Book This! - General Discussion

[JamJam]

LOL!

 

[GCB]

There isn't anything 'wrong' with the idea, Jam. It is original, nobody has done King as GM before ... If you write it well and come up with good ideas and solid reasons for what people do, you can do what you like. Zack Ryder can be GM if you do it well. Vince McMahon can be reduced to wrestling for the Divas Championship if you do it well. John Cena can be a 10-time champion if you do it well ... oh, hang on a mo!

However, your execution of it was awful - at the end. I repeat, like I did in my feedback, the show was good until that moment at the end. Then it was like, WTF! There were so many things wrong with the ending that it detracted from the idea - nobody is talking about Lawler as GM, they're all talking about the way you ended the show instead! It just needed writing better!

 

[The Bearded One]

Aim for 1000 words, give or take a couple of hundred.

OK, awesome. I got a little over 1100 words for it, not including commentary. Re-reading it, I like how it turned out. I'm not saying it's good or anything, but it's a lot better than I expected it to be.

 

[#1Peep]

Yeah Jam, just stick to it. I have read a lot of WWE 2011 threads, some elsewhere, and I don't understand why people want to reveal the Anon GM like in the first episode, so many people have done it. He's the perfect GM in my mind.

 

[The Best]

Just 2 more matches, a promo, and a contract signing, and then Raw will be up.

 

[TSG]

About to start on the second match of Elite, got a backstage segment, promo, and tourney match down already.

 

[Da Prophet]

Watching Armageddon 2007 with Orton vs Jericho to get some ideas of how they work inside the ring. This match is going to be a monster of a contest. And I'll be putting up the preview for TLC tomorrow with a backstory on each match and something else to hype the event.

 

[TSG]

Sweetness Proph.

 

[The Best]

1 1/2 matches plus a contract signing plus formatting left until Raw is live.

 

[Da Prophet]

Sweetness Proph.

It truly is.

 

[GrandSword]

Hi guys, so the second episode of Impact has been posted. At the moment my formatting of the show consists of as if it was being recapped by a wrestlezone reporter. And then accompanied by the website updates.

To be honest my idea is a combination of how successful Punk's "shoot" was and the fact that I preferred TNA in 2005 and the the last 2 ppvs of 2009, rather than what they have produced since Hogan has returned. The last month or so of TNA hasn't been too bad to be honest, but I thought I'd put my own spin on it.

I'm going for at the moment a really reader friendly approach. You can get the gist of what's happening in only a few minutes, because I think a lot of people don't want to read walls of text. I will definately move to fuller shows as I get the hang of my BT but I'm enjoying just putting TNA in a direction where if I had control of it, would go.

Cheers!

 

[The Best]

Raw is FINALLY up!!!! Enjoy

 

[#1Peep]

There will be a very 'super' promo at Extreme Rules...

Can't wait for the show Proph, a preview would be good as I need an explanation for a couple of the matches, Punk/Sheamus, Rhyno/Show.

Love the new wz GCB, just wondering - when did Hawkins and Ryder team back up in your thread?

 

[Da Prophet]

There will be a very 'super' promo at Extreme Rules...

Can't wait for the show Proph, a preview would be good as I need an explanation for a couple of the matches, Punk/Sheamus, Rhyno/Show.

Love the new wz GCB, just wondering - when did Hawkins and Ryder team back up in your thread?

The flash is coming, I knew those video packages were him. Called it ages ago.

I'll tell you about those two here, Punk and Sheamus both came into the WWE at the same time. Sheamus kicked Punk in the face, then cost Punk the fatal four way match to see who would face Justice at TLC. Punk is pissed off that someone is getting the better of him. Rhyno vs Big Show is like an extra match. Rhyno gored Big Show when he faced Orton. Reason was that Rhyno wanted to make people see him as a real competitor. Big Show wants payback.

 

[#1Peep]

Yeah, just needed that clarification.

 

[Da Prophet]

Just hit 3000 words with Orton vs Jericho, still yet to hit the insane ending set up I have planned.

 

[#1Peep]

How many matches you got left to write?

 

[Theo Mays]

Finished up some backstage segments, working on Sheamus/Sin Cara. I have the ending all planned out it is just getting to that point that is slowing me down haha.

 

[Da Prophet]

How many matches you got left to write?

1 and a half. Took a break from the match and now I plan to finish it off, get the backstage segments done and then start the ladder match. Got around 22,000 words for the PPV so far. Might get to 30,000 by the end of the show.

 

[JamJam]

Check out my thread as WWE Superstars makes it debut episode!

 

[Da Prophet]

Finished TLC last night, ladder match hit 4000 words or just below. Several big spots off ladders and what not. Editing it tomorrow and then posting it Sunday. Feels good to have it done.

 

[The Best]

Can't wait for it Proph.

 

[JamJam]

Can't wait for it Proph.

Hey Best, drop by for review mate?

 

[GrandSword]

Third summarised Impact is now available!

Moving towards the Destination X where after the ppv I'll have TNA set up the way I want it, to start posting full shows. Cheers for the support and advice so far guys.

 

[TSG]

Penned down Roode vs Cara for the next Elite. Just a mid-card filler match for the show, just to get the guys on TV and in a match, make them look good. Got some fun action though.