XWE - 1st part of first show please review

[Shawn Sousa]

1st Show

January 1, 2007
ARCO Arena
Los Angles, California
15, 000 in attendance

A video package plays, showing the destruction of the WWE and TNA by XWE. It shows how the best and brightest stars of both of these shows joined the XWE company. It also shows the humble beginnings of XWE, and how it became huge. As the camera pans around the arena, we can see the people at the ARCO arena going wild.

JR: Welcome everybody to Monday Night Meltdown, The premier show of XWE, Xtreme Wrestling Entertainment.
King: And what a show we have tonight.
JR: We have three stops before our January PPV, New Year’s Bash, and I can’t wait for that PPV, with its huge 15 man battle royal!
King: Lets worry about tonight’s Meltdown first, and what a Meltdown it is going to be. We have a title match, and a match for #1 contendership for the Showstopper title.
JR: But first, Kane has something to say.

Kane’s music hits.

King: Here he is now.

Kane comes to the ring, and Lillian Garcia is already there.

Garcia: Please Welcome, the Big Red Machine, Kane!

Kane rips the microphone out of her hands. A “Kane” chant is started by the fans. When he came out, he got a huge pop from the crowd.

Kane: Shut up! I don’t need you stupid chants, what I need is a title!

Crowd boos when Kane told them to shut up.

Kane: Now tonight, I have a non title match with Abyss, and it is my perfect chance to prove myself enough for a title shot. Now I have something to say about Abyss. He is nothing but a cheap knock off. Look at Mankind.

A picture of Mankind appears on the TitanTron when Kane gestures to it.

Kane: Now look at Abyss

Now a picture of Abyss appears, right next to the picture of Mankind.

Kane: See the family resemblance? That’s why I say Mankind should join me in destroying Abyss. We can even share the Hardcore title! I don’t care, anything for us to annihilate the rip off that is Abyss.

Mankind’s music hits.

JR: He’s here! Mankind’s here! What will happen now?

Mankind comes to the ring. Kane offers him the microphone and he takes it.

Mankind: You’re completely right. Abyss is using me. And I don’t like it when people use me. I mean, Mr. Socko and I don’t like it when people use us.

Huge pop from crowd when Mankind puts on Mr. Socko.

Mankind: Now, lets get him together, Kane.

They head out to backstage, Suddenly, Abyss’s music hits, and the crowd goes wild.

JR: It’s the monster Abyss! He’s here!

James Mitchell comes out with Abyss. Half the crowd cheers, half the crowed boos. Abyss knocks Mankind over the head with the Hardcore title. Then Mitchell speaks to Abyss.

Mitchell: Abyss, doomsday Now!
JR: He’s hit the detonation device!
King: Oh my god!

Abyss hits a Black Hole Slam on Kane. He then leans down to say something to Mankind, Suddenly; Mankind sticks his hand down Abyss’s throat, with the Mandible Claw.

JR: Mandible Claw!
King: That has to be the most disgusting move in wrestling, along with the Stink Face.

Mankind won’t let Abyss go. Mitchell slams Mankind over the head with a chair, then Abyss and Mitchell leave together.

JR: What an amazing turn of events! We’ll have out first match after these messages.

Commercial Break

EDIT-Back from the break, we see Abyss and James Mitchell in General Manager Eric Bichoff’s office.

Mitchell: I can’t believe this! The Hardcore Champion should not be treated in this way! Bichoff: Listen, I know. I also know you want to put Kane and Mankind out of business, it would be in a Hardcore match.
Mitchell: Of course!
Bichoff: But the only way we can have Hardcore match is too have the hardcore title on the line so that’s what we’re going to do. Next week, it will be Abyss vs Kane in a hardcore match for the Hardcore title. But you’re going to win, right?

Bichoff slams the door in their faces. As we hear him chuckling, Eric Young’s music hits.

Chimel: Our first match is to determine who will be the #1 contender for the Showstopper title, and will be contested under one fall rules. The first competitor, now residing in an undisclosed location, weighing in at 225 pounds, Eric Young!
A “Don’t Fire Eric” chant is started by the fans.

JR: I love this kid’s style, I hope he wins tonight’s match.
King: Remember, we’re supposed to be objective.
Chimel: And his opponent, from the deep blue sea, weighing 180 pounds Shark Boy.

He comes out to a huge pop from the crowd.

JR: Shark Boy is a cult favorite here on XWE
King: He sure is Ross

Match One: #1 contendership for the Showstopper title – Eric Young vs Shark Boy

They lock up in the center of the ring, with Young bringing Shark Boy to the floor with a neck breaker. He then locks in a reverse chin lock, head scissors by Shark Boy to break the hold. Shark Boy then grabs Young in a position like the back cracker, except from the side. He connects with this side back cracker of his.

