For the New Guys

[GI Cake]

Hey gang,

Saddle on up and/or pop a squat and let good ole' Pancake whisper something in yo ear for a spell. I want to start giving out some feedback, but at this point in my time there's only so much I can tell the veterans and the guys that have actually beaten me in RP's.

However, I do want to give feedback and actually help out some people who are still relatively new to RP'ing or testing out a new character. Just post here and I'll do one of few things.

1. Feedback on your latest RP
2. My thoughts on your character
3. What I think you're doing right with your character
4. What I think you're doing wrong with your character.
5. Rehydrate your rectum.

The only prerequisite is you have to be 6 months or less into your new character.

 

[CyberPunk]

You've covered the first thing for me, in fact kinda 2nd as well. What I've been really looking for is the 3rd and 4th thing (write and wrong) outside the realm of my last RP (of course, it depends on if you have enough time). As far as the 5th goes, I am not sure that's necessary.