

Another Great match, I enjoyed it very much, and I love how no matter what they throw at DS he finds a way to come out on top. Very wel written and entertaining from start to finish, also I love matches were the seem evenly matched and at the very last second a manager or flunky comes out to help the heel get the tainted win, once again DS my hats off to you, and I truly hope you're considering doing this full time because I think you could create an incredible BT! show, and sorry it took so long but I finally started going through my favorite back shows and I didn't notice when you put this up sorry I missed out on it until now and good luck with WZMania.