Da Prophet
Mid-Card Championship Winner
You don't need spoiler tags to build drama. It's annoying having to open bunch of tags for something so simple as the result of a match.
Book This! - General Discussion
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Silly Willy Nilly Vanilly in the Milly
Blame it on the rain
Hi, everybody. New to this thread, and am planning on beginning a BT here in the next couple of weeks.
Have my first few sets of shows ready; just need to script them out.
Have my first few sets of shows ready; just need to script them out.
@GS: Absolute nightmare to read on iPhone and iPad. Assuming it's problematic on other small screens. Don't forget a lot of people will be reading on these devices. After the third spoiler tag, it became a list of words in a long line - almost impossible to read. I can see what you were trying to do but maybe three spoilers maximum?
EDIT: Viewing the desktop version on iPhone, it looks better. It's just that the default for these forums is to be read on the mobile version and on there it looks dreadful to read.
EDIT: Viewing the desktop version on iPhone, it looks better. It's just that the default for these forums is to be read on the mobile version and on there it looks dreadful to read.
Da Prophet
Mid-Card Championship Winner
You're wasting time that could be spent on building WrestleMania 27, John Cena vs. Randy Orton and CM Punk vs. The Undertaker. No sleep for you.
Wrong. Wrong.
RAW been written. Just writing the Number 1 contender match for Barrett's WWE Championship at Elimination Chamber. Trying to add more spice to RAW right now.
Silly Willy Nilly Vanilly in the Milly
Blame it on the rain
Looking forward to it, GCB.
Da Prophet
Mid-Card Championship Winner
Wrong + wrong = right!
Skairipa Matrix
3 Time Elite Openweight Champion
Have one more match left to do before the first episode of WFE Overdrive is done.
Silly Willy Nilly Vanilly in the Milly
Blame it on the rain
SOMEBODY got it finally.Thanks, Joe. The Joe Mason? From Cardiff?
Quick question: since my fed consists of all created characters, is there a specific format I should follow for a "profile" for each of them? Meaning, what are the minimal details I need?
Thanks in advance.
Awesome_Miz
Proud LSN mentee
Oh so they are all created. No wonder I never heard of them.
Silly Willy Nilly Vanilly in the Milly
Blame it on the rain
Thanks Cult, much obliged. and lol, Mason ftw.
Joe Mason, THE Joe Mason, is a cracking good striker. Was rumours that SUFC were trying to sign him just before he went to Cardiff. Expecting him to become a big star at the Bluebirds, sorry, Redbirds, next season.
For your BT, it's an interesting first show to attempt. I've thought about adding one created guy into my BT but the idea of a complete created roster. Interesting to see how you go about it. As for your profiles - names, heights, weights and appearances for me. Things like their status can be shown in your actual storylines. We'll work it out. Good luck with it and welcome.
Agh Joe Mason scored against us in the Carling Cup final. To answer your question Joe I would put a profile for each of them consisting of, age,height,weight,birthplace,finisher,signature and if you want if their heel or face. By the way welcome to the forums.
Making you a Liverpool fan? Oh dear. Are you one of the armchair fans or one that goes to Anfield regularly?
I'm desperately trying to finish RAW ahead of Saturday when I go on holiday. It's close. Looking forward to reading SMACKDOWN, Peepington.
Skairipa Matrix
3 Time Elite Openweight Champion
Just got the first episode of WFE Overdrive up some feedback would be nice if anybody has a chance.
First thing that strikes me is the grammatical errors - things like commas not being used, capital letters and full stops, capital letters for i (I), your/you're, their/there/they're etc ... I know I come across like a teacher (probably because I am) but it really does put people off. If I can teach 10 and 11 year olds to write with grammatical correctness, then I expect it in a Book This thread. I'll read the rest of the show later but that is my initial reaction to it.
Skairipa Matrix
3 Time Elite Openweight Champion
First thing that strikes me is the grammatical errors - things like commas not being used, capital letters and full stops, capital letters for i (I), your/you're, their/there/they're etc ... I know I come across like a teacher (probably because I am) but it really does put people off. If I can teach 10 and 11 year olds to write with grammatical correctness, then I expect it in a Book This thread. I'll read the rest of the show later but that is my initial reaction to it.
That is always my downfall it never crosses my mind to do a grammar check before I post but im gonna try and improve on that from now on for sure. Thanks for checking out my work though GCB.
The grammar checker is fine for picking out the your/you're thing etc but it won't help with commas and complex sentences. If you're writing a long sentence:
(1) consider how many connectives you're using, i.e. Blah blah AND blah blah AND blah blah BECAUSE blah blah SO THAT blah blah AND blah blah UNTIL blah blah AND blah blah AND blah blah ... Not good! Break them down.
(2) If the sentence is long, you probably need a comma somewhere. The rules for them are logical enough though - lists, extra information, clauses.
Both of these really put me off, that's just me being me but I sense I'm not the only one. If it isn't grammatically correct, you immediately question the quality of it. Just my opinion.
I inherited a season ticket from my Dad back in 07. Been going the games ever since, I go to the odd away game as well. I hate armchair fans even though we have a lot of them.
No problem with you then. I teach in Rotherham and have four kids who support Liverpool in my class. Drives me mad. None of them have ever been to Anfield, I don't understand the point of supporting a team on the TV. Support a team you can go and watch!
Looking forward to it. I don't think I have ever read a thread about ROH.
Yeah, fair enough GCB but what about the people here in Australia that can't go to White Hart Lane, they have no choice!
That's part of why I chose it -- I wanted to offer something more unique.
Isn't there an Australian football league? I know for a fact there is a team called the Central Coast Mariners! I can sort of accept you being a 'follower' of Tottenham from Australia, you're not a 'supporter' though IMO. After all, tell me, why did you choose to support Spurs? If you were in Australia and supporting Sheffield United in League 1, I'd respect that. Anybody can support Spurs and smile when they win most weeks.
RAW is written. Just need to break it up and post it. Can't be bothered tonight though. Huge development coming, Prophet is not going to like it.
