My RP was over 4,500 words. I had to take something out for creative's sake. There will be a lot of really long RPs this round and the last thing I want is for any of them to get burnt out reading my RP. Sadly the sermon was one of a few things I could afford to take out. The church scene was about Tony & the eulogy.
That's where we disagree. I took them out because they weren't needed. They only padded the word count. There will be more spirituality in future RPs, don't worry.
I was going for a smart ass Italia vibe.
True but like I said that wasn't where I wanted to go with thus particular church scene.
I'm sorry you didn't like the finished product but there is no way this RP is in any way mediocre.
There's still spirituality in the form of my favorite Christian song. Also I write to please everyone and I know for a fact there's at least one person that doesn't care for it.