JR: What a high impact move!

Shark Boy then goes to the top, and hits the Whisper in the Wind. He then hits a lionsault, but Young gets his knees up.

King: What a reversal!

Young with a snap mare, and then a headlock. Shark Boy fights his way to a vertical base, and whips Young into the ropes, goes for a clothesline, Young ducks, and continues to run. He bounces off the ropes again, and hits a dropkick. He goes to the top and hits a flip legdrop. He pins
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Kickout!
Shark Boy pos up and whips Young into the corner, he goes for the Deep Sea Drop, but it is reversed by Young into a top rope powerbomb. Pin
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Kickout!
Young is surprised and angry that Shark Boy kicked out. The crowd went wild when he kicked out.

JR: He kicked out! Shark Boy kicked out!

Young whips Shark Boy into a corner, goes for a superplex, it is reversed into a Deep Sea Drop. Pin
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JR: Shark Boy wins!
Chimel: The winner of this match, and new #1 contender for the Showstopper title, Shark Boy!

JR: He did it; I knew he could do it.

As Shark Boy celebrates, Petey William’s music comes on. He comes out, title slug over his shoulder.

King: What’s the showstopper champion doing here?

Petey takes the microphone from Chimel

Petey: I’m here to personally congratulate Shark Boy on winning the #1 contendership for this title. Now, shake my hand.

Petey extends his hand Shark Boy takes it, Petey kicks him in the gut, and nails a Canadian Destroyer. He stands over Shark Boy with his title in his hand, as the crowd boos him.

JR: What a despicable act by Petey Williams. I hope Shark Boy gets payback and takes his title.
King: And he’s going to stay in that ring, because next it’s a match for the Showstopper title. It is Petey Williams vs Rey Mysterio, next.

Commercial Break​

 

[Shawn Sousa]

anyone? i wont post the rest of teh show unless someone comments on it

 

[Shawn Sousa]

please?

 

[Thizz22]

I will admit this was a pretty good show. I'd like to see more/ Is there more coming?

 

[Uncle Sam]

If I were you, I'd post the entire show in one go. Not saying it's a bad show, because what you've got now is pretty good.

 

[Shawn Sousa]

ill post the complete show today

 

[Shawn Sousa]

JR: Were back, and here we go with the Showstopper title match!
Chimel: The following match is scheduled for one fall, and is for the Showstopper title. In the ring, from Windsor, Ontario, Canada, weighing 180 pounds, he is the Showstopper champion, Petey Williams.

JR: I believe that this is a man of one move: The Canadian Destroyer.
King: And what a move that is!

The crowd boos Williams as he is announced, but goes wild when “Booyaka 619” hits.

Chimel: And his opponent from San Diego, California, weighing 165 pounds, Rey Mysterio!

JR: This is guaranteed to be a huge match. I mean, it is Petey Williams vs Rey Mysterio. Could it get any better?

Jimmy Wang Yang’s music starts to play.

King: I think it just did.

Jimmy heads to the ring with a microphone, but he stops just short of the ring.

Jimmy: Everybody’s favorite redneck is here in LA! YEE HAW!

The crowd cheers.

Jimmy: Now, do I have some good news for you. Eric Bichoff just informed me that I can be the 3rd competitor of this match, so, from the south, weighing 205 pounds, Everybody’s favorite redneck, Jimmy Wang Yang!

Match Two: Showstopper title – Petey Williams © vs Rey Mysterio vs Jimmy Wang Yang

Yang runs into the ring and knocks down both of his opponents as the bell rings. Rey stays down as Yang hits a DDT on Williams. Rey gets up, and drop toe holds Jimmy, whose neck gets caught up on the bottom rope. Hey then hits a hurricanrana on Williams. He then goes to the top, and leg drops Jimmy, choking him with the rope his neck was on.

JR: What a move

Rey dropkicks Williams and pins Jimmy

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Rey goes to get up, but Jimmy holds on to his leg, and locks in a leg lock, which is broken up by Williams. Williams whips Jimmy into a corner, places him upside down in the corner, and steps on his groin. Ret jumps onto the second rope, and connects with a big back body drop from the second rope.

King: What a huge move from a small superstar.

Pin
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kickout when Jimmy breaks it by hitting a leg drop from the top rope. Jimmy connects with a double flip neckbreaker on his opponents, goes to the top, and hits a shooting star press which hits both of them at the same time. Jimmy pins Petey
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Kickout! And Jimmy cant believe it, and neither can the crowd. He strats to talk to the ref, but Rey trips him, knocking him and the ref down. Petey slides out of the ring and gets a chair.

