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[Request/Offer] Feedback Thread

Sexual Objectification Panda said:
By the way, Showtime, just an addendum to my feedback:

I feel like if the liquor store gag was stretched out, and not back to back to back to back to back, it could have been great. Maybe with each time, Noah grows more suspicious of the alcohol, before finally drinking and blacking out. Maybe even with the final "scene" Noah pours some alcohol and just passes out in the locker room. Something like that would have been really damn funny.

Also, thanks K Wen 3V! Really appreciate it, and it does help quite a bit brother.
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The whole RP was a spur of the moment. I was working on something else that I felt was going nowhere and threw this together. I was out of gas by the time I got to 20 scenes and I just wanted it to end. I thought the liquor scenes may be funny because there were so many stores so close by, and it was quick to copy and paste, but I know that part dragged down my RP. If I could go back I'd make two minor changes to that section.

Thanks a lot of the feedback. Outside chance I'll be able to get you feedback tonight, but I will definitely get you something by Sunday.
 
Starting feedback now but as two people have mentioned the under his breath thing. Yup he'd think it but I wanted to get it across and as it's not a Jeff Hardy RP I couldn't do thoughts.
 
Creative should give feedback on RPs so we know what to do to improve.

Afterall it's their opinion that matters.
 
Lee said:
Creative should give feedback on RPs so we know what to do to improve.

Afterall it's their opinion that matters.
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I agree. I can understand not wanting to give feedback to current matches, but there's no reason why creative can't critique matches that have already been voted on.
 
Even if it's just once in a while, especially with the build-up to KC.
 
I'll third that. I think it helps everyone fine tune their RPs if they know there's something in their writing style that isn't working, or if they went for a comedy angle and it fell flat...Things like that.
 
As always, feedback is appreciated. I'll be attempting to get everyone done this round, same as last round.
 
Goal is to try n get everybody feedback this round, but I will for sure get anybody that gives me feedback this round
 
I'll be posting my RP in the next few hours, I believe. As usual, I will be doing feedback for everyone, except opponents/feuds, so keep an eye out for that.

I also love receiving feedback...so...yeah.
 
My RP is up, so as always, there will be feedback coming up for pretty much everyone, minus the open challenge RPs, Theron, and Dr. Zeus.

I am always open to getting feedback as well, and try to rep everyone.
 
I'll do feedback for anyone who gives me some (NB you'll need to read daves first rp).
 
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