JR: What’s he going to do with that?

Petey goes to hit Rey with it, but Rey ducks under the chair and tehn dropkicks the chair into Petey’s face. Meanwhile, Jimmy, after being tripped by Rey, fell into the 619 poition on the second rope. Rey looks at Jimmy, and then connects with a 619.

King: That’s it! Rey’s the champ!

Rey wakes up the ref, and goes down to pin Petey. The ref, who is still groggy, doesn’t see Petey low blow Rey. He pins Rey with an inside cradle.
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King: He stole a victory!
JR: Rey should be the champion!

Petey celebrates as the crowd boos and as he celebrates with the title the ref gave to him.

Chimel: The winner of this match, and still XWE Showstopper Champion, Petey Williams!

JR: This is unbelievable!

We cut to Bichoff’s office, where MR. Kennedy is talking to the GM.

Kennedy: I want a damn title shot! Damn it !
Bichoff: Your going to have to damn prove your self.
Kennedy: Damn
Bichoff: I’ll tell you what, tonight you have a non title match with the International champion, Rob Van Dam. If you win, I’ll give you a title shot.
Kennedy: Thank you.

He walks away as JR voice comes on.

JR: Mr. Kennedy vs RVD, next.

Commercial Break

 

[Shawn Sousa]

JR: Were back and now its time for a huge match. I can’t wait to see if Mr. Kennedy will get a title shot!
King: Were going to find out next.

“Fury of the Strom” plays and RVD comes to a moderate pop.

Chimel: Coming to the ring. From Battle Creek, Michigan, weighing 235 pounds, he is the Internation Champion, Rob Van Dam!

When RVD does the thumb thing, everyone in the crowd does it as well. Then “Kennedy” hits as Mr. Kennedy comes out.

Chimel: And the man who wont let me do my job, Mr…

Kennedy rips the microphone out of Chimels hand and throws it down. He then does his signature entrance.

Kennedy: Now lets do this right. Now in the ring, future International Champion, Hailing from Green Bay Wisconsin, weighing a mean, lean 243 pounds. Mrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!

Pause

Kennedy: Kennnedddyyyyy!

Dramatic pause as he goes to the top.

Kennedy: Kennneeeeddddyyyy!

RVD runs into the ring and chokes Kennedy with the microphone cord. The bell rings.

Match Three: RVD vs Mr. Kennedy – Not for International Title.

RVD kicks the hell out of Kennedy. Kennedy tries to battle back, but RVD keeps kicking him, eventually hitting a jumping spin kick, knocking Kennedy down. He goes to the top! Split leg moonsault. Pin
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RVD picks Kennedy up, punches, Kennedy reverses, punch, punch, punch, kick to the gut. Kennedy connects with a swinging neck breaker. Kennedy starts taunting RVD. The crowd boos.

JR: That cocky bastard

Kennedy hits a flip leg drop on RVD. He then does the RVD thumb thing. The crowd boos again. Kennedy pick RVD up, and then gets him in a powerbomb position, But it is revered into a DDT. Then huge dropkick, and Kennedy sits down in a corner. RVD goes the top, Van Terminator! He goes to the top again! Five star frog splash! No! Kennedy got his knees up. Pin
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Kennedy with a DDT, he goes to the top, RVD shakes the ropes, and Kennedy falls groin first. RVD goes to the top for the 10 punches, but Kennedy reverses a punch and puts RVD onto his shoulders

King: Oh my God, here we go!

Green Bay Plunge! Pin
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JR: Kennedy’s going to win!
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King: And Kennedy gets a title match!

“I’m Back” hits and the crowd boos. Bichoff comes out to talk to Kennedy.

Bichoff: Now I was deciding on where your title match will be, and I have decided. It will be in 3 weeks, at our January PPV, New Year’s Bash!
JR: That’s great for Kennedy!

They both leave the stage together. They are followed around by boos.

King: These people don’t like Kennedy and neither do I.
JR: But you have to admit, that kid has some major skill in the ring.
King: That’s right, but next, it is Abyss vs Kane, and Kane is out for blood.
JR: Abyss vs Kane, next

Commercial Break

 

[Juddagieg]

That was rubbish. The matches were average, but the historyat the start was just awful, really try to put more effort into it. Also I dont feel you are being that creative as there isnt much of a storyline given, nor leads for a truly ambitious feud. try involve more superstars and get something going then. The abyss kane thing is below average as a feud, as why would Kane care that Abyss is a copy of mankind? Give him more reason to want the hardcore championship.